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เขียนรีวิวThis is my second review, one that is up to date with the fanfic. This fanfic is the best in world building, adventure, Character relations and progress of MC. After rewriting- I find that the battles are good. If anyone feels otherwise, comment or leave a review.
Muy buena historia de Pokémon que convina bien los géneros de desarrollo de personaje y como que quiere meter desarrollo de reino, lo unico malo es en los ultimo capitulos mete mucho la perspectiva de otra personas es bueno de vez en cuando ese punto de vista pero últimamente lo ponen mucho, ademas de que las batallas son muy largas digo esta bien cuando son batallas finales o de torneo pero las demás deberían ser rápidas.
Increíble, un mundo realista sin dejar de lado lo que hace mágico al anime, bien añadida la historia al mundo original. Espero de corazón que no se corte, fuerza al autor!!!
O começo é um pouco fraco, mais não é por isso que é ruim enfim, hoje em dia a história está em um ponto maravilhoso. Ansioso por cada novo capítulo, uma das melhores história em andamento nesse momento as escolhas do Pokémon são maravilhosas
Author san, I am quite enjoying the content of novel you have posted. It has a brilliant story and a very good background. It is different from some some other novels about pokemon but the idea is quite from my taste is quite refreshing and amazing. Hoping for this novel to continue delivering and becoming a masterpiece.
It's actually a good pokemon book the fights could be a little longer and say more detailed, but it's good so far, the background story building is better than other Pokemon stories I have read, I'm looking forward to more ancient pokemon added, tho if i might suggest a pokemon ,Say the evolution of applin to dipplin to hydrapple, you could have him take the applin after a rocket or villian team skirmish
by the way how tall is electivire it always disappoints me that electivire is 5'11 that's why in Pokemon Arceus I have a alpha shiny electivire
Love it 3 chapters a day entertaining although sometimes it’s confusing how they move from one point to another it’s still enjoyable and fun to read I recommend 10/10
This is a very good Fanfic. Good storyline, good Pokémon development, training and decent pacing. The only critiques I really have are the lack of true world building for each major city before the gym battle. A lack of a human traveling companion to ground the MC and our views of the world this fic takes place in. And lastly, the pokemon battles themselves need some work.
The author said there will be electivire so here you go as a thank you for having my favorite electric type pokemon time to shine.
read more Pokemon stories ..you have a good story but your writing style needs work mainly for battles .just read some good fics out there and work on it and your fic will go to another level
The story is incredible. Like it shouldn’t be this god but it is. The writing is great with little to no grammar errors and the world seems to have a completely different perspective than the normal franchise. The world building is simply incredible. It’s Unique and do that it truly shines. This deserves my 5 stars.
The story is great, read the first arc, the mc just ticks me off time to time. He’s a hypocrite, hates corruption and bashes on those who do illegal things but then gets a Pokémon illegally. Dislikes the people that has helped and kept him safe because they do illegal activities Being from a city or region that’s like Gotham. It’s like hating Spiderman and Batman because they are vigilantes. Not to mention he’s a child bashing on adults that can kill him any time and they just let it happen. What I don’t get is that a rotomdex exsits but there’s never been an Electivire before?
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์The best pokemon fic I've read yet, you really show that's not about the goal, but the journey! Looking forward for more! 140140140140140140140140140140
i love it no op cheat no dead pokemon boy parts to increase strength no potential stuff only training methods and bond over all perfect plot
A Fantastic Pokémon fanfic. The Pokémon team is interesting. The premises interesting. The character is interesting. The origin story is interesting. Here’s five stars to keep you going. Thanks for the great read.
i think is a great fanfic but i have afraid of you dropped this ... well you make an excellent job building the character and preferences of mc and the construction of the team looks cool maybe they need learn some mt that cover his weakness of type but is ok
hmm, I don't like that all of his fic's cut off before reaching 30 chapters, so I don't think I'll be willing to read it unless it reaches at least 50 chapters
for the moment it's a good start. I like the behavior of the mc. the world is realistic while keeping this childish side. keep it up author.
It's a very great Pokemon fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 You rewrite this story make it more enjoyable and great author sama.. The story is better 👍👍 I like how Archer is smart/genius/nerd, but so bad with interaction with other people.. I like his detailed breeding plan (either for his pokemon or other).. I like his pokemon team, but how can that be a Slakoth/Slaking clan in Kanto?? I can understand if he get him from breeder house, smuggling ring, get it when he go to other region (like how he got metagross when he go to Sinnoh), or take it from others (like how he save, then get rookidee from Mirage Master).. Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์This is my second review, one that is up to date with the fanfic. This fanfic is the best in world building, adventure, Character relations and progress of MC. After rewriting- I find that the battles are good. If anyone feels otherwise, comment or leave a review.
Muy buena historia de Pokémon que convina bien los géneros de desarrollo de personaje y como que quiere meter desarrollo de reino, lo unico malo es en los ultimo capitulos mete mucho la perspectiva de otra personas es bueno de vez en cuando ese punto de vista pero últimamente lo ponen mucho, ademas de que las batallas son muy largas digo esta bien cuando son batallas finales o de torneo pero las demás deberían ser rápidas.
Increíble, un mundo realista sin dejar de lado lo que hace mágico al anime, bien añadida la historia al mundo original. Espero de corazón que no se corte, fuerza al autor!!!
O começo é um pouco fraco, mais não é por isso que é ruim enfim, hoje em dia a história está em um ponto maravilhoso. Ansioso por cada novo capítulo, uma das melhores história em andamento nesse momento as escolhas do Pokémon são maravilhosas
Author san, I am quite enjoying the content of novel you have posted. It has a brilliant story and a very good background. It is different from some some other novels about pokemon but the idea is quite from my taste is quite refreshing and amazing. Hoping for this novel to continue delivering and becoming a masterpiece.
It's actually a good pokemon book the fights could be a little longer and say more detailed, but it's good so far, the background story building is better than other Pokemon stories I have read, I'm looking forward to more ancient pokemon added, tho if i might suggest a pokemon ,Say the evolution of applin to dipplin to hydrapple, you could have him take the applin after a rocket or villian team skirmish
by the way how tall is electivire it always disappoints me that electivire is 5'11 that's why in Pokemon Arceus I have a alpha shiny electivire
Love it 3 chapters a day entertaining although sometimes it’s confusing how they move from one point to another it’s still enjoyable and fun to read I recommend 10/10
This is a very good Fanfic. Good storyline, good Pokémon development, training and decent pacing. The only critiques I really have are the lack of true world building for each major city before the gym battle. A lack of a human traveling companion to ground the MC and our views of the world this fic takes place in. And lastly, the pokemon battles themselves need some work.
The author said there will be electivire so here you go as a thank you for having my favorite electric type pokemon time to shine.
read more Pokemon stories ..you have a good story but your writing style needs work mainly for battles .just read some good fics out there and work on it and your fic will go to another level
The story is incredible. Like it shouldn’t be this god but it is. The writing is great with little to no grammar errors and the world seems to have a completely different perspective than the normal franchise. The world building is simply incredible. It’s Unique and do that it truly shines. This deserves my 5 stars.
The story is great, read the first arc, the mc just ticks me off time to time. He’s a hypocrite, hates corruption and bashes on those who do illegal things but then gets a Pokémon illegally. Dislikes the people that has helped and kept him safe because they do illegal activities Being from a city or region that’s like Gotham. It’s like hating Spiderman and Batman because they are vigilantes. Not to mention he’s a child bashing on adults that can kill him any time and they just let it happen. What I don’t get is that a rotomdex exsits but there’s never been an Electivire before?
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์The best pokemon fic I've read yet, you really show that's not about the goal, but the journey! Looking forward for more! 140140140140140140140140140140
i love it no op cheat no dead pokemon boy parts to increase strength no potential stuff only training methods and bond over all perfect plot
A Fantastic Pokémon fanfic. The Pokémon team is interesting. The premises interesting. The character is interesting. The origin story is interesting. Here’s five stars to keep you going. Thanks for the great read.
i think is a great fanfic but i have afraid of you dropped this ... well you make an excellent job building the character and preferences of mc and the construction of the team looks cool maybe they need learn some mt that cover his weakness of type but is ok
hmm, I don't like that all of his fic's cut off before reaching 30 chapters, so I don't think I'll be willing to read it unless it reaches at least 50 chapters
for the moment it's a good start. I like the behavior of the mc. the world is realistic while keeping this childish side. keep it up author.
It's a very great Pokemon fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 You rewrite this story make it more enjoyable and great author sama.. The story is better 👍👍 I like how Archer is smart/genius/nerd, but so bad with interaction with other people.. I like his detailed breeding plan (either for his pokemon or other).. I like his pokemon team, but how can that be a Slakoth/Slaking clan in Kanto?? I can understand if he get him from breeder house, smuggling ring, get it when he go to other region (like how he got metagross when he go to Sinnoh), or take it from others (like how he save, then get rookidee from Mirage Master).. Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍
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