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now that I've started reading it I have fallen in love with they story it's a little rough around the edges but not enough to kill the reading experience and the author loves to talk to people that comment on the story even if it's criticism I can't wait to see where the story goes
Gonna let it stack up a bit. Solid book from my Daily Recommended. I've been getting a lot of cringe and garbage lately so this was quite pleasant.
it's a good book but to much gets skipped then u just fill in gaps later on leading it to not make any sense
Two words: chapter padding. I read to chapter 20, and it keeps getting worse. Seems like 15% of the chapters are repeating or rephrasing something that was mentioned earlier or drawing out the details of character interactions to annoying lengths...all to increase chapter length. Also, the blind girl who has been blind her whole life feels as helpless as someone who just went blind. Should she be impared? Yes. Should she be utterly helpless? No.
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to tell you the truth I am looking to how the relationship between the MC and the women he chooses build more so than the story. they story so far is really great by the way so don't worry.
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now that I've started reading it I have fallen in love with they story it's a little rough around the edges but not enough to kill the reading experience and the author loves to talk to people that comment on the story even if it's criticism I can't wait to see where the story goes
Gonna let it stack up a bit. Solid book from my Daily Recommended. I've been getting a lot of cringe and garbage lately so this was quite pleasant.
it's a good book but to much gets skipped then u just fill in gaps later on leading it to not make any sense
Two words: chapter padding. I read to chapter 20, and it keeps getting worse. Seems like 15% of the chapters are repeating or rephrasing something that was mentioned earlier or drawing out the details of character interactions to annoying lengths...all to increase chapter length. Also, the blind girl who has been blind her whole life feels as helpless as someone who just went blind. Should she be impared? Yes. Should she be utterly helpless? No.
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to tell you the truth I am looking to how the relationship between the MC and the women he chooses build more so than the story. they story so far is really great by the way so don't worry.
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