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Lamkho_Shillong

c'mon where is the update . ........,...

16d
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Rotten_Water202

This novel is good but the only thing i dont like is the author wont update it regularly

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1mth
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
Godsreader_15

Imma be honest, I'm not happy with myself that I consumed all 340 chapters of this fic. For like four days straight I stayed up till 2am reading this one. My experience with AI written stories is nonexistent but from the reviews and the frequency I can gather that this guy uses a shit ton of it in his works, which kinda pisses me off bc I wasted my winter break reading it. It did feel off on a level but I have gotten used to turning my brain off on this website so I was just reading slop for the heck of it. I do like the exploration of method acting tho, it's a 3.0/5 from me chief.

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1mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Buck_Evans

Please stop dropping your fics in favor a new one. It really frustrating investing time in reading then you just drop it out of nowhere. ..

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4mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
CokeWhale

The writing is essentially GPT-slop. At least 60% of the wordcount could be removed and it would only leave a better story behind. Characters feel disingenuous, as every piece of stilted dialogue has been turned into fancy-sounding drivel by letting the AI (re-?)write it for you, and it really killed any chance of it ever becoming a decent story. Other than that, it drags on to a ridiculous degree, some movies taking up an endless amount of time for no reason, with scenes repeated from different points of view. Every movie generally feels the same in the characters' reactions and the general progression, which leaves behind a boring, repetitive story full of holes and an extreme overuse of AI writing. It's also very clear that you haven't done sufficient research on how movie-making, auditions or general Hollywood works. Then there's the songs forced into every project, even when they don't even remotely fit. Overall, you should be pretty ashamed of this. If it had at least been your own writing, it might be a bit more interesting, but when you run everything through an AI and just release it like that, your own voice and style is completely lost. What's left behind is a story with zero soul. Hopefully you find some way to raise your standards if you want to keep writing, if you can even call this writing.

4mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Mister_Robot

Great till Chapter 205, then for no reason the author inserted forced romance and ruined it. it's a hot mess. There are better Hollywood themed novels in Webnovel like Versatile Superstar and many others whose names I can't remember. FORCED ROMANCE DISGUSTED ME

4mth
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
YupThatsNotMe

It's a nice story. Other works of this author is also good. BTW, I heard an awesome song today - John Mayer - Say - I hope the author corporates this song in this one. It's beautiful!

4mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Aaron_Hand_4795

Brilliant Hollywood novel, really good cheat which doesn’t just give him the skills to succeed. Overall one of my favourite novels of this genre, good to see a different type of mc also.

5mth
ดู 4 การตอบกลับ
Ep_E_X

Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate 0.0 Review should be more than 140 characters Too much water

5mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Lavaboy_98

Easily one of the best Hollywood fanfics out on webnovel

5mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
HaremHater

Its a good hollywood fic but so far the MC just feels so one dimensional like a perfect character who can never make a mistake. Donating to charity and not seeking revenge like it feels very unnatural ig? Idk

5mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
SANX100
LV 13 Badge

This is actually a masterpiece. The author've created this just by using real life-based information, and that seems actually surreal for me. Obviously, that means that the author has done a lot of research since starting "Tycoon Actor in Hollywood" because you can't just do something like that without giving any kind of preparation ahead. First of all, I think that the relationship between Lucas and Jennifer is really beautiful because it has its own ups and downs. Everyone's had it once in their life. But the main thing is that they'll figure it out together like an indestructible couple of lovers.

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5mth
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
Ep_E_X

Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate 0.0 Review should be more than 140 characters Trash

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6mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Wills_Blunt

Loving this keep up the good work, only reason am not giving it a 5 is because there's always more room for improvement

6mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Porkster_Terry

While the story is good in general & progressing nicely, the mc feels very one dimensional. See nobody can be good all the time, i am not saying to make him a criminal or anything along those lines, i just feel he is always too good. Taking care of everybody, donating everything, never felling anything bad or taking revenge for that matter, loving somebody all of a sudden, etc. It feels like a game or some mythological who is always calm, virtuous. But it doesn't work actually.

6mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Ep_E_X

Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate 0.0 Review should be more than 140 characters

6mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Alexxz

Gran novela amigo, también hice una portada sobre esta novela jaja, lo hice con un personaje más realista ya que en la novela interactura con gente real, así que se me hace raro hacerlo estilo animación, ojala te guste, sigue con el buen trabajo[img=strong][img=strong] Por cierto en la respuesta dejaré la versión blanca

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6mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
SANX100
LV 13 Badge

I think it is the best Hollywood fanfic I've ever read. You know, you will understand me when you read it.[img=Smug]

7mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
DxrkSosa

Ну, это работа действительно хороша, понравился главный герой, хотя то что у него нашлась вторая половинка так рано это немного разочарование на самом деле, ну а так все хорошо!

7mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Ep_E_X

Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate 0.0 Review should be more than 140 characters

7mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Kabirat_Taye

am loving it , although av not raed it finish,but still loving it

7mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Ezra_Neala_Samoans

There's no spoilers here. 😏 Well anyways, I really love this type of story. #Transmigration #Showbiz #Acting #Career-focus #Cheat

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7mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Halsckym

I love this story and how the writer describes the path of the mc through an alternative Hollywood

7mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
sooshe
LV 13 Badge

Great novel; the pacing is also good, like that he has no system but has powers or skills (which make him different than everyone; who doesn't like an OP MC? ), which makes it a unique experience. Dialogue between characters does not feel forced. Kudos to the author.

7mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
mohi_ahm

I like your writing. Story Development is good and stable. Uber's idea is excellent. World Background should be more planned. I like your writing. Story Development is good and stable. Uber's idea is excellent. World Background should be more planned.

7mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
ilove_3260

Does it have romance if it does who’s the love interest?

7mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
MrCouchPotato

Love it but it has too many unnecessary small info

7mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Isacc_Santos

I like it.........✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌🖕✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🖕✌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

8mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
The_Crimson_Writer

Just read the newest chapter (234) and I’ll have to say I’m really enjoying this story so far. The original characters are done well and the real characters are written fairly similar to how I’d imagine they’d be in real life. I’ll also like to say that I’ve read some of your previous work (Gamer Tycoon) and you’re written has greatly improved since the beginnings of that story. So do keep up the hard work

8mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Lamkho_Shillong

c'mon where is the update . ........,...

16d
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Rotten_Water202

This novel is good but the only thing i dont like is the author wont update it regularly

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1mth
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
Godsreader_15

Imma be honest, I'm not happy with myself that I consumed all 340 chapters of this fic. For like four days straight I stayed up till 2am reading this one. My experience with AI written stories is nonexistent but from the reviews and the frequency I can gather that this guy uses a shit ton of it in his works, which kinda pisses me off bc I wasted my winter break reading it. It did feel off on a level but I have gotten used to turning my brain off on this website so I was just reading slop for the heck of it. I do like the exploration of method acting tho, it's a 3.0/5 from me chief.

img
1mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Buck_Evans

Please stop dropping your fics in favor a new one. It really frustrating investing time in reading then you just drop it out of nowhere. ..

img
4mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
CokeWhale

The writing is essentially GPT-slop. At least 60% of the wordcount could be removed and it would only leave a better story behind. Characters feel disingenuous, as every piece of stilted dialogue has been turned into fancy-sounding drivel by letting the AI (re-?)write it for you, and it really killed any chance of it ever becoming a decent story. Other than that, it drags on to a ridiculous degree, some movies taking up an endless amount of time for no reason, with scenes repeated from different points of view. Every movie generally feels the same in the characters' reactions and the general progression, which leaves behind a boring, repetitive story full of holes and an extreme overuse of AI writing. It's also very clear that you haven't done sufficient research on how movie-making, auditions or general Hollywood works. Then there's the songs forced into every project, even when they don't even remotely fit. Overall, you should be pretty ashamed of this. If it had at least been your own writing, it might be a bit more interesting, but when you run everything through an AI and just release it like that, your own voice and style is completely lost. What's left behind is a story with zero soul. Hopefully you find some way to raise your standards if you want to keep writing, if you can even call this writing.

4mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Mister_Robot

Great till Chapter 205, then for no reason the author inserted forced romance and ruined it. it's a hot mess. There are better Hollywood themed novels in Webnovel like Versatile Superstar and many others whose names I can't remember. FORCED ROMANCE DISGUSTED ME

4mth
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
YupThatsNotMe

It's a nice story. Other works of this author is also good. BTW, I heard an awesome song today - John Mayer - Say - I hope the author corporates this song in this one. It's beautiful!

4mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Aaron_Hand_4795

Brilliant Hollywood novel, really good cheat which doesn’t just give him the skills to succeed. Overall one of my favourite novels of this genre, good to see a different type of mc also.

5mth
ดู 4 การตอบกลับ
Ep_E_X

Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate 0.0 Review should be more than 140 characters Too much water

5mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Lavaboy_98

Easily one of the best Hollywood fanfics out on webnovel

5mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
HaremHater

Its a good hollywood fic but so far the MC just feels so one dimensional like a perfect character who can never make a mistake. Donating to charity and not seeking revenge like it feels very unnatural ig? Idk

5mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
SANX100
LV 13 Badge

This is actually a masterpiece. The author've created this just by using real life-based information, and that seems actually surreal for me. Obviously, that means that the author has done a lot of research since starting "Tycoon Actor in Hollywood" because you can't just do something like that without giving any kind of preparation ahead. First of all, I think that the relationship between Lucas and Jennifer is really beautiful because it has its own ups and downs. Everyone's had it once in their life. But the main thing is that they'll figure it out together like an indestructible couple of lovers.

img
5mth
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
Ep_E_X

Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate 0.0 Review should be more than 140 characters Trash

เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
6mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Wills_Blunt

Loving this keep up the good work, only reason am not giving it a 5 is because there's always more room for improvement

6mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Porkster_Terry

While the story is good in general & progressing nicely, the mc feels very one dimensional. See nobody can be good all the time, i am not saying to make him a criminal or anything along those lines, i just feel he is always too good. Taking care of everybody, donating everything, never felling anything bad or taking revenge for that matter, loving somebody all of a sudden, etc. It feels like a game or some mythological who is always calm, virtuous. But it doesn't work actually.

6mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Ep_E_X

Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate 0.0 Review should be more than 140 characters

6mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Alexxz

Gran novela amigo, también hice una portada sobre esta novela jaja, lo hice con un personaje más realista ya que en la novela interactura con gente real, así que se me hace raro hacerlo estilo animación, ojala te guste, sigue con el buen trabajo[img=strong][img=strong] Por cierto en la respuesta dejaré la versión blanca

img
6mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
SANX100
LV 13 Badge

I think it is the best Hollywood fanfic I've ever read. You know, you will understand me when you read it.[img=Smug]

7mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
DxrkSosa

Ну, это работа действительно хороша, понравился главный герой, хотя то что у него нашлась вторая половинка так рано это немного разочарование на самом деле, ну а так все хорошо!

7mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Ep_E_X

Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate 0.0 Review should be more than 140 characters

7mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Kabirat_Taye

am loving it , although av not raed it finish,but still loving it

7mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Ezra_Neala_Samoans

There's no spoilers here. 😏 Well anyways, I really love this type of story. #Transmigration #Showbiz #Acting #Career-focus #Cheat

เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
7mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Halsckym

I love this story and how the writer describes the path of the mc through an alternative Hollywood

7mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
sooshe
LV 13 Badge

Great novel; the pacing is also good, like that he has no system but has powers or skills (which make him different than everyone; who doesn't like an OP MC? ), which makes it a unique experience. Dialogue between characters does not feel forced. Kudos to the author.

7mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
mohi_ahm

I like your writing. Story Development is good and stable. Uber's idea is excellent. World Background should be more planned. I like your writing. Story Development is good and stable. Uber's idea is excellent. World Background should be more planned.

7mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
ilove_3260

Does it have romance if it does who’s the love interest?

7mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
MrCouchPotato

Love it but it has too many unnecessary small info

7mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Isacc_Santos

I like it.........✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌🖕✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🖕✌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

8mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
The_Crimson_Writer

Just read the newest chapter (234) and I’ll have to say I’m really enjoying this story so far. The original characters are done well and the real characters are written fairly similar to how I’d imagine they’d be in real life. I’ll also like to say that I’ve read some of your previous work (Gamer Tycoon) and you’re written has greatly improved since the beginnings of that story. So do keep up the hard work

8mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
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