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Vainglory0

I am feeling lazy today so I will keep it short. Good novel. Good potential. Go read. The only thing I want to nitpick about is the character descriptions. I still have no idea how the MC or those around him look except for the fact the MC is supposed to be handsome. No hair color, no eye color. Only mentions of his awesome jawline. So author, pls add descriptions for all the characters and make an auxiliary chap about it or something seeing as how the novel is already 40+ chaps in i suppose that would be a better solution.

LV 13

Odayaka

as far as I have read, the plot is quite interesting, there were a few errors here and there but i could easily understand what the author wants to convey. I am guessing this novel is revolved around soul expect of power system....

LV 14

Lazy_Pen_Master

first of all, i want to say is that, the start of book is very thrilling. next thing to note is the character developement and the emotional rollercoaster. if you want a novel with good character development which focuses on emotional attachments, this novel. is for you. this also contain mystery, but not to the point where you feel frustrated. from what iIhsbe read till now, authors just needs to focus on punctuation and the only thing holding back the quality of book will vanish. i wish author all the best for success of this book.