Crimson Genesis: Vengeance of Genetic Evolution

LV 15

StanleyKan

Loving the overall character development so far, can't wait for more chapters to be released! 🫶

LV 14

BottomlessShadow

Normally I would wait longer to write review, but after reading the 12 chapters available at this time I wasn’t able to resist. First of all great wringing and depicting of the story I feel like I can imagine the real thing. And great character development as you gave a reason for the main character to hate the cybernetic society but the world background needs a bit more development I know you think it’s better to add later on and make t may depending on where your leading the story you could have added more world background through the chapter but reveal it little by little like in a third person perspective. But I love the story so far and I hope it continues to be that great

LV 4

Ender_Child

Good concept actually, i’ve read up to Chapter 19 and the story does seem slow paced,but thats what makes it more interesting,The world’s background feels like a mix of Sc-fi and magic, either ways this novel is actually one of the few i think is interesting,either ways i hope the author has a nice day and should take breaks from time to time.

It's a interesting concept, I like the main character description and thoughts, but so far the world is not so clear, looking forward to what comes next, hopefully you can build the world more!