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- คุณภาพงานเขียน
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- กาสร้างตัวละคร
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I've been waiting for a fic like this for a long time. The writing quality is great and the concept has a huge potential. Even though there are only 4 chapters right now, if the author doesn't drop this it will be a great fic.
I've read about 15 chapters and thee story would've been a lot better if the author had a editor or someone they know read over their work, since they make a lot of mistakes and structure sentences strangely. If you can look past the poor English its a cool story and a cool concept in general it 100% has potential
I've been waiting for a fic like this for a long time. The writing quality is great and the concept has a huge potential. Even though there are only 4 chapters right now, if the author doesn't drop this it will be a great fic.
I've read about 15 chapters and thee story would've been a lot better if the author had a editor or someone they know read over their work, since they make a lot of mistakes and structure sentences strangely. If you can look past the poor English its a cool story and a cool concept in general it 100% has potential