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เขียนรีวิวIs there differences between this translated version and original chinese novel ? some scene cut and some are added ?
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Estoy asustado, he leído comentarios perturbadores, pero no estoy seguro de si correr el riesgo... Que diablos pasó en la playa? Y porque todos se niegan a hablar de ello?!! 😱 Mi curiosidad me mata, pero también mato al gato, y no quiero correr riesgos!!!
There is a good novel of this type if you want I can give it to you to translate Chinese novel too but good you can just add some interesting stuff
Good...not as good as the previous one but good. Already the protagonist isn't brainless. Neither are the characters though Natsuha was too contrast of a woman than the one here. Translation is decent; not better than that one as it felt you didn't put efforts in it as you did with that one, but I can understand. That one only had a few chaps while this one had too many so, the original work didn't need to be that much. But I do hope that you don't include these unnecessary descriptions each time a woman appears, already not for the one that had been introduced once. Other than that it's good... Keep updating.
A bit uh a lot slow Paced but lighthearted harem story so, I'll give full stars. Though I hope you continue to upload 2chaps per day as it's going too slow. You cn remove some unnecessary descriptions of the girls.. that's basically unnecessary
200 Chapters and it hasn't even been one month. If it weren't for the characters being from depressing h3tai, who were saved from their original fate, I wouldn't have rated it at all. But, since it's spirit healing, slice of life novel it's okay...
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main like a weak virgin.........bad,and i cant understand the story while i reading....it just like .....nah Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.nnnnnnnn
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์Lets get straight to the point. As someone who has read your other novel "I dont want to open a harem here" i can proudly say, yr writing quality has greatly improved since then. The characters being fleshed out, the wholesome interactions, they just feel more alive. So this is my honest opinion this book is great please keep publishing chapters frequently I am really fond of it. ps. I really wanna see chifuyu and fuyumi get together soon so keep up the good work.
So writer, does the MC have any fraud to capitalize on creating a harem and it seems like there are too many useless depictions for the female characters.
Dude, 50% of the 80 chapters of this Fanfic are like the first day of school, the slow pace is OK, but spending 2 or 3 months in real life on the first day of school is enough to kill any reader
Написание персонажей полный отстой, главный герой картон, тексты слишком банальные слишком много ненужнлалалалалалалалалаллалалалаьаьаьбабвбвбвбвбвбабаых описании фанфик гавно.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์this is a gem i hope this doesn't get droped !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I will give this fic 5 points before reading it. because I read the translator's old fics and liked them very much. That's why I think I will like this fic. I looked at the fic out of curiosity at first because of its name, and the name of the author kind of gave me confidence. The name of the fic reminded me of my old traumas. The main character is not be ntr in this fic, right? (translated with google translate)
err, look i read 10 chaps max, its not thats bad i just me. i gave 5 star because i cant give 1 for personal opnion , Author you are brave , Tachibana Hent... its just too much psicological dmg for me to see it from your eyes.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์It's pretty good... although I find it a little slow since I'm on chapter 25 and we haven't even passed the first day of school yet xD
I like this............ ... ........... .. ..................................................................................................................
Just very very bad grammar, I couldn't understand what was going on at all. Read 12 chapters and gave up.
Slow-paced, Slice of Life, type of novel in an NTR world. The Mc doesn't have any system but is insanely overpowered even without it, so it doesn't matter. He hasn't seen any of these h3tais, so he doesn't know about the world and girls, but that doesn't matter. It is a harem fanfic. There's no NTR, from what I've read. I'll give an extra star for updates..
The story is quite slow, but entertaining. The author already has experience translating and updates are frequent.
"Now there are nine reviews so it should be the time to post one of mine... Everything about the story, I've said in the description and auxiliary chapter so I won't write it here. I'll just share my views in brief: To be honest, I quite liked this fanfic when I read it, even more than the other one. Of course, yellow hair destruction can't be matched by anyone, but the thing I liked about it is the protagonist. He isn't exactly good or bad but a mixture of both. Anything else is a spoiler, so I won't write. As for the bad aspects of it, it would be too descriptive. Every girl is described in detail, not to mention her face, body, even her toes and nails, as if she is some heavenly maiden and this kind of thing happens everytime. Even when she is talking, like 'she squeezed her watermelons and looked at him.' But for those experienced people who have read too much novels from Xianxia, and Wuxia genres, it should not be a big problem. After all, the descriptions in them are also a bit. As for grammar and mistakes... Well, I'm in the middle of my exams, which have been going on since February, so I couldn't exactly check everything in detail. Of course, I'm trying to do my best I can in the time I can spare. After exams, I'll edit these chapters and try to improve the grammar and translation."
Is there differences between this translated version and original chinese novel ? some scene cut and some are added ?
[img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
Estoy asustado, he leído comentarios perturbadores, pero no estoy seguro de si correr el riesgo... Que diablos pasó en la playa? Y porque todos se niegan a hablar de ello?!! 😱 Mi curiosidad me mata, pero también mato al gato, y no quiero correr riesgos!!!
There is a good novel of this type if you want I can give it to you to translate Chinese novel too but good you can just add some interesting stuff
Good...not as good as the previous one but good. Already the protagonist isn't brainless. Neither are the characters though Natsuha was too contrast of a woman than the one here. Translation is decent; not better than that one as it felt you didn't put efforts in it as you did with that one, but I can understand. That one only had a few chaps while this one had too many so, the original work didn't need to be that much. But I do hope that you don't include these unnecessary descriptions each time a woman appears, already not for the one that had been introduced once. Other than that it's good... Keep updating.
A bit uh a lot slow Paced but lighthearted harem story so, I'll give full stars. Though I hope you continue to upload 2chaps per day as it's going too slow. You cn remove some unnecessary descriptions of the girls.. that's basically unnecessary
200 Chapters and it hasn't even been one month. If it weren't for the characters being from depressing h3tai, who were saved from their original fate, I wouldn't have rated it at all. But, since it's spirit healing, slice of life novel it's okay...
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main like a weak virgin.........bad,and i cant understand the story while i reading....it just like .....nah Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.nnnnnnnn
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์Lets get straight to the point. As someone who has read your other novel "I dont want to open a harem here" i can proudly say, yr writing quality has greatly improved since then. The characters being fleshed out, the wholesome interactions, they just feel more alive. So this is my honest opinion this book is great please keep publishing chapters frequently I am really fond of it. ps. I really wanna see chifuyu and fuyumi get together soon so keep up the good work.
So writer, does the MC have any fraud to capitalize on creating a harem and it seems like there are too many useless depictions for the female characters.
Dude, 50% of the 80 chapters of this Fanfic are like the first day of school, the slow pace is OK, but spending 2 or 3 months in real life on the first day of school is enough to kill any reader
Написание персонажей полный отстой, главный герой картон, тексты слишком банальные слишком много ненужнлалалалалалалалалаллалалалаьаьаьбабвбвбвбвбвбабаых описании фанфик гавно.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์this is a gem i hope this doesn't get droped !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Raw name??Raw name??Raw name??Raw name??Raw name??Raw name??Raw name??Raw name??Raw name??Raw name??Raw name??Raw name?? Raw name??Raw name??Raw name??Raw name??Raw name??Raw name??Raw name??Raw name??Raw name??Raw name??Raw name??Raw name??
I will give this fic 5 points before reading it. because I read the translator's old fics and liked them very much. That's why I think I will like this fic. I looked at the fic out of curiosity at first because of its name, and the name of the author kind of gave me confidence. The name of the fic reminded me of my old traumas. The main character is not be ntr in this fic, right? (translated with google translate)
err, look i read 10 chaps max, its not thats bad i just me. i gave 5 star because i cant give 1 for personal opnion , Author you are brave , Tachibana Hent... its just too much psicological dmg for me to see it from your eyes.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์It's pretty good... although I find it a little slow since I'm on chapter 25 and we haven't even passed the first day of school yet xD
I like this............ ... ........... .. ..................................................................................................................
Just very very bad grammar, I couldn't understand what was going on at all. Read 12 chapters and gave up.
Slow-paced, Slice of Life, type of novel in an NTR world. The Mc doesn't have any system but is insanely overpowered even without it, so it doesn't matter. He hasn't seen any of these h3tais, so he doesn't know about the world and girls, but that doesn't matter. It is a harem fanfic. There's no NTR, from what I've read. I'll give an extra star for updates..
The story is quite slow, but entertaining. The author already has experience translating and updates are frequent.
"Now there are nine reviews so it should be the time to post one of mine... Everything about the story, I've said in the description and auxiliary chapter so I won't write it here. I'll just share my views in brief: To be honest, I quite liked this fanfic when I read it, even more than the other one. Of course, yellow hair destruction can't be matched by anyone, but the thing I liked about it is the protagonist. He isn't exactly good or bad but a mixture of both. Anything else is a spoiler, so I won't write. As for the bad aspects of it, it would be too descriptive. Every girl is described in detail, not to mention her face, body, even her toes and nails, as if she is some heavenly maiden and this kind of thing happens everytime. Even when she is talking, like 'she squeezed her watermelons and looked at him.' But for those experienced people who have read too much novels from Xianxia, and Wuxia genres, it should not be a big problem. After all, the descriptions in them are also a bit. As for grammar and mistakes... Well, I'm in the middle of my exams, which have been going on since February, so I couldn't exactly check everything in detail. Of course, I'm trying to do my best I can in the time I can spare. After exams, I'll edit these chapters and try to improve the grammar and translation."