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I don't know what shit people are spouting about him not being a villain, the author never said that, or Bulma is in the story I'm pretty sure she's just a cameo and has barely any weight in the story. Anyway it's pretty good the events are well developed and I don't have any complaints about the characters or etc, its an enjoyable read imo although so far it's been only about Greek shit but we'll branch out soon so it's whatever.
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He is just straight up not a villain so that’s false advertising at its finest, please add a harem tag as for some of us that’s pretty much an immediate turn off, and also not as important but what’s the point of him having a system, like it literally just shows up, tells him about powers he has, that he should already know since he recognized his own powers as spider man like (and I feel like it would have been much more fun to see him find out it was Miles’s version through trial and error or maybe in battle rather than just have it pop up in the window as bioelectricity), and doesn’t do anything else. Feels like it was added on just to be able to say it’s a system novel but that’s not even tagged anywhere so I’m mildly baffled.
This book is fantastic! The character development and the story telling is thrilling. Waiting for the update of new chapters
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i just saw the author is the one who created Aden Strong...so instant 5Stars
This novel is certainly a massive improvement compared to his last work (at least in my opinion) more specifically compared to the aiden strong ff. I understand that different readers have different preferences but I would recommend to give this one a shot. (If anyone is interested or has questions regarding this ff, I could answer and share my opinions)
He is a hero, the one that will not do anything to the ones that try to kill him, not a villain. Massive clickbait. ...................................... ......................................
a very interesting concept with a promising start. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out whenever I finish reading the newest one. The writer has done a fantastic job.
pretty good writing quality with very less grammatical mistakes. absolute bs characters with the antagonist side being totally brainless. the mc tries to be clever but has no situational awareness to speak of... i would have expected him to die quickly in his earlier profession.
I Cant read this it's personally read this it's just not enticing and the writing style seems a bit boring to me personally
Honestly, the fanfic would have been better if the mc didn’t decide to become a hero in like 5 seconds.
This is the first time I’ve given a 5 star review to a novel and I’ve been on webnovel for over five years now. Seriously though this book is so good that I’m excited for the chapters ahead. Best of wishes to you author and keep it up 👍👍
How about doing a story where the protagonist is a Saiyan and Viltrumite hybrid, these two races work well together? .............................,................
I like this its good the writing quality is very clear and easy to read .,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,. . .,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,. .,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,
How about it connects to the speed force, I saw some stories about Spider-Man with super speed, it was really cool..........................................
Hey iam just starting this but can author say if this is Harem or not and if it's not Harem then who is his love interest? I can't read just to be disappointed so I'm asking!!
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I think this might take a long time so I’ll save it for 3 months and come back
Another faux villain with a cliche background that serves as an excuse for his exaggerated abilities (not counting his spiderman powers). The setting seemed alright until bulma of all people made an appearance and I knew I was in cuckoo alternate universe land. No tag for harem either. This novel is a malicious waste of time if you are searching for a villain mc.
There is no goal for mc....and i dont like when suddenly god cameout of knowere and say bullshit about anything that mc has and dont give any explanation...its also frustrating that the relationship is not going knowere any time soon........the plot also confusing and dragging because i really dont like the themiscya and greek god ark because mc is not doing anything beside interacting with random god who at the end of the chapter quote"heh,interesting"....its give a vibe "mystery but i dont know how to write one*
I don't know what shit people are spouting about him not being a villain, the author never said that, or Bulma is in the story I'm pretty sure she's just a cameo and has barely any weight in the story. Anyway it's pretty good the events are well developed and I don't have any complaints about the characters or etc, its an enjoyable read imo although so far it's been only about Greek shit but we'll branch out soon so it's whatever.
Thanks very good,..................................Kdjdjdkskkskskskskdk kskskskskskkskdkkskdkdkd kdkdkdkskdkkdkdkdkzkkzkzkskskkskskkzkkkzks kdkdkdkskdkdkdkdkdkxkdkdkdkkdkdkdkdkdkdk.........
He is just straight up not a villain so that’s false advertising at its finest, please add a harem tag as for some of us that’s pretty much an immediate turn off, and also not as important but what’s the point of him having a system, like it literally just shows up, tells him about powers he has, that he should already know since he recognized his own powers as spider man like (and I feel like it would have been much more fun to see him find out it was Miles’s version through trial and error or maybe in battle rather than just have it pop up in the window as bioelectricity), and doesn’t do anything else. Feels like it was added on just to be able to say it’s a system novel but that’s not even tagged anywhere so I’m mildly baffled.
This book is fantastic! The character development and the story telling is thrilling. Waiting for the update of new chapters
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ i just saw the author is the one who created Aden Strong...so instant 5Stars
This novel is certainly a massive improvement compared to his last work (at least in my opinion) more specifically compared to the aiden strong ff. I understand that different readers have different preferences but I would recommend to give this one a shot. (If anyone is interested or has questions regarding this ff, I could answer and share my opinions)
He is a hero, the one that will not do anything to the ones that try to kill him, not a villain. Massive clickbait. ...................................... ......................................
a very interesting concept with a promising start. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out whenever I finish reading the newest one. The writer has done a fantastic job.
pretty good writing quality with very less grammatical mistakes. absolute bs characters with the antagonist side being totally brainless. the mc tries to be clever but has no situational awareness to speak of... i would have expected him to die quickly in his earlier profession.
I Cant read this it's personally read this it's just not enticing and the writing style seems a bit boring to me personally
Honestly, the fanfic would have been better if the mc didn’t decide to become a hero in like 5 seconds.
This is the first time I’ve given a 5 star review to a novel and I’ve been on webnovel for over five years now. Seriously though this book is so good that I’m excited for the chapters ahead. Best of wishes to you author and keep it up 👍👍
How about doing a story where the protagonist is a Saiyan and Viltrumite hybrid, these two races work well together? .............................,................
I like this its good the writing quality is very clear and easy to read .,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,. . .,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,. .,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,
How about it connects to the speed force, I saw some stories about Spider-Man with super speed, it was really cool..........................................
Hey iam just starting this but can author say if this is Harem or not and if it's not Harem then who is his love interest? I can't read just to be disappointed so I'm asking!!
Áaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaáaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa áaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaáaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa áaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaáaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
I think this might take a long time so I’ll save it for 3 months and come back
Another faux villain with a cliche background that serves as an excuse for his exaggerated abilities (not counting his spiderman powers). The setting seemed alright until bulma of all people made an appearance and I knew I was in cuckoo alternate universe land. No tag for harem either. This novel is a malicious waste of time if you are searching for a villain mc.
There is no goal for mc....and i dont like when suddenly god cameout of knowere and say bullshit about anything that mc has and dont give any explanation...its also frustrating that the relationship is not going knowere any time soon........the plot also confusing and dragging because i really dont like the themiscya and greek god ark because mc is not doing anything beside interacting with random god who at the end of the chapter quote"heh,interesting"....its give a vibe "mystery but i dont know how to write one*