2รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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LV 4 ![Badge]()
The premise is their, the idea is good but the grammer is bad and it feels a bit rushed. I will wait for further updates to see if it gets better, also ask chat gpt to correct grammer mistakes.
LV 14 ![Badge]()
The overall writing was mid not too good not too bad at the beginning but it improved tremendously later so that’s good. The premise is good so 5 stars for that the update kinda stalled so i’m hoping author is coming back
LV 4 ![Badge]()
The premise is their, the idea is good but the grammer is bad and it feels a bit rushed. I will wait for further updates to see if it gets better, also ask chat gpt to correct grammer mistakes.
The overall writing was mid not too good not too bad at the beginning but it improved tremendously later so that’s good. The premise is good so 5 stars for that the update kinda stalled so i’m hoping author is coming back