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Writing is great, concept itself is a bit overdone, but done very well, in a way that doesn't feel repetitive. But what I truly want to focus on is the main character. Holy hell, this is one of the most insanely well written main characters I have EVER read. I admit, when I started reading the book I wasnt a huge fan of the MC, I thought he was wimpy and naive. But I finally was forced to see the way he truly is, and this is the first time EVER reading a book, that I have truly felt terrified at the sheer idea of a "morally good" character, to the point I physically shiver IRL. The last time I felt this offput and uneasy at a character was realing "Soul of negary" The idea, the execution, my god... I honestly could say as much as id want to and never capture that moment. Author, you are talented as f*** and im seriously proud to be enjoying this book before it gets way higher on rankings.
Honestly this book is good. I have seen this novel many times but I haven't bothered to read it, because the synopsis is quite plain and does not even show a fraction of this novel's potential. The novel isn't too draggy/wordy and for people who enjoy gacha, maybe this novel may be quite exciting for them. Don't expect much relationship with the gacha characters though.
so i finally able to Download discord so can i pls the link so i can join. also ive been waiting and waiting on ur gacha book u made so im gonna come and ask are u done making chapters dor cuz i hope not i love rereading it
Decent read if you've nothing left to read - I read up to 75, so keep that in mind for below. The writing quality is great - not much yapping, good grammar, and not many if any issues I noticed (up to ch. 24 on here, up to 75 elsewhere) The story development/world background itself is nice, despite being overused and beyond cliche at this point the author makes it work well. Character design... is what killed it for me. His summons are great, definitely the highlight of the novel and a breath of fresh air, they have a brain and use it well. The FMC (non-summon) is essentially a jade beauty. The MC is the crux of this novel, he has a hero complex & beyond naive. He's a genius in the first life (though EQ of a toddler), saved tons of lives and got screwed due to being ill/bedridden from age 10 to 25. But now he has power! So he, or his summons, are powerful enough to do what he wants so can enact his cliche righteousness anywhere he sees his past self in and "change their fate". can't comment much on stability as I read thru these chapters in about 2 hours.
I actually really love this book so far. It’s a absolutely amazing.. idk what else to say, this is honestly so good bro im addicted.
it was all good but....... u dropped it i am never purchasing novel from your writing ever again
The novel is really good.the Mc is a bit childish but I guess as the story progresses he will become mature.
I love the concept man but I can't read this at all, with how he's thinking that's so f****** cringe, feels like 3 yrs old talking about punishing all the bad guys in the wold. World background meh we don't know how many continent in this world . and just not make him too op he remove his gatcha for people like duh he has many resources to upgrade to primeval in his pocket demention but because he has 3 yrs old braincell he trust other people he didn't summon and he giving away free resources bruh. Harem? bland like some other novel here which the girl fall to the guy, after 5 days all adventure rias fall to aleron with his 3 yrs old mindser bruh.
Author, I liked the story, but if I were to give my own opinion, you might have made a simple mistake. This error is related to the identity of the main character. At the beginning of the story, you mention that the main character has helped millions of people with his invention, and this is an indication that he is a genius.But his personality and his genius background are irrelevant. Of course, each person's characters are different, but if a person's IQ is high enough, they understand human nature much better, and the main character does not fit this description. Yes, the main character cannot go out due to his illness, he rarely talks to people, etc. But that's no excuse, because the main character can read books and learn a thing or two about people from books, and what's even more illogical is that the main character was already betrayed twice at the beginning of the story, but that didn't change him at all. Of course, I'm not saying he should be an enemy of humanity, but couldn't he be a little more careful? I think the main character's past doesn't match his personality. It would be better if you describe him as a child with a very rare disease who had to stay in the hospital all the time, and as someone who died during a treatment process and experienced all of this. Otherwise, the character's past doesn't match his personality. For example, it would be unreasonable for him to attract slaves to his domain. It happened because he doesn't actually know the story of that race. It's ridiculous for the man passing by to believe what he says because he can't confirm whether what he says is true. Maybe if the people there are really guilty? As I said, a 10-year-old may be smart enough to make an invention that will save millions, but smart people can't be that naive because they can see most things.
author, just focus on one book or atleast keep a stable update in every book [img=angry]
the novel is good with an op system and good world background and the mc is kind funny but there something I don't understand in the story like what is the mc appearance is he ugly or handsome the author explain every male characters appearance as handsome but does not explain mc appearance.
my gacha addiction fw with this fr fr. i loved how detailed the system is and overall, its just rlly balanced.
i thought the power system was messed up but. ........ he has equal if not stronger enemies against him I just hope Author doesn't do that regular clitch where his lover or close friend just for the sake of story thus make him & his friend powerful enough to survive against such tragedy ( I hope author listen to my rhis silly request 🥰❤🥲)
This book has great POTENTIAL I'MMA looking forward to seeing it grow 👍❤ KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AUTHOR-SAN
I really don't know how to feel about this, story moves at lightning speed which for some can be a good thing for me personally it depends. power levels scale way to quick for me, i thought the exceed rank was supposed to be few and far between but within like 60 chapters there have been dozens of them. which makes no sense considering it was stated at the start that both the main empires only had a few, idk story just lacks consistency with its information and moves to quick for me give it a try I guess
What a cover! A pure clickbait worthy that even I had to stop for a few seconds to stare. Shall start reading soon! Good luck! What a cover! A pure clickbait worthy that even I had to stop for a few seconds to stare. Shall start reading soon! Good luck!
I am at chapter 20 and the mc is becoming too op very fast. I don't mind though the story is looking good for now. It's rather refreshing. I recommend giving this book atleast the starting chapters that I read were good.
Reading the reader's review i can tell its gonna be F**king awesome so I'm gonna save it for now and read it when it has 400 chapters or more so here's the (5 STAR ⭐ RATING AUTHOR) stay safe & healthy to make it up to 400 chapters i wish you good luck 😇🔥
honestly it's a great book and i'm enjoying it alot , but mc's childish nature at certain parts of the story annoys me too much to give it 5 stars [img=disgusted] , that's the only flaw i see in this book , other than that this book is perfection 🤌[img=strong]
MC might not be to my liking due to being too good but I absolutely loved the story, world building as well as the power. keep it up. I would suggest adding a few more summons but I also know that there are already too many , you shouldn't have added those bunch of Xianxia ones to be honest but again you can just let a few fade in background like to protect some particular place or stuff and bring them back OP later or something. Anyways I would definitely read it more so keep updating, you're doing a great work.
I am back after leaving my first 5 star review ,I dont regret it this story keeps getting better as you go further .Great work Aurther,u really made the story I always wanted to read.
I havent read the story but Author thank you dont drop or mess up this book I have always wanted a story with these elements the main character even uses the name I use when I play rpg games well done ,I know I will love this story.
I like this story plot anfd world background. But MC character is not my liking but everyone need some change so I am hook up to it.But I have wish don't make MC like those typical protagonist who jump to help other without thinking anything I don't mind him a good person but I wish he think people close tp him first then other
Feels good to read about such a busted mc. Please keep writing this. This my typa story.
Это очень хорошая книга ,но она подходит не для каждого ,а только для тех людей которые любят быстрых оп героев. Вот вроде бы и конец моего краткого отзыва 😀
Don't mind me...just decided to mark this novel as one of the new novels that my new novel has to surpass
Can I boast? Actually, just let me tell you this is probably the best book you'll read of an OP MC with a well-balanced big plot (which won't be shoved on your face directly) and balanced paced progression with abundant enjoyment due to MC's personality and development I have in store for him. The side cast is fleshing out nicely revolving around MC, and plot-world is massive. you don't know what a plot-world is? Don't worry, I just made it on the spot while writing this review. It's a combination word of Plot and world-building. Basically, what I am saying is this is peak fantasy fiction. [PS: This is not a shameless author review, but a serious evaluation of this literature. Go drown yourself in this fantasy and thank me later.]
Writing is great, concept itself is a bit overdone, but done very well, in a way that doesn't feel repetitive. But what I truly want to focus on is the main character. Holy hell, this is one of the most insanely well written main characters I have EVER read. I admit, when I started reading the book I wasnt a huge fan of the MC, I thought he was wimpy and naive. But I finally was forced to see the way he truly is, and this is the first time EVER reading a book, that I have truly felt terrified at the sheer idea of a "morally good" character, to the point I physically shiver IRL. The last time I felt this offput and uneasy at a character was realing "Soul of negary" The idea, the execution, my god... I honestly could say as much as id want to and never capture that moment. Author, you are talented as f*** and im seriously proud to be enjoying this book before it gets way higher on rankings.
Honestly this book is good. I have seen this novel many times but I haven't bothered to read it, because the synopsis is quite plain and does not even show a fraction of this novel's potential. The novel isn't too draggy/wordy and for people who enjoy gacha, maybe this novel may be quite exciting for them. Don't expect much relationship with the gacha characters though.
so i finally able to Download discord so can i pls the link so i can join. also ive been waiting and waiting on ur gacha book u made so im gonna come and ask are u done making chapters dor cuz i hope not i love rereading it
Decent read if you've nothing left to read - I read up to 75, so keep that in mind for below. The writing quality is great - not much yapping, good grammar, and not many if any issues I noticed (up to ch. 24 on here, up to 75 elsewhere) The story development/world background itself is nice, despite being overused and beyond cliche at this point the author makes it work well. Character design... is what killed it for me. His summons are great, definitely the highlight of the novel and a breath of fresh air, they have a brain and use it well. The FMC (non-summon) is essentially a jade beauty. The MC is the crux of this novel, he has a hero complex & beyond naive. He's a genius in the first life (though EQ of a toddler), saved tons of lives and got screwed due to being ill/bedridden from age 10 to 25. But now he has power! So he, or his summons, are powerful enough to do what he wants so can enact his cliche righteousness anywhere he sees his past self in and "change their fate". can't comment much on stability as I read thru these chapters in about 2 hours.
I actually really love this book so far. It’s a absolutely amazing.. idk what else to say, this is honestly so good bro im addicted.
it was all good but....... u dropped it i am never purchasing novel from your writing ever again
The novel is really good.the Mc is a bit childish but I guess as the story progresses he will become mature.
I love the concept man but I can't read this at all, with how he's thinking that's so f****** cringe, feels like 3 yrs old talking about punishing all the bad guys in the wold. World background meh we don't know how many continent in this world . and just not make him too op he remove his gatcha for people like duh he has many resources to upgrade to primeval in his pocket demention but because he has 3 yrs old braincell he trust other people he didn't summon and he giving away free resources bruh. Harem? bland like some other novel here which the girl fall to the guy, after 5 days all adventure rias fall to aleron with his 3 yrs old mindser bruh.
Author, I liked the story, but if I were to give my own opinion, you might have made a simple mistake. This error is related to the identity of the main character. At the beginning of the story, you mention that the main character has helped millions of people with his invention, and this is an indication that he is a genius.But his personality and his genius background are irrelevant. Of course, each person's characters are different, but if a person's IQ is high enough, they understand human nature much better, and the main character does not fit this description. Yes, the main character cannot go out due to his illness, he rarely talks to people, etc. But that's no excuse, because the main character can read books and learn a thing or two about people from books, and what's even more illogical is that the main character was already betrayed twice at the beginning of the story, but that didn't change him at all. Of course, I'm not saying he should be an enemy of humanity, but couldn't he be a little more careful? I think the main character's past doesn't match his personality. It would be better if you describe him as a child with a very rare disease who had to stay in the hospital all the time, and as someone who died during a treatment process and experienced all of this. Otherwise, the character's past doesn't match his personality. For example, it would be unreasonable for him to attract slaves to his domain. It happened because he doesn't actually know the story of that race. It's ridiculous for the man passing by to believe what he says because he can't confirm whether what he says is true. Maybe if the people there are really guilty? As I said, a 10-year-old may be smart enough to make an invention that will save millions, but smart people can't be that naive because they can see most things.
author, just focus on one book or atleast keep a stable update in every book [img=angry]
the novel is good with an op system and good world background and the mc is kind funny but there something I don't understand in the story like what is the mc appearance is he ugly or handsome the author explain every male characters appearance as handsome but does not explain mc appearance.
my gacha addiction fw with this fr fr. i loved how detailed the system is and overall, its just rlly balanced.
i thought the power system was messed up but. ........ he has equal if not stronger enemies against him I just hope Author doesn't do that regular clitch where his lover or close friend just for the sake of story thus make him & his friend powerful enough to survive against such tragedy ( I hope author listen to my rhis silly request 🥰❤🥲)
This book has great POTENTIAL I'MMA looking forward to seeing it grow 👍❤ KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AUTHOR-SAN
I really don't know how to feel about this, story moves at lightning speed which for some can be a good thing for me personally it depends. power levels scale way to quick for me, i thought the exceed rank was supposed to be few and far between but within like 60 chapters there have been dozens of them. which makes no sense considering it was stated at the start that both the main empires only had a few, idk story just lacks consistency with its information and moves to quick for me give it a try I guess
What a cover! A pure clickbait worthy that even I had to stop for a few seconds to stare. Shall start reading soon! Good luck! What a cover! A pure clickbait worthy that even I had to stop for a few seconds to stare. Shall start reading soon! Good luck!
I am at chapter 20 and the mc is becoming too op very fast. I don't mind though the story is looking good for now. It's rather refreshing. I recommend giving this book atleast the starting chapters that I read were good.
Reading the reader's review i can tell its gonna be F**king awesome so I'm gonna save it for now and read it when it has 400 chapters or more so here's the (5 STAR ⭐ RATING AUTHOR) stay safe & healthy to make it up to 400 chapters i wish you good luck 😇🔥
honestly it's a great book and i'm enjoying it alot , but mc's childish nature at certain parts of the story annoys me too much to give it 5 stars [img=disgusted] , that's the only flaw i see in this book , other than that this book is perfection 🤌[img=strong]
MC might not be to my liking due to being too good but I absolutely loved the story, world building as well as the power. keep it up. I would suggest adding a few more summons but I also know that there are already too many , you shouldn't have added those bunch of Xianxia ones to be honest but again you can just let a few fade in background like to protect some particular place or stuff and bring them back OP later or something. Anyways I would definitely read it more so keep updating, you're doing a great work.
I am back after leaving my first 5 star review ,I dont regret it this story keeps getting better as you go further .Great work Aurther,u really made the story I always wanted to read.
I havent read the story but Author thank you dont drop or mess up this book I have always wanted a story with these elements the main character even uses the name I use when I play rpg games well done ,I know I will love this story.
I like this story plot anfd world background. But MC character is not my liking but everyone need some change so I am hook up to it.But I have wish don't make MC like those typical protagonist who jump to help other without thinking anything I don't mind him a good person but I wish he think people close tp him first then other
Feels good to read about such a busted mc. Please keep writing this. This my typa story.
Это очень хорошая книга ,но она подходит не для каждого ,а только для тех людей которые любят быстрых оп героев. Вот вроде бы и конец моего краткого отзыва 😀
Don't mind me...just decided to mark this novel as one of the new novels that my new novel has to surpass
Can I boast? Actually, just let me tell you this is probably the best book you'll read of an OP MC with a well-balanced big plot (which won't be shoved on your face directly) and balanced paced progression with abundant enjoyment due to MC's personality and development I have in store for him. The side cast is fleshing out nicely revolving around MC, and plot-world is massive. you don't know what a plot-world is? Don't worry, I just made it on the spot while writing this review. It's a combination word of Plot and world-building. Basically, what I am saying is this is peak fantasy fiction. [PS: This is not a shameless author review, but a serious evaluation of this literature. Go drown yourself in this fantasy and thank me later.]