Into the Infinite of animes and fictions!! Starting with the system!!

LV 13

ParadoxMind

Hm. The ideas behind this seems to be decent, but the writing style is a mess. Too much complicated, over top stuff, obsessively overdescribed wording. This is a scipt at best and a bad story at worst. You know, If I could, I would like to help make this story decent, but its very hard to say the stuff I want in such a unpersonal way. I tried to write helpful, constructive criticism before, but it Just doesn't convey my intensions properly. This is currently only 2 chapters. The only thing that can make this better is a rewrite. Nothing here seems to be thought out, just sum' random thoughts smacked on a Keyboard. I don't even know why I have the need to review this in the first place, but whatever.. Cheers I guess. (Nothing personal, rly. Seriously)

LV 14

AllFather_

The story quite boring and background character story quite basic to overpowered if other god in danmachi quite smart they can easily know all Buddha familia is from another world after all they came from nowhere it will more fun and interesting if buddha in that story insert background story like he is mortal from ancient time who ascending becoming a god long before god descent on mortal world so he not bound to heavenly rule because he is ex mortal that will be more interesting story or that multiverse power entity can just alter reality for example he can just use some king or famous people in danmachi world to become background story for mc to use so god not be suspicious about mc when mc engraved flana.

LV 14

_Monarch

5 stars since i contributed in this story by giving ideas and also cuz you are writing it...will update this review after a few chapters maybe.

LV 3

Cosmic_Ceaser

The Plot is good, the character's develop is OK (Blame the writing style), and overall it is good. But there are grammar errors (Not much), and some phrasing mistakes but still good.

LV 11

Worthless_Wanderer

A great work done by my brother 🙂, though it has some notable grammar mistakes, it's good to read it, I enjoyed every chapter of it. Hope you will upload more 😉😉

LV 3

Note_End

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LV 4

BOBsonofROB_Uchiha

It was a nice story until you started focusing on the teammates of mc. I mean the use of having an mc is that the story should revolve around him. Anyway I'm gonna drop until the story goes back to mc.

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Daoist3PgKGI

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LV 5

akasuna123

ignore powerscaling when reading this because it gets thrown out the window, at least canon strength scaling.

LV 14

gates_of_babylon

really good story in was not held at gun point to write this review i swear it on my life. just read the story and stop worrying. gosh

LV 1

The_Local_Guy

I like it ..................................................................................................................................

LV 4

DevilDarkness

fk everything, leave it all behind, and read this story.

LV 4

Dewa_Chandrawijaya

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE

LV 13

Lord_Aizen_Lvl9999

IT SOO GOOD THAT'S THE ONLY THING I WILL SAY SUCH A SHAME THOUGH A RAN OUT OF CHAPS TO READ ;( KEEP IT UP AUTHOR

LV 4

Supernova_Uchiha

Ha ha, I got the first review. Very good.

LV 3

asparagus_21

the quality is good and author san can i request can you make a fanfic for or just add the another world with the smartphone cause i can't see any fanfic related to that one and it has a great world background

LV 3

LunaKindred

Sorry mate I just can't, I haven't even reached chapter 10 yet and I can't keep going. The story is too boring and the plot holes in the beginning have made me lazy to read it. Mc suddenly came out of nowhere and got the plot armor, op system, and op starter pack. Just from seeing all that, I know that the character development won't be good. Mc's personalities is also very flat and emo. Also how the author wrote scathach's character is really a big flaw. Even if she gets nerfed, the only thing that decreases is her physical strength and her abilities will remain intact. And instead of act as a wise teacher she is more like a puppy who always follows behind mc. I will recommend you to rewriting it with more solid story plans and a better characters development

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Hero_Of_Death

Bro did you really like my novel "Life of many me ".

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Lizrock

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