Dimensional Nephilim

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r1aouf

the mc is so weak it's straight up illogical he tanked a bullet but got injured by a knife??and almost used a balance breaker to beat lady shiva all that while being a nephilim

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javi299

The story seems promising, my only problem is the MC, he is a reincarnator who lived 18 years in this new world, was born into a powerful family and is a nephilim. But he spent 75% of his magic on an attack that was not very strong to kill a stray devil (yes, those that in the first episodes of DxD are easily killed by any of Rias's servants) And then later Lady Shiva (from DC, not to be confused with the god Shiva) a normal human almost killed the MC with a knife when he previously resisted bullets. The real problem is that he has already been in this world for 18 years and this is the power he got in all this time, in the future, possibly soon because normally in this type of novels not many years pass in the world, he will surely receive illogical power ups to be able to face the enemies that come that are much stronger than a normal human that almost kills him. You couldn't have made MC a little OP from the beginning, knowing that he was born into a powerful family, his race and that he have 18 year of time to train and then have him get stronger little by little instead of making it look like he didn't do anything in 18 years.

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Logan_Bergwein

I lobe this story so far, I was wondering if you had a Schedule for this book?

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Sleeping_dragon26

Honestly this is such great stuff

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guarek03

Not bad so far. The story so far is interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter........................................................................

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Rimuru_tempest264

It’s good but like your last book it’s not good at the power scaling……you have to understand the verse and character’s better so that you can scale them better

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gargantaaa

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sumsum_83460

An intresting story, I like the idea but i wish the chapter were more frequent .........................................................................

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Crayon_Devourer

Love the story, reminds me of your other one which I enjoy

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Jose_Nicolas_Mejia

I love the story, I'm already looking forward to the next chapter. [img=recomendar] [img=recomendar] [img=recomendar] [img=recomendar] [img=recomendar] [img=recomendar]

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Cesar117

Buena historia. Me gusta que el primer mundo que visita sea (#########) y que se lleve a esa chica de ahí. Además me parece divertidísima la reacción de Alfredo a las revelaciones del protagonista, ya que el está acostumbrado a ver y servir a hombres y mujeres similares a dioses (Superman) y dioses literales (mujer maravilla).

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Cesar117

La historia es divertidísima. En algún momento soñé con fanfiction tan locos como DC y dxd, pero nunca me parecieron posibles. Me parecía más posible HP y dxd o Fate y algo más. Pero este está increíble y divertidísimo.

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Dominic_Smith_7238

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dragonhalf_Holsey

I just really wish update it's faster it's good you don't give me a story