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please upload more chapters.🥲 you should upload at least 20 chapters first to increase readers. This fanfic has potential.
I would like to ask if you are planning to continue working on this fanfiction or if you have decided to stop.mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Okay, this is a really good fic, but I did expect an OP MC. This is more of a weak to strong story tbh, which there's nothing wrong about since I thoroughly enjoyed the story, but I won't say I'm not upset about being mislead. At the time I'm writing this, there are only eight chapters to the fic so things might change drastically, but the fic has rather sporadic updates which makes the fic feel way longer than it should be. My personal issues with the fic doesn't really take away from its quality, though. It's still written quite well and unlike a lot of other OP MCs, the MC here actually faces challenges and struggles in his journey to becoming strong af, and the reasons for him being weak at the start are pretty understandable if you take the time to think about it. I recommend at least checking this fic out since I do see quite a bit of potential in it.
please upload more chapters.🥲 you should upload at least 20 chapters first to increase readers. This fanfic has potential.
I would like to ask if you are planning to continue working on this fanfiction or if you have decided to stop.mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Okay, this is a really good fic, but I did expect an OP MC. This is more of a weak to strong story tbh, which there's nothing wrong about since I thoroughly enjoyed the story, but I won't say I'm not upset about being mislead. At the time I'm writing this, there are only eight chapters to the fic so things might change drastically, but the fic has rather sporadic updates which makes the fic feel way longer than it should be. My personal issues with the fic doesn't really take away from its quality, though. It's still written quite well and unlike a lot of other OP MCs, the MC here actually faces challenges and struggles in his journey to becoming strong af, and the reasons for him being weak at the start are pretty understandable if you take the time to think about it. I recommend at least checking this fic out since I do see quite a bit of potential in it.