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One of the best ff I've seen. With the best writing in my opinion. I hope it isn't dropped and the author writes more chapters
Man do you know how long i have waited for this????Not a single day passes and i haevn't come here to check if you updated this story...look i dont know what caused you to go on a hiatus but know that i am a sucker for this fic..pls dont drop this one
Look its a good idea. But the synopsis is not accurate. Yes it's an odin reincarnated-fic but it seems only a seems that only a single odin reincarnation was, well, reincarnated and most of his skills, power and knowledge was removed/chucked out the window. He mostly only remembers that there are reincarnations of asgard to fuel toahits(i am not tiping it) and family maters. The soul of the reincarnate(normal guy) just gave him a power boost/op skills(2). The pacing of the fic is off, not the fast pace but how easily and fast he learns stuff that took others a VERY long time to learn. Sure it's an op ff and the skills he got gave him unlimited potential and whatever, but it's still too fast.
I liked everything about this fic so far except the love interest. The original queen Freya would have been fine but author chose Gaia and cut off the possibility of harem or getting together with Freya.
This surprised me tbh, it's really well written. I've only read up to 12 chapters so far and I enjoyed everything until now. There's one thing I fear, and that is the fact that MC seems to be able to create any ability from any world? if I understood it right, And this is totally subjective but I dislike whenever the protagonist is given powers that don't fit the world they are in. But so far it hasn't felt out of place. I do recommend this fanfic!
Writing Quality ★★★★★ Updating Stability. ★★★★★ Story Development. ★★★★★ Character Design. ★★★★★ world background. ★★★★★ Overall Rate 5.0. ★★★★★
The idea is very sound but the execution is not up to par. Odin's character feels very off especially when the fic is written in monologue style. The way he speaks or internally process things does not fit with the character Odin. Even if he's a reincarnated one and merged with another reincarnator, it still feels off. The way he speaks and think feels more like a modern youth (childish). I think what went wrong here is that the author failed to separate himself from his MC (Odin). The MC's boons are also a problem. The MC is already a god and has meta knowledge, so the boons are very unecessary. It takes away the fun of being reincarnated since any challenge he will face will just feel forced since he already has everything. Those points and the fast pacing/wish fulfillment style doesn't help at all in the immersion to the story. It's not very immersive.
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this is already my second review of this precious novel and all im gonna say is keep up the good work author👍👍👍
Started good but quickly lost originality. All his powers are just copies from anime. No imagination, only for fanboy without imagination. Always talks about 'meta knowledge' to the point where it would have been better to just do a normal reincarnation. I was originally happy that this was no harem but got disappointed when the love interest was Gaia. Could have chosen any women but chose the one that slept with almost all powerful beings of marvel and has more children than I can count.
I loved it. The romance is made the corect way it's not forced yet not bland. The essences used are among my favourite ones so that makes me quite intrested in the way they are used to strengthen odin.
I love the character design, the story development and the powers. please don't drop
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Thos is overpowered character done right. That's it I have nothing else to say other than this.
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You can change mcu thor to one looking like the kratos one (fat, I would like that) now Odin doesn't have any bros, so why not change the lore, and make loki his brother as the true nordic mythology, like bor did the deed with his wife and due to asgardian magic the child was late or something
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One of the best ff I've seen. With the best writing in my opinion. I hope it isn't dropped and the author writes more chapters
Man do you know how long i have waited for this????Not a single day passes and i haevn't come here to check if you updated this story...look i dont know what caused you to go on a hiatus but know that i am a sucker for this fic..pls dont drop this one
Look its a good idea. But the synopsis is not accurate. Yes it's an odin reincarnated-fic but it seems only a seems that only a single odin reincarnation was, well, reincarnated and most of his skills, power and knowledge was removed/chucked out the window. He mostly only remembers that there are reincarnations of asgard to fuel toahits(i am not tiping it) and family maters. The soul of the reincarnate(normal guy) just gave him a power boost/op skills(2). The pacing of the fic is off, not the fast pace but how easily and fast he learns stuff that took others a VERY long time to learn. Sure it's an op ff and the skills he got gave him unlimited potential and whatever, but it's still too fast.
I liked everything about this fic so far except the love interest. The original queen Freya would have been fine but author chose Gaia and cut off the possibility of harem or getting together with Freya.
This surprised me tbh, it's really well written. I've only read up to 12 chapters so far and I enjoyed everything until now. There's one thing I fear, and that is the fact that MC seems to be able to create any ability from any world? if I understood it right, And this is totally subjective but I dislike whenever the protagonist is given powers that don't fit the world they are in. But so far it hasn't felt out of place. I do recommend this fanfic!
Writing Quality ★★★★★ Updating Stability. ★★★★★ Story Development. ★★★★★ Character Design. ★★★★★ world background. ★★★★★ Overall Rate 5.0. ★★★★★
The idea is very sound but the execution is not up to par. Odin's character feels very off especially when the fic is written in monologue style. The way he speaks or internally process things does not fit with the character Odin. Even if he's a reincarnated one and merged with another reincarnator, it still feels off. The way he speaks and think feels more like a modern youth (childish). I think what went wrong here is that the author failed to separate himself from his MC (Odin). The MC's boons are also a problem. The MC is already a god and has meta knowledge, so the boons are very unecessary. It takes away the fun of being reincarnated since any challenge he will face will just feel forced since he already has everything. Those points and the fast pacing/wish fulfillment style doesn't help at all in the immersion to the story. It's not very immersive.
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this is already my second review of this precious novel and all im gonna say is keep up the good work author👍👍👍
Started good but quickly lost originality. All his powers are just copies from anime. No imagination, only for fanboy without imagination. Always talks about 'meta knowledge' to the point where it would have been better to just do a normal reincarnation. I was originally happy that this was no harem but got disappointed when the love interest was Gaia. Could have chosen any women but chose the one that slept with almost all powerful beings of marvel and has more children than I can count.
I loved it. The romance is made the corect way it's not forced yet not bland. The essences used are among my favourite ones so that makes me quite intrested in the way they are used to strengthen odin.
I love the character design, the story development and the powers. please don't drop
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Thos is overpowered character done right. That's it I have nothing else to say other than this.
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You can change mcu thor to one looking like the kratos one (fat, I would like that) now Odin doesn't have any bros, so why not change the lore, and make loki his brother as the true nordic mythology, like bor did the deed with his wife and due to asgardian magic the child was late or something
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