6รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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เขียนรีวิว
it's pretty OK, just the grammar there are quite a few mistakes but it's still readable
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it was good but not good enough to read again if you make the chapter design and writing quality better then this story would be great. this fic has some potential
To lazy to put tags or write a synopsis means im to lazy to read this, if you cant even put in the effort for what is effectively a blurb then i dont see you putting in the effort for the actual story
The Mc is to drain dead for my own tastes I mean why did he possibly think it could ever be a good idea to sell guns and create guns in the world.
it's pretty OK, just the grammar there are quite a few mistakes but it's still readable
5 stars for no harem⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 5 stars for no harem⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 5 stars for no harem⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 5 stars for no harem⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 5 stars for no harem⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 5 stars for no harem⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 5 stars for no harem⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 5 stars for no harem⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
it was good but not good enough to read again if you make the chapter design and writing quality better then this story would be great. this fic has some potential
To lazy to put tags or write a synopsis means im to lazy to read this, if you cant even put in the effort for what is effectively a blurb then i dont see you putting in the effort for the actual story
The Mc is to drain dead for my own tastes I mean why did he possibly think it could ever be a good idea to sell guns and create guns in the world.