KING OF THE ABYSS

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World_Eater117

Hey guys，Author here, I know the first few chapters are filled with fillers with hardly any consequence on the plot but I can assure you it is. Its my first novel, so I had to get a feel for writing before I moved to important plot points. Hope you like it, don't forget to vote and leave a review.

LV 1

Synian

This novel is piece of garbage, a shame on literature world. Another thing, he used alt accounts to get exactly 10 reviews and 1 review from himself and got a good rating for no reason. I mean, if it's really that good then after getting contracted, why's it still running like a uncontacted novel? The reviewing accounts are all lvl1, they only took one action in their account and that is to review this piece of shit, huh? So basically, don't waste your time here!

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Pakaye_Israel

This novel is excellent. Honestly, it didn't seem good at first, but after about 15 chapters, the story started flowing seamlessly.

The narrative is very smooth so I could imagine each scene clearly, and it isn't so copious that I get bored. The words they use are particularly great and make me understand the feelings of the characters.

Excellent work! I don't know what to say to express how satisfied I am with this work. I was going through books about magic and I found this. This is a masterpiece! I'm very proud of you, author!

Pretty good novel, even considering I'm not a native English speaker. Overall a solid 7/10 can put, I wish the author to continue in the same grit.

So not really a phenomenal novel, but after reading nothing but Shadow Slave for a while now, it's a welcome reprieve. Keep it on author, this is gonna be my rest novel. Haha!!

Honestly, I'm just here to support a friend, not really into reading. While what I've read is good material, it still doesn't push me to start reading light novels. Could someone recommend something for me so I can compare.

I liked what I read, though it could use improvement. At least the plot isn't rigid even though I still don't know where we're headed to, the conversations could be more lifelike. I've said my piece, I would recommend it anytime.

Not really good with words, saw the link on instagram and decided to check it out. This could be way better, it has a good plot and could be a masterpiece if the author doesn't ruin it. I'll keep following it, if it becomes better in the future, I'll drop another review.

My first novel on this platform so forgive me if I'm being biased, but I really like the book, though the age of the characters creates a dissonance for me, hope there's like a timeskip where they mature quickly. Overall, its a really good book, I recommend it for all readers.

The beginning is a little rough around the edges with a lot of things which can be improved on, the grammar is okay, no noticeable errors to point out for now. Keep it up, love to see where it goes.