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I like the story, at first I found it somewhat embarrassing but it improved a lot and it is thanks to the author, he is very attentive to every comment and criticism, his dedication is really due to administration. Gracias por leer (Soy de México).
this is history has potential , continue !!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story is pretty good so far and the update stability is awesome. I like the mc is not all sunshine and rainbows and is not afraid to get his hand dirty.
[AS PROMISED THIS IS MY REVIEW AFTER READING ALL AVAILABLE CHAPTERS ] WRITING :🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 STORY:🌟🌟🌟🌟 CHARACHTER:🌟🌟🌟 UPDATING STABILITY:🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 WORLD BACKGROUND :🌟🌟🌟🌟 The writing quality is a bit rough around the edges but improvement is visible as the story progresses. The pacing is a bit off and the tone of the story is in shambles but it needs a bit more chapters to call it hopeless. Well the Main charachter is an O.C. and a common sense lacking uchiha with an unhealthy likeness towards green and a tendency to be prone to violence . The author has been uploading daily so no complaints. The Naruto elements have been integrated to the world of JJK without being cringe and i am thankful for that . I HAVE HIGH HOPES FOR THE STORY GOOD LUCK WITH MAKING THE STORY AUTHOR
Yeah, surpirse surpirse I’m my own biggest support, but seriously hope you enjoy the story🫡
pretty good story, like the main character and his fights. writings pretty good aswell. the plot is good and the way the uchiha is implemented is nice
This fanfiction is too idiotic and mc is really stupid I mean too much stupid even if he has character development in latter stages that I don't know even then i don't think it's worth a read cuz of how stupid mc is in starting chapters I know author must have planned character development and all but it's really annoying to make mc that big of an idiot it starting chapters it's annoying that I can't even pass chapter 3 so yeah iam out
I like the story, at first I found it somewhat embarrassing but it improved a lot and it is thanks to the author, he is very attentive to every comment and criticism, his dedication is really due to administration. Gracias por leer (Soy de México).
this is history has potential , continue !!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story is pretty good so far and the update stability is awesome. I like the mc is not all sunshine and rainbows and is not afraid to get his hand dirty.
[AS PROMISED THIS IS MY REVIEW AFTER READING ALL AVAILABLE CHAPTERS ] WRITING :🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 STORY:🌟🌟🌟🌟 CHARACHTER:🌟🌟🌟 UPDATING STABILITY:🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 WORLD BACKGROUND :🌟🌟🌟🌟 The writing quality is a bit rough around the edges but improvement is visible as the story progresses. The pacing is a bit off and the tone of the story is in shambles but it needs a bit more chapters to call it hopeless. Well the Main charachter is an O.C. and a common sense lacking uchiha with an unhealthy likeness towards green and a tendency to be prone to violence . The author has been uploading daily so no complaints. The Naruto elements have been integrated to the world of JJK without being cringe and i am thankful for that . I HAVE HIGH HOPES FOR THE STORY GOOD LUCK WITH MAKING THE STORY AUTHOR
Yeah, surpirse surpirse I’m my own biggest support, but seriously hope you enjoy the story🫡
pretty good story, like the main character and his fights. writings pretty good aswell. the plot is good and the way the uchiha is implemented is nice
This fanfiction is too idiotic and mc is really stupid I mean too much stupid even if he has character development in latter stages that I don't know even then i don't think it's worth a read cuz of how stupid mc is in starting chapters I know author must have planned character development and all but it's really annoying to make mc that big of an idiot it starting chapters it's annoying that I can't even pass chapter 3 so yeah iam out