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==========IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT TO NEW READER========== After I saw the many comments given on the early chapter I decide to make this announcement. At the beginning, I would like to inform new readers who want to read this novel that when I first wrote this novel I used my native language, namely Indonesian, and I translated it using Google Translate and I didn't have time to double check it at that time, so please understand that there are some words that don't make sense but as time goes by I have used various tools to make the words better and I also double-checked them with my own English skills. (Note: Some of the chapters i already edited like chapter 1-3) Also some people don't like it when I write names in each dialogue which gives the impression of being more of a script than a novel. Don't worry about the next chapters until now I've deleted it!
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The story is fine and lives up to its title. However, I did have some issues with how quickly the first year concluded. In just 49 chapters, the entire first year was covered, which may have limited the author's ability to develop a more intricate plot. While I initially continued reading after the author resumed writing, I am considering dropping it soon as I feel satisfied with what I've read so far. The main character doesn't contribute much to the plot, which may have been intentional on the author's part to avoid improvising on the original storyline. Personally, I prefer a different storytelling approach for fanfics based on "Classroom of the Elite" after reading several of them, but others may have different opinions. The lack of focus on the main character earning points, especially after the initial karate incident, was disappointing. Additionally, the lack of clarity on class points and personal points throughout the story was frustrating. The author could have dedicated more effort to developing the romance aspect of the story rather than focusing solely on explicit content. Despite the initial challenges with grammar and readability, the story does improve over time. Overall, the emphasis on erotica over the original plot of "Classroom of the Elite" became more apparent as the story progressed.
Actually, this story is good. It's just that for some reason it stopped in the middle of the road and didn't continue any further. I want this story to continue for some reason, and if possible the author writes this story to the end!
Read it at your own risk. Brain aneurysm are the least of your own worries trying to comprehend the author writing.
Grammar is trash, it feels like im reading a chinese mtl fanfiction, I've seen something better than this. The story is also trash and unrealistic, its more like hentai with plot. The character development is 0, MC is rapist and all the FMC is braindead. Overall this story is trash. Shame on you
mc an worst version of ayanokoji so like second best in class he's also a massive ayanokoji rider he hides his talent only diffrence between them is he better looking and pulls more girls.. like i can just watch cote if im trying to see ayanokoji do his thing but seriously other than the plain and lame mc everything else is good but thats it for me, personal opnion those who like to see ayanokoji and an worst version in the same class this is for you.
the plot is, well..., but the word and the paragraph, the grammar, are really bad that make my head hurts so muchjust what's wrong with you dude
I only read two chapters and I'm going to leave it because so far it's the typical Japanese protagonist, you couldn't be more pathetic. Jfjfdjdjdjfjfjfjjidikgkfjfkfjfjfjfjfjdkkdkfjfjfjfjrjjfjdkdkififvuycyfuididjjfjfhfiixuctvtfuufdjf
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(14Ch)Mc personality is flat and p*ssy(only word i can find to describe him), says isnt aiming for class A goes out his way to help class in exam(basically does too much to make the class win besides his role in the exam), interactions w horikita is like a weak willed coward just does what she says and takes her abuse(island exam)(Phone message), bs plot with hirata when he asks him to be intermidary w horikita even though they had only 3 interactions and not even in the classrom(author making him the 2nd ayanokoji kiyotaka) , paid 20k for usless information on class A when he could have asked any radndom or kamuro................so yeah if ur looking for something new or unique keep looking and come back and tell me
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First COTE ff to reach year2, fast paced story and op mc. Overall great story recommend giving it a try[img=proud][img=proud]
It really one of the best fanfiction i ever read for the classroom of the elite so far.
It’s a very fast paced book Aka junk food story. Unfortunately the protagonist is a Gary Stu. Also with MC doing his girls raw on the fly and they not getting pregnant without contraception… is he infertile? The biggest highlight of this book since chapter 5x is Valentine’s Day. He is also not a time management master, basically he’s just a handsome scum who doesn’ spend time with his girls either, just Seggs bc he handsome. Yamauchi actually hits the mark when dissing MC this time.
Very good novel. i am curious Hasebe Haruka is a harem member? [img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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It was difficult for me to read because coming into this, I could tell that English is not your strong suit. However, you get what you’re coming for. Chapters are sizable and the story is being updated frequently with what looks like a motivated writer.
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Mc has no personality, he is so flat. Also the plot is flat too... There's no details in it. It feels like i reading a diary [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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Why did COTE start popping left and right in this platform?It was rare to find even one in the previous years but suddenly this year I count more 10 FF about it and number is increasing very fast.
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this is translated fanfic right? from this ようこそ脱力系が行く実力至上主義の教室へ if i not wrong well good luck asjd;ajgdab divqwevdusbdg ub cCBdjsfhksdhfhsdjfk
Shameless review from author-san here~~. just give it try to read it and give me a review and comment about my first chapter so that I can be more enthusiastic about uploading the latest chapters
==========IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT TO NEW READER========== After I saw the many comments given on the early chapter I decide to make this announcement. At the beginning, I would like to inform new readers who want to read this novel that when I first wrote this novel I used my native language, namely Indonesian, and I translated it using Google Translate and I didn't have time to double check it at that time, so please understand that there are some words that don't make sense but as time goes by I have used various tools to make the words better and I also double-checked them with my own English skills. (Note: Some of the chapters i already edited like chapter 1-3) Also some people don't like it when I write names in each dialogue which gives the impression of being more of a script than a novel. Don't worry about the next chapters until now I've deleted it!
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The story is fine and lives up to its title. However, I did have some issues with how quickly the first year concluded. In just 49 chapters, the entire first year was covered, which may have limited the author's ability to develop a more intricate plot. While I initially continued reading after the author resumed writing, I am considering dropping it soon as I feel satisfied with what I've read so far. The main character doesn't contribute much to the plot, which may have been intentional on the author's part to avoid improvising on the original storyline. Personally, I prefer a different storytelling approach for fanfics based on "Classroom of the Elite" after reading several of them, but others may have different opinions. The lack of focus on the main character earning points, especially after the initial karate incident, was disappointing. Additionally, the lack of clarity on class points and personal points throughout the story was frustrating. The author could have dedicated more effort to developing the romance aspect of the story rather than focusing solely on explicit content. Despite the initial challenges with grammar and readability, the story does improve over time. Overall, the emphasis on erotica over the original plot of "Classroom of the Elite" became more apparent as the story progressed.
Actually, this story is good. It's just that for some reason it stopped in the middle of the road and didn't continue any further. I want this story to continue for some reason, and if possible the author writes this story to the end!
Read it at your own risk. Brain aneurysm are the least of your own worries trying to comprehend the author writing.
Grammar is trash, it feels like im reading a chinese mtl fanfiction, I've seen something better than this. The story is also trash and unrealistic, its more like hentai with plot. The character development is 0, MC is rapist and all the FMC is braindead. Overall this story is trash. Shame on you
mc an worst version of ayanokoji so like second best in class he's also a massive ayanokoji rider he hides his talent only diffrence between them is he better looking and pulls more girls.. like i can just watch cote if im trying to see ayanokoji do his thing but seriously other than the plain and lame mc everything else is good but thats it for me, personal opnion those who like to see ayanokoji and an worst version in the same class this is for you.
the plot is, well..., but the word and the paragraph, the grammar, are really bad that make my head hurts so muchjust what's wrong with you dude
I only read two chapters and I'm going to leave it because so far it's the typical Japanese protagonist, you couldn't be more pathetic. Jfjfdjdjdjfjfjfjjidikgkfjfkfjfjfjfjfjdkkdkfjfjfjfjrjjfjdkdkififvuycyfuididjjfjfhfiixuctvtfuufdjf
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(14Ch)Mc personality is flat and p*ssy(only word i can find to describe him), says isnt aiming for class A goes out his way to help class in exam(basically does too much to make the class win besides his role in the exam), interactions w horikita is like a weak willed coward just does what she says and takes her abuse(island exam)(Phone message), bs plot with hirata when he asks him to be intermidary w horikita even though they had only 3 interactions and not even in the classrom(author making him the 2nd ayanokoji kiyotaka) , paid 20k for usless information on class A when he could have asked any radndom or kamuro................so yeah if ur looking for something new or unique keep looking and come back and tell me
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ First COTE ff to reach year2, fast paced story and op mc. Overall great story recommend giving it a try[img=proud][img=proud]
It really one of the best fanfiction i ever read for the classroom of the elite so far.
It’s a very fast paced book Aka junk food story. Unfortunately the protagonist is a Gary Stu. Also with MC doing his girls raw on the fly and they not getting pregnant without contraception… is he infertile? The biggest highlight of this book since chapter 5x is Valentine’s Day. He is also not a time management master, basically he’s just a handsome scum who doesn’ spend time with his girls either, just Seggs bc he handsome. Yamauchi actually hits the mark when dissing MC this time.
Very good novel. i am curious Hasebe Haruka is a harem member? [img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Very gooddelicious and very entertaining [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It was difficult for me to read because coming into this, I could tell that English is not your strong suit. However, you get what you’re coming for. Chapters are sizable and the story is being updated frequently with what looks like a motivated writer.
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Mc has no personality, he is so flat. Also the plot is flat too... There's no details in it. It feels like i reading a diary [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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Why did COTE start popping left and right in this platform?It was rare to find even one in the previous years but suddenly this year I count more 10 FF about it and number is increasing very fast.
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this is translated fanfic right? from this ようこそ脱力系が行く実力至上主義の教室へ if i not wrong well good luck asjd;ajgdab divqwevdusbdg ub cCBdjsfhksdhfhsdjfk
Shameless review from author-san here~~. just give it try to read it and give me a review and comment about my first chapter so that I can be more enthusiastic about uploading the latest chapters