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Izan, a Spanish-japanese boy who lives with his mother and sister in the heart of Valencia plays for the valencia academy since he could remember. As life fucks as all,Izan found himself being laid off by his club for being talentless.

Izan in a fit of rage runs around his local pitch(Legit who the fuck trains when he's angry). As fate would have it,Izan gets struck by lightning which gives him a system.

Izan with the system embarks on a journey to becoming 'THE' god of football

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1. set in post messi-ronaldo dominant era.[2022.post messi-ronaldo peak era in europe]

2. Real world likeness.

3. 1500-2000 words on average


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Also all right reserved for the companies and teams and also players I use in the novel since I don't know how image rights work and I'm too lazy to search it up on bing- , I mean google

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    Art233

    hi author here sorry for the shameless review buti hope you guys enjoy it and rate it for me and any feedback is appreciated thanks

    7mth
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Sarah_Donkor

    Saw the number of chapter so i wasn't tempted to read but when i gave it a try. It wasnt that bad. Its actually pretty good. And I see it going somewhere If it doesnt deviate

    7mth
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Tadeas_Manzel

    Hello, review time. first of all i usually writte review, if i writte one, between 50-150 chapters not so early, but as i read authors notice of it will help hus story i will do so. as this story should have attention of readers, at least those who love football. so, i do in seriousness: writting quality: 5* - even if you can find there some grammar wrongdoings, they are so little or not so important that you will have any problem to understand story or it will not annoy you in any way. author even stopped using weeks to his aging, and puting only age there, so there are no more confusion, so i dont find needs to lower rating there. . Story development: 5* story is focused on football, which i consider right thing to do, mean there arent to many neccesary part pf story which would be usseless a little of slice of life there is is fine as its in good chemistry with the football part of story. even his girlfriend (not officialy yet) and his mon has some show up but not to much that it would postpone the story, which i find with great appreciation, so its all good. only note which i find a bit a pity is, POV of others persons. what i mean, for example commentator of matches are done well and trainers too, occasionaly spectators too, that is all well. but to side story for example there is mentioned clubs like chealsea, barca, real are curious about MC, well if its true, why not put some managers talk out there, or some club happening in backstage out of Izan knowing it, well just thats is my feeling, but overall story is developing in fine and good way, so thumbs up. btw you can even see author, how he is getting better, mb not in each chapter but when you see start of story and see ch.20+ for example i can see the developement of author himself (positively) well next. . Character design: 5*. Izan is good boy for me, he, he isnt stupid, but clever. but now what i found somehow surprised author put that he is good in study which i am surprised, not that those who do atletics ar edimb but doing top of class is rlly rare. but i dont mind it, as he as character rlly do things as smartass, he rlly upping his stats in overall way which is not bad to do, just i already mentioned in some comments, he should also focus on some stat where he will be original and one of the best in team, for example 30 percent of his point to give always to this stat (passing, dribling, avaranes whatever choosen) and 70 percent giving to his overall grow up, but thats just how i feel he should do, i am not author so whatever :D you will rlly like Izan anyway. other characters, well i think they are put there, and i dont feel like they have to small time of show up, by me its in optimal way. next up. . updating stability: for now i will give 5*, story is new and is updated rlly well i just hope author will keep it up a d dont drop it. . world background: 4* true be told, apart that its mentioned its post messi and ronaldo era, we dont know anything about happenings in the world at all, not that we need it right now, but i cant give full rate here, as there were a lot of great guys in football, and we dont even know if we see them in story as of now, even as a managers for example, Pavel Nedvěd, star of Lazio, after Juventus who went do job for his club as manager in Juventus, i know i mention someone from my country but i put it as example, but story is in early stage mb we will see Manager Messi, Ronaldo, Cole or others in it in future. who know :D so thats only stat where i lower rating for story. . Overall story is great and even if author go premium, i plan to read it, and in my clear conscience i can recomend this story for reading. i personaly when i have 3 power stones rdy i always give 1 to this story alongside two others i rlly like to read curently. So thanks Author for your work, for story you showing up, and pleas dont drop it.

    6mth
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Abdullah_Aliyu

    really good story and please author continue

    7mth
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    _MaYn_

    It's good, sometimes author misplaced details and in first chapter everything was compiled into a paragraph, but later on it was easy to read with good spacing although story was good from the start, but author should slow his growth as at 15 years he's called best player of valencia, which seems bit too much unrealistic. but i like the story, hope author continues it 300+ chapters

    3d
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    But
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    The author makes the main character hold onto stat points so he can make everything harder and more frustrating for the mc. Literally ruined the entire novel every conflict that he has, could easily been solved by distributing his stat points. It’s just a boring read and an easy opt out by the author.

    7d
    ดู 4 การตอบกลับ
    Leo_GAming

    Release More chapters as soon as possible . Hdnejeosj37eh3g ueug3uheb3 iw93 4hdir rue urv. Uie73. Ye73b ue 3bee 4 b7r 4uej73hy3vheu3.eu4 8e3bb 7evwwyv3u73bfyiv3y3bhuggfw 7ev3uw cyebyv eyebi. Yw eywije Heuer gevywi83 yeo3 ueudijy7hece 7e ru eu r ur ur rub

    1mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    NashP7
    LV 14 Badge

    Overall this is a lot of fun to read, if you enjoy sports novels then this is definitely for you. Its great seeing Izan develop as a player and move up the ranks at Valencia. Theres also a good family dynamic, they genuinely care about each other. Some of the great moments are when his mum gets chances to watch him perform in front of packed out stadiums and seeing how proud she is. Feels like the author is also genuine fan of football too, which you can tell as you read. There’s a couple spelling mistakes buts it’s really not a big deal, highly recommend checking this out!

    1mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    kolixz

    love this [img=coins][img=coins] gooddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

    1mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Thor_thor

    The chapters are too small Can you please update it like 5 chapters a day?[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] The novel is one of the best football novel if not the best football novel in the world❤️👌👌👌👌

    2mth
    ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
    Sarah_Donkor

    Now I'm enjoying it and i hope he doesn't drop it

    6mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Slothfulmonk

    there no need to any mc to have Japanese blood brotha world not turn around Japan or usa or Korea or China just make him from Belgium or Netherlands ,Ghana anywhere else this is not anime

    15d
    ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
    รุ่นล่าสุด:
    Chapter 89: Prelude To The Atletico Madrid Game 1 hours ago

    จำนวน 0 : Auxiliary Volume

    1. Timeline(explanation) 5 months ago

    จำนวน 2 : Volume 2 [World of football]

    1. 29
      1 year 6 months ago
    2. 30
      Statement Made 6 months ago
    3. 31
      Potential 6 months ago
    4. 32
      A Cameo Of Greatness 6 months ago
    5. 33
      Post-Cameo 5 months ago
    6. 34
      Matchday 5 months ago
    7. 35
      Going up against Sergio Ramos 5 months ago
    8. 36
      Aftermath 5 months ago
    9. 37
      Pre-season in Japan 4 months ago
    10. 38
      Atmosphere 4 months ago
    11. 39
      He's A Baller 4 months ago
    12. 40
      Solo leve- uh,goal 4 months ago
    13. 41
      Strengths 4 months ago
    14. 42
      Us and them 4 months ago
    15. 43
      Prelude to Match against Tottenham hotspur 4 months ago
    16. 44
      Tottenham Hotspur [1] 4 months ago
    17. 45
      Tottenham Hotspur [2]:Masterclass 4 months ago
    18. 46
      Time-off 1 months ago
    19. 47
      Prelude to first game and Concerns 1 months ago
    20. 48
      Dull 1 months ago
    21. 49
      Orchestrator 1 months ago
    22. 50
      Panic at the airport 1 months ago
    23. 51
      A Visit 1 months ago
    24. 52
      No.21, Izan Hernandéz 1 months ago
    25. 53
      Malicia saves the day 1 months ago
    26. 54
      The News 1 months ago
    27. 55
      Who called? 1 months ago
    28. 56
      Pietro 1 months ago
    29. 57
      The Provider 1 months ago
    30. 58
      Call Me The Flash 1 months ago
    31. 59
      Unplayable 22 days ago
    32. 60
      Mi Familia 21 days ago
    33. 61
      Life Goals 21 days ago
    34. 62
      Clutch player 21 days ago
    35. 63
      Who called? Ep[2] 21 days ago
    36. 64
      La roja 19 days ago
    37. 65
      La Roja[2] 16 days ago
    38. 66
      Not your regular 16 days ago
    39. 67
      New Upgrades. 15 days ago
    40. 68
      Madrid 14 days ago
    41. 69
      Bonding 14 days ago
    42. 70
      I'll let you loose 13 days ago
    43. 71
      Prelude to the game 13 days ago
    44. 72
      Offensive Prowess 12 days ago
    45. 73
      This Is Football 11 days ago
    46. 74
      Finally, 10 days ago
    47. 75
      Finally Let loose 9 days ago
    48. 76
      Spain's New Man 8 days ago
    49. 77
      Que Viva Espana 7 days ago
    50. 78
      Currywurst and pretzels 7 days ago
    51. 79
      To the Olympiastadion 6 days ago
    52. 80
      Shots Traded 5 days ago
    53. 81
      A Tale Of Two Giants 5 days ago
    54. 82
      Boy In A Den Of Men 5 days ago
    55. 83
      He's A Real Problem 4 days ago
    56. 84
      Rising Star 3 days ago
    57. 85
      Meeting with Adidas 2 days ago
    58. 86
      Done deal 2 days ago
    59. 87
      Valencia CF 1 days ago

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