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- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
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Why should I read about a man who can't even control himself?........................ ........... ........... ........... ........... ........... ........... ........... ........... ........... ...........
Hello, I am creating a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage -> (Zen ithnovels), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there
Nice novel, with good world building a little mystery and an interesting plot, but above all, I like the character of the mc. The only problem is the updates. Author try to post updates regularly. Can’t wait to read more😁
This review I'm posting is meant to temper early expectations for those hesitant to try the novel, and notify you of a couple things I can't include in the tags. 1. The earlier chapters are a bit slow-paced, but Randolph WILL grow, and he will grow a lot, I promise. 2. The novel is dark, and Randolph is far from morally praiseworthy. He can be considered evil. If you don't like that, you've been warned. 3. Of note, there will be some elements of horror in the novel. 4. The system will stay with Randolph through the entirety of the novel. He'll utilize it as such.
Why should I read about a man who can't even control himself?........................ ........... ........... ........... ........... ........... ........... ........... ........... ........... ...........
Hello, I am creating a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage -> (Zen ithnovels), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there
Nice novel, with good world building a little mystery and an interesting plot, but above all, I like the character of the mc. The only problem is the updates. Author try to post updates regularly. Can’t wait to read more😁
This review I'm posting is meant to temper early expectations for those hesitant to try the novel, and notify you of a couple things I can't include in the tags. 1. The earlier chapters are a bit slow-paced, but Randolph WILL grow, and he will grow a lot, I promise. 2. The novel is dark, and Randolph is far from morally praiseworthy. He can be considered evil. If you don't like that, you've been warned. 3. Of note, there will be some elements of horror in the novel. 4. The system will stay with Randolph through the entirety of the novel. He'll utilize it as such.