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One of the best fast pacing story. The beginning of the story seem lagging and naive MC is not my taste. But I’m really surprised by how author turned the plot and developed MC. Definitely worthy of time.
This story is very enjoyable to me. I like the descriptions and the differences between most of the characters (good guys and bad). The world building seems pretty solid as well, so far. I am more than a third of the way in and I still get surprised in a good way on the growth and back story for the MC. I have read many novels here and this one is easily in my top 5.
Could someone tell me if MC has improved? As far as I saw he was a simp who was humiliated every few chapters and kept calling the same woman who kicked him out and humiliated him his wife.
I don't understand why he considers Thea his fiancée or even his wife, since in the first chapter it is explained that they grew up together, but she never paid him any attention and at 18 he is kicked out of the house with the words "I would never marry a loser like you". Then, when he becomes rich, handsome and starts farming, he still considers her his wife without even an apology? I like the story, but this behavior of the protagonist makes me think about giving up reading. So far, I have read 63 chapters.
It could easily be better is all I can say. I often times don't write reviews but the quality I have seen in this novel (at chapter 30) has compelled me to write this review. First. The grammer could be easily improved, there are times where it doesn't flow and it makes me wonder if this is a MTL of another novel. Correct the grammer and you would instantly see an increase in quality. Another area to improve upon is wording. I get what you're trying to say but the word choice throws it off. Combine it with the grammer mistakes and it makes you question if it was ever proof read. The story develops at a somewhat fast pace. A bit faster than I'd like to see but its nothing I haven't seen before. There are somethings that could have more screen time as they call it but this can be glossed over as trying to get into the meat of the story. The character design so far is ok imo. Could be more fleshed out but again this is a review at chapter 30 so take this with a grain of salt. updating stability, can't really comment on it as there are already 700 + chapters at the time of review. But updates seem stable if I look at how many ch/week. World building could be better as it kind of throws itself onto you as it appears. Would like to see it be better explained/fleshed out but that could be remedied at later chapter and I'm not there yet. This would easily get a higher score if the grammer and flow of the novel was fixed. I hope the author reads this review and implements the discussed topics in later chapter. And with this I'm clocking out
This is the best book I've ever read. This book is fill with epic battle and unending adventure. please try this book .
Wao, the name is so original, Kent Clark. Not at all reminds someone of red themed superhero 😅
I love this novel but i have an issues with a lot of authors especially the men.. who think that the MC must be surrounded by women left and right ... your book in good and i know it is tagged "harem" but come on almost every shop he goes to the women fall for him even his pet is a girl .. the only male character of significance i have met is the mall owner apart from that all other are just side characters... are you trying to tell me that you couldn't think of any male character that will join the MC on his journey except female????
Hey! I hope you’re doing well. I just wanted to say how much I admire your amazing writing talent your story really left an impression on me, and I’d love to chat with you about it. I’m a commission-based digital artist and have worked on comics with authors across different platforms. I genuinely think your story would make a fantastic comic! You can also check out my work on DeviantArt under the name VanessaWick Feel free to reach out to me on Discord: losserishere Or on Twitter: @tirtatare
There are better books, but this isn't a bad book either................................................................................................
rating for the first 52 ch, I will continue reading when I get some coins and then rereviwe.
Haven’t written one of these in awhile, but Author asked. Chapter release seems stable, but I only started reading the series earlier this month. The story seems to be progressing at a steady pace and shouldn’t be offensive to anyone. Writing quality is generally decent but could use some editing, it’s unfortunate because some plot points get lost in part because the reader second guesses the authors intent at times, for example, a familial relation. The world background could be more robust. Here are the biggest issues, character design is uneven, which is par for the course in Harem stories. Why do these characters like the MC, who are they outside the MC? These questions are answered for some to a certain degree, but not all. I enjoy [Face Slapping] this is the reason I’ve been reading this story, so far it’s been fun. I’m looking forward to the next slap. In short if you enjoy the standard harem and like face slapping then you’ll likely enjoy this book.
this is a very good book I'm liking all the chapters that I have read so far
I can't say enough good things about this story. It's a great read and a fun story. I had seen this book several times initially, and I hadn't picked it up, but I am glad I did. Nothing more to say than give it a try!
A good read with a nice character development. Really like the pace at which the MC's mentality is changed from the naive boy at the beginning to becoming more mature. Keep up the good work and looking forward to more chaps
the storyline is so good and funny 🤣 I love the MC his development and mentality is great. thanks to writer for bringing the MC to live and making my day more enjoyable 😄😌
So, I’ve been following this one for a while now and I honestly really like it. I have a hard time keeping interest with my ADHD, yet this one I am always looking forward to the next chapter. The main character isn’t the typical (hide my strength forever) he uses his cards wisely when needed, and will put you in your place if it benefits him. Definitely try this piece of art, it deserves your time.
Haven’t read it yet so I can’t comment on quality, but the name seems pretty similar to “supreme magus”
I love the story so far (ch100) though i still don't get how the MC couldn't get a beast storage bag seeing that Lucy's own could hold his beast. that's a bit inconsistent considering how Rich he is I'm very surprised he didn't buy one. i hope the author pays attention to those minor inconsistencies
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The world building is pretty typical for a cultivation novel. Far too many authors notes for my taste, explaining things that should be done through story telling. A plethora of grammar, missing punctuation, and errant word usage. All of which break emersion and distract the reader from the story. That said This is one of the most entertaining cultivation stories I have read to date. The characters seem to have depth, and interact with each other in a believable manner. The plot so far is moving at a decent pace. The writing quality has improved through the course of the story. Also the author doesn't use the character's "cultivation" as cheep page filler, and many writers of this kind of story bore the reader to sleep with it. I for one am looking forward to reading more of the story.
Like the other novels of this Author, this novel is also really good. You will find action, adventure, fantasy, love, Harem, Magic, Cultivation, character development. The other thing that make me like this novel very much is that Author has mentioned references of various mythologies and he is using various languages like Latin, Sanskrit, Tamil etc. for naming the various Magic spells. I will recommend everyone to read this novel.
Hello everyone, I hope you guys enjoy the book. As a reader I know the pain of chapter updates. But I promise you i will regularly update the book. *Bonus chapter will be awarded for reaching Power Stones target and Gifts. *No NTR, *Plenty of face-slapping, funking beautiful girls.
I’m changing my previous review of 3 stars to five after reading every chapter available so far. This is quite a good story, and the writing draws you in at every angle. I must admit, the beginning chapters were lackluster, but as time went on the quality improved exponentially. For those who are skeptical on whether or not to read this, be patient. The story gets better. Congratulations author, I’m a difficult person to please. Your novel is a work of art.
One of the best fast pacing story. The beginning of the story seem lagging and naive MC is not my taste. But I’m really surprised by how author turned the plot and developed MC. Definitely worthy of time.
This story is very enjoyable to me. I like the descriptions and the differences between most of the characters (good guys and bad). The world building seems pretty solid as well, so far. I am more than a third of the way in and I still get surprised in a good way on the growth and back story for the MC. I have read many novels here and this one is easily in my top 5.
Could someone tell me if MC has improved? As far as I saw he was a simp who was humiliated every few chapters and kept calling the same woman who kicked him out and humiliated him his wife.
I don't understand why he considers Thea his fiancée or even his wife, since in the first chapter it is explained that they grew up together, but she never paid him any attention and at 18 he is kicked out of the house with the words "I would never marry a loser like you". Then, when he becomes rich, handsome and starts farming, he still considers her his wife without even an apology? I like the story, but this behavior of the protagonist makes me think about giving up reading. So far, I have read 63 chapters.
It could easily be better is all I can say. I often times don't write reviews but the quality I have seen in this novel (at chapter 30) has compelled me to write this review. First. The grammer could be easily improved, there are times where it doesn't flow and it makes me wonder if this is a MTL of another novel. Correct the grammer and you would instantly see an increase in quality. Another area to improve upon is wording. I get what you're trying to say but the word choice throws it off. Combine it with the grammer mistakes and it makes you question if it was ever proof read. The story develops at a somewhat fast pace. A bit faster than I'd like to see but its nothing I haven't seen before. There are somethings that could have more screen time as they call it but this can be glossed over as trying to get into the meat of the story. The character design so far is ok imo. Could be more fleshed out but again this is a review at chapter 30 so take this with a grain of salt. updating stability, can't really comment on it as there are already 700 + chapters at the time of review. But updates seem stable if I look at how many ch/week. World building could be better as it kind of throws itself onto you as it appears. Would like to see it be better explained/fleshed out but that could be remedied at later chapter and I'm not there yet. This would easily get a higher score if the grammer and flow of the novel was fixed. I hope the author reads this review and implements the discussed topics in later chapter. And with this I'm clocking out
This is the best book I've ever read. This book is fill with epic battle and unending adventure. please try this book .
Wao, the name is so original, Kent Clark. Not at all reminds someone of red themed superhero 😅
I love this novel but i have an issues with a lot of authors especially the men.. who think that the MC must be surrounded by women left and right ... your book in good and i know it is tagged "harem" but come on almost every shop he goes to the women fall for him even his pet is a girl .. the only male character of significance i have met is the mall owner apart from that all other are just side characters... are you trying to tell me that you couldn't think of any male character that will join the MC on his journey except female????
Hey! I hope you’re doing well. I just wanted to say how much I admire your amazing writing talent your story really left an impression on me, and I’d love to chat with you about it. I’m a commission-based digital artist and have worked on comics with authors across different platforms. I genuinely think your story would make a fantastic comic! You can also check out my work on DeviantArt under the name VanessaWick Feel free to reach out to me on Discord: losserishere Or on Twitter: @tirtatare
There are better books, but this isn't a bad book either................................................................................................
rating for the first 52 ch, I will continue reading when I get some coins and then rereviwe.
Haven’t written one of these in awhile, but Author asked. Chapter release seems stable, but I only started reading the series earlier this month. The story seems to be progressing at a steady pace and shouldn’t be offensive to anyone. Writing quality is generally decent but could use some editing, it’s unfortunate because some plot points get lost in part because the reader second guesses the authors intent at times, for example, a familial relation. The world background could be more robust. Here are the biggest issues, character design is uneven, which is par for the course in Harem stories. Why do these characters like the MC, who are they outside the MC? These questions are answered for some to a certain degree, but not all. I enjoy [Face Slapping] this is the reason I’ve been reading this story, so far it’s been fun. I’m looking forward to the next slap. In short if you enjoy the standard harem and like face slapping then you’ll likely enjoy this book.
this is a very good book I'm liking all the chapters that I have read so far
I can't say enough good things about this story. It's a great read and a fun story. I had seen this book several times initially, and I hadn't picked it up, but I am glad I did. Nothing more to say than give it a try!
A good read with a nice character development. Really like the pace at which the MC's mentality is changed from the naive boy at the beginning to becoming more mature. Keep up the good work and looking forward to more chaps
the storyline is so good and funny 🤣 I love the MC his development and mentality is great. thanks to writer for bringing the MC to live and making my day more enjoyable 😄😌
So, I’ve been following this one for a while now and I honestly really like it. I have a hard time keeping interest with my ADHD, yet this one I am always looking forward to the next chapter. The main character isn’t the typical (hide my strength forever) he uses his cards wisely when needed, and will put you in your place if it benefits him. Definitely try this piece of art, it deserves your time.
Haven’t read it yet so I can’t comment on quality, but the name seems pretty similar to “supreme magus”
I love the story so far (ch100) though i still don't get how the MC couldn't get a beast storage bag seeing that Lucy's own could hold his beast. that's a bit inconsistent considering how Rich he is I'm very surprised he didn't buy one. i hope the author pays attention to those minor inconsistencies
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ The world building is pretty typical for a cultivation novel. Far too many authors notes for my taste, explaining things that should be done through story telling. A plethora of grammar, missing punctuation, and errant word usage. All of which break emersion and distract the reader from the story. That said This is one of the most entertaining cultivation stories I have read to date. The characters seem to have depth, and interact with each other in a believable manner. The plot so far is moving at a decent pace. The writing quality has improved through the course of the story. Also the author doesn't use the character's "cultivation" as cheep page filler, and many writers of this kind of story bore the reader to sleep with it. I for one am looking forward to reading more of the story.
Like the other novels of this Author, this novel is also really good. You will find action, adventure, fantasy, love, Harem, Magic, Cultivation, character development. The other thing that make me like this novel very much is that Author has mentioned references of various mythologies and he is using various languages like Latin, Sanskrit, Tamil etc. for naming the various Magic spells. I will recommend everyone to read this novel.
Hello everyone, I hope you guys enjoy the book. As a reader I know the pain of chapter updates. But I promise you i will regularly update the book. *Bonus chapter will be awarded for reaching Power Stones target and Gifts. *No NTR, *Plenty of face-slapping, funking beautiful girls.
I’m changing my previous review of 3 stars to five after reading every chapter available so far. This is quite a good story, and the writing draws you in at every angle. I must admit, the beginning chapters were lackluster, but as time went on the quality improved exponentially. For those who are skeptical on whether or not to read this, be patient. The story gets better. Congratulations author, I’m a difficult person to please. Your novel is a work of art.