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เขียนรีวิวGood story author. You do you and regardless of there being yuri in the "harem" or not, should be your choice, regardless of how many bit#h and moan about it. If they don't want to read it for that reason, then that's on them. Keep up the good writing. 👍 👌 👏 😉
Man you should update more Author-san, the plot is good and the background is solid for an AU world. I'm looking forward to this Fic........
well reading this fanfic was refreshing and author did venelana justice as the strongest female devil and much stronger than a satan class and also it was quick nice seeing a nice and cute mc instead of a edge lord or emo which i dont know why. well 5 stars from me
Its decent, but my main problem is it everything is overexplained half a chapter is dedicated to overexplaining why Vivian made such a decision and his views. You just need a few chapters to establish the MCs personality and then his decisions wouldn't need to be explained everytime.
Well written or translated, but more time is spent on back story and side story then actual story progression.
So is the MC male or female? Because for me Vivian is a name for girls, or is Vivian not a real MC?
this a really different story from other the mc background and Manny other characters background are different but it is perfect ☺️ is is a perfect story if you want to read something different and enjoyable from other stoyry I am rating this story 5 stars because it is perfect some might say the update or upload is but it is responsible because if you want to create different and perfect story you need time to think and write so 1 week a chapter is perfectly reasonable
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์Thanks for the warnings good sir. Won't read it, but I'll leave this. -.-.-.-.-.--.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.
Me gusta DXD, entonces la pregunta es, cuáles son los días que subes capítulos? Con solo 10 capítulos en medio año, no parece demaciado esperanzador, especialmente si es de ritmo lento, ya que, generalmente ni siquiera leo historias con menos de 100 capitulos, a no ser, que la historia simplemente lo valga.
10/10 story... You can anyone help me find a Dxd story with the first couple chapters the MC awakens a system but has to ask out three girls and they are Rias, Akeno, Koneko. sorry for asking on your book Author-san.
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Very good work, the development of the characters is very good, the only defect is the update time which is long and I want to read more 😂😂
Traduza texto com a câmara the tags are very interesting, the changes are very good and it still maintains the characteristics of some characters very well,
Man you should update more Author-san, the plot is good and the background is solid for an AU world. I'm looking forward to this Fic..
Honestly anazing story, especially the dark turn with Celestine came unexpected, gave the story an amazing serious tone. Sadly 4/5 for Character Design from me because I’m no fan of the child MC especially in the beginning. After he becam 5, and more mature it’s not so bad anymore. Dont get me wrong I understand that he grew up in a research facility alone without guidance etc. and that you use the childhood years to introduce character and followers of his future self (maids/wives/friends) but 50 chapters is for me personllay just too long. In my opinion it could have been done in half the time, and then more time invested in his Training, 5 years with so much power is to much, the problem isn’t that he has this strength it makes sense from his DNA and all, but his control is to good. After only 1 or 2 years he has the control and power of a ultimate, near Satan class? Maybe a bit much… aside from that amazing story and I can only wait for him to become older for some smut action
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์Good story author. You do you and regardless of there being yuri in the "harem" or not, should be your choice, regardless of how many bit#h and moan about it. If they don't want to read it for that reason, then that's on them. Keep up the good writing. 👍 👌 👏 😉
Man you should update more Author-san, the plot is good and the background is solid for an AU world. I'm looking forward to this Fic........
well reading this fanfic was refreshing and author did venelana justice as the strongest female devil and much stronger than a satan class and also it was quick nice seeing a nice and cute mc instead of a edge lord or emo which i dont know why. well 5 stars from me
Its decent, but my main problem is it everything is overexplained half a chapter is dedicated to overexplaining why Vivian made such a decision and his views. You just need a few chapters to establish the MCs personality and then his decisions wouldn't need to be explained everytime.
Well written or translated, but more time is spent on back story and side story then actual story progression.
So is the MC male or female? Because for me Vivian is a name for girls, or is Vivian not a real MC?
this a really different story from other the mc background and Manny other characters background are different but it is perfect ☺️ is is a perfect story if you want to read something different and enjoyable from other stoyry I am rating this story 5 stars because it is perfect some might say the update or upload is but it is responsible because if you want to create different and perfect story you need time to think and write so 1 week a chapter is perfectly reasonable
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์Thanks for the warnings good sir. Won't read it, but I'll leave this. -.-.-.-.-.--.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.
Me gusta DXD, entonces la pregunta es, cuáles son los días que subes capítulos? Con solo 10 capítulos en medio año, no parece demaciado esperanzador, especialmente si es de ritmo lento, ya que, generalmente ni siquiera leo historias con menos de 100 capitulos, a no ser, que la historia simplemente lo valga.
10/10 story... You can anyone help me find a Dxd story with the first couple chapters the MC awakens a system but has to ask out three girls and they are Rias, Akeno, Koneko. sorry for asking on your book Author-san.
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Very good work, the development of the characters is very good, the only defect is the update time which is long and I want to read more 😂😂
Traduza texto com a câmara the tags are very interesting, the changes are very good and it still maintains the characteristics of some characters very well,
Man you should update more Author-san, the plot is good and the background is solid for an AU world. I'm looking forward to this Fic..
Honestly anazing story, especially the dark turn with Celestine came unexpected, gave the story an amazing serious tone. Sadly 4/5 for Character Design from me because I’m no fan of the child MC especially in the beginning. After he becam 5, and more mature it’s not so bad anymore. Dont get me wrong I understand that he grew up in a research facility alone without guidance etc. and that you use the childhood years to introduce character and followers of his future self (maids/wives/friends) but 50 chapters is for me personllay just too long. In my opinion it could have been done in half the time, and then more time invested in his Training, 5 years with so much power is to much, the problem isn’t that he has this strength it makes sense from his DNA and all, but his control is to good. After only 1 or 2 years he has the control and power of a ultimate, near Satan class? Maybe a bit much… aside from that amazing story and I can only wait for him to become older for some smut action
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