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It’s a good Harry Potter fanfic and gets updated frequently good writing and proper grammar but it has no timeline at all I can’t tell what time I’m in at all after one chapter and then when I read it I’ll be at one point and time and then go back like a week and it doesn’t say why and then when you go to the next chapter I’m 2 weeks a head of the three weeks I was at and then it doesn’t make sense because I’m missing information that was never uploaded
It’s a good Harry Potter fanfic and gets updated frequently good writing and proper grammar but it has no timeline at all I can’t tell what time I’m in at all after one chapter and then when I read it I’ll be at one point and time and then go back like a week and it doesn’t say why and then when you go to the next chapter I’m 2 weeks a head of the three weeks I was at and then it doesn’t make sense because I’m missing information that was never uploaded