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I like this book very much. There are many things I personally like. Starting from strong MC, well written text, interesting plot and ending with some kind of an intrigue regarding MC's powers. I hope author will not drop it and give us more chapters to enjoy! thanks
Hello thare, i just added this story to my collection, and wanted to ask you Mr Author some things about this story, if you will be so kind to answer them.
Originally, I was rather skeptical about the combination of the Minecraft Powers and ASOIAF, but in the end, it worked well... This novel certainly was a very pleasant surprise, and it has very good potential for the Kingdom Building and so on... There are also signs that the ASOIAF World may be connected to the Minecraft Dimension... The release rate is a bit slower, but at the same time, it's better than work being dropped or anything... Overall, hopefully, this novel will continue till the end; combinations such as this are rare, and even rarely, they are done well enough...
it's good from the start, no it is actually a masterpiece but lately the latest chapters have no substance. it's getting boring as it goes on.
chapter 80 - google translator I have been following the author's work since other works, unfortunately none of which he has finished, although he claims it is just a hiatus, so it helps to see a little of his progress and way as a writer, which helps a little to better judge this work. . Writing Quality - His writing is very good, although I am not fluent in English I did not find it difficult to understand what was conveyed in the story.… Since I'm not fluent I can't judge much about this point either. . Updating Stability - This is a problem in my opinion, despite there being consistency in postings, they apparently occur without a fixed day or schedule, only posted if there is a chapter available. Despite this, we don't usually go much more than a week or two without chapters, so it's not that bad but it could be much better. . Story Development - The development of the story is good, it is linear without many incidents, everything seems to be as it should be. Sometimes things happen that don't seem right or are too surreal, but they can be easily forgotten due to the overall quality of the rest of the story. . Character Design - the character is well made, a little out of place at times and at others he presents behaviors that do not fit with the initial profile presented, but it can also be ignored due to the overall quality of the product . world background - There's not much to say, much of it is something from GOT, the part written by the author of this Fic is well done and elaborated, managing to fit in with the world of GOT, however not everything is shown and as the story progresses, it doesn't seem like it will be shown either, only the existence of the places was mentioned. . Well, that's my review, I hope it pleases those who wanted to know more, my conclusion? It's worth reading this story, do it
There are some issues with the writing but overall this is a pretty good fanfic
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I really really like this story, It's long and takes time to flsh out a lot of stuff. I want more lol I kinda bindged it so now I am sad I have to wait for an upload lol
I honestly really love this novel my only complaint is how few chapters there are lol you got a life tho ik I just wish I had money to help support you on patreon
Great story Author also has a new story with a marvel edition highly recommended
Peek story. One of my favorite fanfiction and also Kingdom Building story. The writing quality was great and immersive. Azrael, the Mc, is a great OC as his personality was perfect for me. He was kind to his people but is willing to kill if needed. His character develop through experiencing the new world he was in. As for the side characters, they're likable and I can say that the Author new his way with it. The World Background was detailed that you can really imagine the face of characters and image of the structures. Adding to it is that the Author also put images to the paragraph comments to make it more immersive. 5/5
I've not read this. I'm rating it 5 stars in hopes you work out your other fanfic, i miss reading your work with the avatar pandora. Hopefully you do see this.
It's good, but the updating schedule is very bad, the characters are good, storytelling is great, plus I like the Main Characters powers, I really wish they could update more frequently, I love this story.
Extra chapter! Extra chapter! Extra chapter! Extra chapter! Extra chapter! Extra chapter!
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Great Fan-Fiction and it isn't boring, sure the MC is overpowered, but sometimes an OP MC isn't a bad thing. This is one of those times.
Well, in front of a new book, I set out to play Minecraft again on my phone after years of not doing it, work and college did not let me, and I still like it, it is very useful for stress and anxiety, now, as you will see, the protagonist will have the power to access the creative menu of Minecraft, with all that entails, so he will have an overwhelming power in Asoiaf, now, that doesn't mean that he will be Op, although when the story is already very advanced he will end up being so in a moment, but he will start from the bottom, he will still be a normal human that bleeds and can die, besides not knowing or knowing any technique and handling in weapons, so he will have to walk carefully for fear of dying from one moment to the next. It only remains for me to tell every lovely reader to dive into my story, which will be a little slow at first, but that does not mean it will be boring, and if you embark on reading, I assure you that it will fascinate you.
I like this book very much. There are many things I personally like. Starting from strong MC, well written text, interesting plot and ending with some kind of an intrigue regarding MC's powers. I hope author will not drop it and give us more chapters to enjoy! thanks
Hello thare, i just added this story to my collection, and wanted to ask you Mr Author some things about this story, if you will be so kind to answer them.
Originally, I was rather skeptical about the combination of the Minecraft Powers and ASOIAF, but in the end, it worked well... This novel certainly was a very pleasant surprise, and it has very good potential for the Kingdom Building and so on... There are also signs that the ASOIAF World may be connected to the Minecraft Dimension... The release rate is a bit slower, but at the same time, it's better than work being dropped or anything... Overall, hopefully, this novel will continue till the end; combinations such as this are rare, and even rarely, they are done well enough...
it's good from the start, no it is actually a masterpiece but lately the latest chapters have no substance. it's getting boring as it goes on.
chapter 80 - google translator I have been following the author's work since other works, unfortunately none of which he has finished, although he claims it is just a hiatus, so it helps to see a little of his progress and way as a writer, which helps a little to better judge this work. . Writing Quality - His writing is very good, although I am not fluent in English I did not find it difficult to understand what was conveyed in the story.… Since I'm not fluent I can't judge much about this point either. . Updating Stability - This is a problem in my opinion, despite there being consistency in postings, they apparently occur without a fixed day or schedule, only posted if there is a chapter available. Despite this, we don't usually go much more than a week or two without chapters, so it's not that bad but it could be much better. . Story Development - The development of the story is good, it is linear without many incidents, everything seems to be as it should be. Sometimes things happen that don't seem right or are too surreal, but they can be easily forgotten due to the overall quality of the rest of the story. . Character Design - the character is well made, a little out of place at times and at others he presents behaviors that do not fit with the initial profile presented, but it can also be ignored due to the overall quality of the product . world background - There's not much to say, much of it is something from GOT, the part written by the author of this Fic is well done and elaborated, managing to fit in with the world of GOT, however not everything is shown and as the story progresses, it doesn't seem like it will be shown either, only the existence of the places was mentioned. . Well, that's my review, I hope it pleases those who wanted to know more, my conclusion? It's worth reading this story, do it
There are some issues with the writing but overall this is a pretty good fanfic
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I really really like this story, It's long and takes time to flsh out a lot of stuff. I want more lol I kinda bindged it so now I am sad I have to wait for an upload lol
I honestly really love this novel my only complaint is how few chapters there are lol you got a life tho ik I just wish I had money to help support you on patreon
Great story Author also has a new story with a marvel edition highly recommended
Peek story. One of my favorite fanfiction and also Kingdom Building story. The writing quality was great and immersive. Azrael, the Mc, is a great OC as his personality was perfect for me. He was kind to his people but is willing to kill if needed. His character develop through experiencing the new world he was in. As for the side characters, they're likable and I can say that the Author new his way with it. The World Background was detailed that you can really imagine the face of characters and image of the structures. Adding to it is that the Author also put images to the paragraph comments to make it more immersive. 5/5
I've not read this. I'm rating it 5 stars in hopes you work out your other fanfic, i miss reading your work with the avatar pandora. Hopefully you do see this.
It's good, but the updating schedule is very bad, the characters are good, storytelling is great, plus I like the Main Characters powers, I really wish they could update more frequently, I love this story.
Extra chapter! Extra chapter! Extra chapter! Extra chapter! Extra chapter! Extra chapter!
Woooo 2 chapters[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Great Fan-Fiction and it isn't boring, sure the MC is overpowered, but sometimes an OP MC isn't a bad thing. This is one of those times.
Well, in front of a new book, I set out to play Minecraft again on my phone after years of not doing it, work and college did not let me, and I still like it, it is very useful for stress and anxiety, now, as you will see, the protagonist will have the power to access the creative menu of Minecraft, with all that entails, so he will have an overwhelming power in Asoiaf, now, that doesn't mean that he will be Op, although when the story is already very advanced he will end up being so in a moment, but he will start from the bottom, he will still be a normal human that bleeds and can die, besides not knowing or knowing any technique and handling in weapons, so he will have to walk carefully for fear of dying from one moment to the next. It only remains for me to tell every lovely reader to dive into my story, which will be a little slow at first, but that does not mean it will be boring, and if you embark on reading, I assure you that it will fascinate you.