The Passionate Daily Life Starting from the Tachibana Family

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Abhii_28

"Now there are nine reviews so it should be the time to post one of mine... Everything about the story, I've said in the description and auxiliary chapter so I won't write it here. I'll just share my views in brief: To be honest, I quite liked this fanfic when I read it, even more than the other one. Of course, yellow hair destruction can't be matched by anyone, but the thing I liked about it is the protagonist. He isn't exactly good or bad but a mixture of both. Anything else is a spoiler, so I won't write. As for the bad aspects of it, it would be too descriptive. Every girl is described in detail, not to mention her face, body, even her toes and nails, as if she is some heavenly maiden and this kind of thing happens everytime. Even when she is talking, like 'she squeezed her watermelons and looked at him.' But for those experienced people who have read too much novels from Xianxia, and Wuxia genres, it should not be a big problem. After all, the descriptions in them are also a bit. As for grammar and mistakes... Well, I'm in the middle of my exams, which have been going on since February, so I couldn't exactly check everything in detail. Of course, I'm trying to do my best I can in the time I can spare. After exams, I'll edit these chapters and try to improve the grammar and translation."

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world_domination

you say there's no ÑTR but LOL this family is cursed! can you promise this cuz I ain't going to lie this story traumatizes you more than any other ñ./TR

LV 5

mutekishifu

Dude, 50% of the 80 chapters of this Fanfic are like the first day of school, the slow pace is OK, but spending 2 or 3 months in real life on the first day of school is enough to kill any reader

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Efthee

Just very very bad grammar, I couldn't understand what was going on at all. Read 12 chapters and gave up.

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Keist

Hopefully there's no NTR, I'm quite traumatized. Yes, whatever it is, let the MC have the power to protect his women even from a distance. It would be great if the MC had a side job that made a lot of money, then bought a house and let his women live there.

LV 5

Yuri_is_Ntr

It is a Chinese translation, but every good parts of this was lost... And you got a Japanese - like slice of life for this. Is it good? Don't know... The only question that I have, which part of this was "passionate" ?

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SYED_AFAQ

author what happened did you drop this novel

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Tingfei

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Lord_GRIM

So writer, does the MC have any fraud to capitalize on creating a harem and it seems like there are too many useless depictions for the female characters.

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Shiki_Lover

It's pretty good... although I find it a little slow since I'm on chapter 25 and we haven't even passed the first day of school yet xD

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Braian_Rodriguez

Estoy asustado, he leído comentarios perturbadores, pero no estoy seguro de si correr el riesgo... Que diablos pasó en la playa? Y porque todos se niegan a hablar de ello?!! 😱 Mi curiosidad me mata, pero también mato al gato, y no quiero correr riesgos!!!

LV 3

StoryBuff

Good...not as good as the previous one but good. Already the protagonist isn't brainless. Neither are the characters though Natsuha was too contrast of a woman than the one here. Translation is decent; not better than that one as it felt you didn't put efforts in it as you did with that one, but I can understand. That one only had a few chaps while this one had too many so, the original work didn't need to be that much. But I do hope that you don't include these unnecessary descriptions each time a woman appears, already not for the one that had been introduced once. Other than that it's good... Keep updating.

LV 1

ABnox

200 Chapters and it hasn't even been one month. If it weren't for the characters being from depressing h3tai, who were saved from their original fate, I wouldn't have rated it at all. But, since it's spirit healing, slice of life novel it's okay...

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Kronos_

I can only say that this is very good....

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LordRamcel

gonna start reading once triangle blue FML joins

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Bisker_Islam

There is a good novel of this type if you want I can give it to you to translate Chinese novel too but good you can just add some interesting stuff

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Revered_Sovereign

A bit uh a lot slow Paced but lighthearted harem story so, I'll give full stars. Though I hope you continue to upload 2chaps per day as it's going too slow. You cn remove some unnecessary descriptions of the girls.. that's basically unnecessary

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Sandi_Sada

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LV 14

Ryu929

Lets get straight to the point. As someone who has read your other novel "I dont want to open a harem here" i can proudly say, yr writing quality has greatly improved since then. The characters being fleshed out, the wholesome interactions, they just feel more alive. So this is my honest opinion this book is great please keep publishing chapters frequently I am really fond of it. ps. I really wanna see chifuyu and fuyumi get together soon so keep up the good work.