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เขียนรีวิวIt is beautiful… After Disney has the let us down, this one true masterpiece is left to maintain the glory of George Lucas and his beautiful serene and gorgeously crafted world. At night I dream of this book. This is the most beautiful thing I’ve ever found here. I hope this never ends for it is a fresh start a beautiful beginning and will be a sorrow full end. thank you for making this masterpiece.
The only thing I don't like about this book is having to wait for the ext chapter to be released, other then that, one of the best things I have read
I definitely hope you continue this beautifully written Story I absolutely love how you make the Padawans who are still learning humanized and have difficulties being in control of their emotions on top of being Teenagers and Children in a Galactic War.
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It has everything you would want in a fanfiction, I need to invokes obsession. can't wait for the next chapter
A masterpiece. The protagonist gives me vibes similar to Commissar Ciaphas Cain, as if he were a character who constantly faces danger but always manages to come out on top in a clever and almost effortless way, much like Cain.
Well, I will say it the simplest way possible. You know it's a good story when you check the reviews hoping that he stole it from somewhere, so you can continue reading (it's not 😔)
Keep it up do not stop it is good. and if you have to get him his own personal spaceship I would recommend the ebon hawk or the vcx 100 light freighter
Hikaye gidişat olarak çok güzel gidiyor. Gramer hataları yok denilecek kadar az anlaşılabilir gayet güzel bir hikaye Yazara Böyle bir hikaye yazdığı için Teşekkürler
I hope the story continues, I'm looking forward to it. What I wanted to say for the story is going really well, the concept is really nice, the writing style really impressed me, I hope you continue writing.
Emotion, yet peace. Ignorance, yet knowledge. Passion, yet serenity. Chaos, yet harmony. Death, yet the Force. "Part of me you are, yes. But power over me you have not. Through patience and training, it is I who control you." ―Yoda, to the shadow of his soul
Don't you ever stop writing. With everything about star wars crumbling right before our eyes, this is a light in the dark. A story that is different and doesn't tarnish what has been created by George Lucas and something that lives so dearly in the hearts of many people. This is absolutely great, and chapter 19 confirmed my feelings toward it. Thank you
a really great read, the Grammer is excellent, and the character interactions are top quality, I would recommend it if you want a good engaging read. although I do wish the author would update it more often. Either way, it's still a really great fanfic.
It’s a really good story so far the only thing that sucks is the inconsistency on the updates.
I'm really hooked on the story, and so far, all the chapters released are of good quality. It's definitely one of the better fanfics on here.
I really love this fan fic, The MC makes the series set. Feel like you as An author has really thought out. The MC is a good guy, but not in a way that feels forced or overly righteous. It's like if a good guy was born in a bad place, with the chance to do something right. And I can't wait for the reveal of when everyone finds out he's not actually a jedi.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์This has a lot of potential. I’m really enjoying the character and the story’s concept. Looking forward to how the mc develops and changes possibly becoming more responsible and taking a voluntary role in the war for the greater good
A very promising concept, there are clear signs of inexperience in the plot but they are minor. I hope the author knows that it is impossible to use the light and dark sides at the same time, this leads to madness and death
Hope he stops trying to run back to his sad life and sees the bigger picture of his fortunate circumstances 😢 🙏 😔... He's been getting annoyingly idiotic!!!
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์Some slight spelling mistakes, otherwise it’s a very promising fanfic. I’m rather excited for future chapters!
Parece prometedor pero hay que esperar a que tenga más capitulos para decidirme 💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
It is beautiful… After Disney has the let us down, this one true masterpiece is left to maintain the glory of George Lucas and his beautiful serene and gorgeously crafted world. At night I dream of this book. This is the most beautiful thing I’ve ever found here. I hope this never ends for it is a fresh start a beautiful beginning and will be a sorrow full end. thank you for making this masterpiece.
The only thing I don't like about this book is having to wait for the ext chapter to be released, other then that, one of the best things I have read
I definitely hope you continue this beautifully written Story I absolutely love how you make the Padawans who are still learning humanized and have difficulties being in control of their emotions on top of being Teenagers and Children in a Galactic War.
[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
It has everything you would want in a fanfiction, I need to invokes obsession. can't wait for the next chapter
A masterpiece. The protagonist gives me vibes similar to Commissar Ciaphas Cain, as if he were a character who constantly faces danger but always manages to come out on top in a clever and almost effortless way, much like Cain.
Well, I will say it the simplest way possible. You know it's a good story when you check the reviews hoping that he stole it from somewhere, so you can continue reading (it's not 😔)
Keep it up do not stop it is good. and if you have to get him his own personal spaceship I would recommend the ebon hawk or the vcx 100 light freighter
Hikaye gidişat olarak çok güzel gidiyor. Gramer hataları yok denilecek kadar az anlaşılabilir gayet güzel bir hikaye Yazara Böyle bir hikaye yazdığı için Teşekkürler
I hope the story continues, I'm looking forward to it. What I wanted to say for the story is going really well, the concept is really nice, the writing style really impressed me, I hope you continue writing.
Emotion, yet peace. Ignorance, yet knowledge. Passion, yet serenity. Chaos, yet harmony. Death, yet the Force. "Part of me you are, yes. But power over me you have not. Through patience and training, it is I who control you." ―Yoda, to the shadow of his soul
Don't you ever stop writing. With everything about star wars crumbling right before our eyes, this is a light in the dark. A story that is different and doesn't tarnish what has been created by George Lucas and something that lives so dearly in the hearts of many people. This is absolutely great, and chapter 19 confirmed my feelings toward it. Thank you
a really great read, the Grammer is excellent, and the character interactions are top quality, I would recommend it if you want a good engaging read. although I do wish the author would update it more often. Either way, it's still a really great fanfic.
It’s a really good story so far the only thing that sucks is the inconsistency on the updates.
I'm really hooked on the story, and so far, all the chapters released are of good quality. It's definitely one of the better fanfics on here.
I really love this fan fic, The MC makes the series set. Feel like you as An author has really thought out. The MC is a good guy, but not in a way that feels forced or overly righteous. It's like if a good guy was born in a bad place, with the chance to do something right. And I can't wait for the reveal of when everyone finds out he's not actually a jedi.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์This has a lot of potential. I’m really enjoying the character and the story’s concept. Looking forward to how the mc develops and changes possibly becoming more responsible and taking a voluntary role in the war for the greater good
A very promising concept, there are clear signs of inexperience in the plot but they are minor. I hope the author knows that it is impossible to use the light and dark sides at the same time, this leads to madness and death
Hope he stops trying to run back to his sad life and sees the bigger picture of his fortunate circumstances 😢 🙏 😔... He's been getting annoyingly idiotic!!!
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์Some slight spelling mistakes, otherwise it’s a very promising fanfic. I’m rather excited for future chapters!
Parece prometedor pero hay que esperar a que tenga más capitulos para decidirme 💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
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