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3.6
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
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Why just one star? 1. Trashy grammar. 2. Neglect to edit and correct the errors pointed out by readers. 3. A stupid MC who makes Rock look smarter than he is. 4. So much of the author backed fiat to get mc out of the hole he dug for himself because he was stupid. 5. Forced drama and other BS. 6. Simp is willing to die for a girl he only knows from a novel. 7. Beta Japanese Template MC. 8. Nerf, lots of Nerf. 9. Cockroach enemies that refuse to die. 10. Dunno, It just felt weird leaving it at point 9.
I’m really enjoying reading this if you like the trope of and extra. Or even just magic and a system this is the perfect story to scratch that itch
Not gonna lie just read the free chapters and you will understand,that it is nothing much but a copy and paste of the typical Japanese novel mc that you will find anywhere that are simps and the only thing they are good at is their luck and simping,there is this girl called hina whose parents were saved by mc and the first thing she did was to stare at him and say she hates him and she continues to did it every single time and our mc just smiles every time like a pathetic f**k and then after this whole fiasco author gives 1 paragraph of 3 lines explaining why she did this and thought everything is fine,it was also written that in original novel she died in the middle after her parents were killed,well i think that author with the original novel has better common sense then the current one who is pushing for this hasteful b***h to become heroine,i would rather have the mc just remain single
Keep up your work author 💪. I love all about this novel,charactors,world buildings,fight.Everything is perfect,👏👏. I highly recommend to give it a try.
as of this moment, I'm enjoying it very much. good job author and please update daily and don't give it up. and thank you very much for the chapters.
My 2.2 review is based on my honest opinion. Just give it a chance but this ain't my cup of tea.
Honest reviews are here.. [Spoiler Alert] As the title, it already described what this story is about.. Why this novel didn't have a high demand is simply because of the annoying storyline.. Reason?? 👉🏻Slow pace? Check✔️. 👉🏻MC got nerfed many times? Check✔️. 👉🏻Hidden power but can't use it? Check✔️. 👉🏻Dunno how to keep his secret? Check✔️. 👉🏻Tell people about his power? Check✔️. 👉🏻Enemy got plot armor and won't die like cockroach? Check✔️. 👉🏻If he got to choose between an easy way or a hard way, MC chose a hard way instead? Check✔️. 👉🏻If he got to choose a reward between "immediately remove the nerf" or the thing he will get a few months later, MC pick the "thing" he will get later on instead? Check✔️. 👉🏻Undefeatable MC? Beep❌️. Nope. Even though many readers COMPLAINED about it, the author just kept doing it.. Well, maybe he doesn't care, I guess.. So, the reader lost interest and started to leave one by one.. But we know the author is not greedy, just stubborn.. He lets the reader taste his novels by giving free chapters until Ch61.. It is a good novel, but unfortunately, it is not my cup of tea..
Author. I now understand why ther is a few reader in this novel. 1 character development. Is mehhhhhh 2. Easy to be flustered mc 3 over thinking mc 4. Brain stop when encountering an heroine 5.holy virgin mc 6. Two personality cnby 7 Sentimental mc By the way . This is only for up to chapter 51 I only wish for calm mc. Im sorry but mc is keeping my nerves off .so i will not continue this . 🤡💢💢💢 But i think its good for new reader . Sorry author if im mean and rude . It just i already read too much novel and that your work in my eyes is barely average. But i will give you five start.
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5/5. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book.
This is a good story with an interesting plot line. Enjoyable. But I feel like MC has too much luck and power system seems not very balanced. You, for 2 kids to slay A rank Monster at that level and age, it's like they are already better than normal grown up hunters. If Boss Monster was C + rank one it could be justified but Slaying S rank one is a bit too much, Even if he has the Martial Saint At that level of weak body rebound must be very big even if had to use martial saint's technique. Other thing is his skill adapt that skill can be Very OP according to how author handle the story. EX : MAHORAGA
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It’s been so long sense I read well written novel everything in this novel is perfect no cliche involved straightforward no edge lord, I hope the MC developed or have romantic failing for the heroine not just saving her, right now it’s not clear if he love her or not I hope he dose....
I like it very much, it has good potential, and you are not rushing it and giving reasons for every event, unlike others, keep going and don't stop.
Truly underrated,a late boomer.This is probably author san's first piece,so at first too simp and cringey, that forces readers to drop out.But I glad to see the author's constant improvement and try to do his best to interact with readers.If say about grammatical mistakes,it is there about 2-4 time in a chapter but nothing horrible to stop readers' enjoyment. SPOILER:Story gets better after entering academy,top of 1 year who can rival even teachers.Stop simping,but gladly welcome girlies.Nerfs removed,gets buffed,have broken skill,story looks promising.) For the author san,plz keep up the good work and complete the story (unlike most of webnovel's unending haitas).Good luck.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Why just one star? 1. Trashy grammar. 2. Neglect to edit and correct the errors pointed out by readers. 3. A stupid MC who makes Rock look smarter than he is. 4. So much of the author backed fiat to get mc out of the hole he dug for himself because he was stupid. 5. Forced drama and other BS. 6. Simp is willing to die for a girl he only knows from a novel. 7. Beta Japanese Template MC. 8. Nerf, lots of Nerf. 9. Cockroach enemies that refuse to die. 10. Dunno, It just felt weird leaving it at point 9.
I’m really enjoying reading this if you like the trope of and extra. Or even just magic and a system this is the perfect story to scratch that itch
Not gonna lie just read the free chapters and you will understand,that it is nothing much but a copy and paste of the typical Japanese novel mc that you will find anywhere that are simps and the only thing they are good at is their luck and simping,there is this girl called hina whose parents were saved by mc and the first thing she did was to stare at him and say she hates him and she continues to did it every single time and our mc just smiles every time like a pathetic f**k and then after this whole fiasco author gives 1 paragraph of 3 lines explaining why she did this and thought everything is fine,it was also written that in original novel she died in the middle after her parents were killed,well i think that author with the original novel has better common sense then the current one who is pushing for this hasteful b***h to become heroine,i would rather have the mc just remain single
Keep up your work author 💪. I love all about this novel,charactors,world buildings,fight.Everything is perfect,👏👏. I highly recommend to give it a try.
as of this moment, I'm enjoying it very much. good job author and please update daily and don't give it up. and thank you very much for the chapters.
My 2.2 review is based on my honest opinion. Just give it a chance but this ain't my cup of tea.
Honest reviews are here.. [Spoiler Alert] As the title, it already described what this story is about.. Why this novel didn't have a high demand is simply because of the annoying storyline.. Reason?? 👉🏻Slow pace? Check✔️. 👉🏻MC got nerfed many times? Check✔️. 👉🏻Hidden power but can't use it? Check✔️. 👉🏻Dunno how to keep his secret? Check✔️. 👉🏻Tell people about his power? Check✔️. 👉🏻Enemy got plot armor and won't die like cockroach? Check✔️. 👉🏻If he got to choose between an easy way or a hard way, MC chose a hard way instead? Check✔️. 👉🏻If he got to choose a reward between "immediately remove the nerf" or the thing he will get a few months later, MC pick the "thing" he will get later on instead? Check✔️. 👉🏻Undefeatable MC? Beep❌️. Nope. Even though many readers COMPLAINED about it, the author just kept doing it.. Well, maybe he doesn't care, I guess.. So, the reader lost interest and started to leave one by one.. But we know the author is not greedy, just stubborn.. He lets the reader taste his novels by giving free chapters until Ch61.. It is a good novel, but unfortunately, it is not my cup of tea..
Author. I now understand why ther is a few reader in this novel. 1 character development. Is mehhhhhh 2. Easy to be flustered mc 3 over thinking mc 4. Brain stop when encountering an heroine 5.holy virgin mc 6. Two personality cnby 7 Sentimental mc By the way . This is only for up to chapter 51 I only wish for calm mc. Im sorry but mc is keeping my nerves off .so i will not continue this . 🤡💢💢💢 But i think its good for new reader . Sorry author if im mean and rude . It just i already read too much novel and that your work in my eyes is barely average. But i will give you five start.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ 5/5. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book. Read this book.
This is a good story with an interesting plot line. Enjoyable. But I feel like MC has too much luck and power system seems not very balanced. You, for 2 kids to slay A rank Monster at that level and age, it's like they are already better than normal grown up hunters. If Boss Monster was C + rank one it could be justified but Slaying S rank one is a bit too much, Even if he has the Martial Saint At that level of weak body rebound must be very big even if had to use martial saint's technique. Other thing is his skill adapt that skill can be Very OP according to how author handle the story. EX : MAHORAGA
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ It’s been so long sense I read well written novel everything in this novel is perfect no cliche involved straightforward no edge lord, I hope the MC developed or have romantic failing for the heroine not just saving her, right now it’s not clear if he love her or not I hope he dose....
I like it very much, it has good potential, and you are not rushing it and giving reasons for every event, unlike others, keep going and don't stop.
Truly underrated,a late boomer.This is probably author san's first piece,so at first too simp and cringey, that forces readers to drop out.But I glad to see the author's constant improvement and try to do his best to interact with readers.If say about grammatical mistakes,it is there about 2-4 time in a chapter but nothing horrible to stop readers' enjoyment. SPOILER:Story gets better after entering academy,top of 1 year who can rival even teachers.Stop simping,but gladly welcome girlies.Nerfs removed,gets buffed,have broken skill,story looks promising.) For the author san,plz keep up the good work and complete the story (unlike most of webnovel's unending haitas).Good luck.
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