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I am thoroughly enjoying this book, however I am enjoying it too much therefore I shall stack for awhile. that aside this is a good read. The pacing is good and I love that the char actually has to learn things and the learning is paced. (not blinking and he knows everything) (author, if you wanna go the streaming route eventually, I recommend looking at the way white online did their streaming chaps and TAKE INSPIRATION from it. that book was good till it went downhill, but I genuinely enjoyed the streaming chaps, and it was interesting. Outside of that keep up the good work.)
The setting is great and the build up of the main character is amazing and spending so much time working on the characters development makes this the right one for me. The wording is great for it being a second language for the author to write. Chapters are daily being added to this novel. The work the main character is putting in to become the best possible is great not enough main characters work as hard and he is for his skills. The work he is putting in and being rewarded for the hard work to improve constantly. I can relate to the main character and the struggle he goes through. This is a novel that grabs your attention and pulls you into the world of the novel.
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TLDR: Praising the author on their story and rambling a bit about myself to help prove my point. Also the spoilers are vague ones but I didn’t want to risk it. This story is amazing! I loved the characters, watching them overcoming their struggles and seeing their growth! The writing was immaculate as you really kept me interested throughout! As a reader/viewer I tend to binge stuff I enjoy until I’m either up to date or get distracted by other books or shows and leave them for a while, always intending to go back to it at some point, with some being left for years now without me knowing when I’ll return if ever. But your story brought me back, and I’d say rather quickly compared to others! Coming back and seeing the (end) after the last chapter made me a bit sad because I was hoping for many more! I think I started at ch. 225 today so was happy at the nice chunk I got to read, having stopped just before the tournament arc really took off. I believe I had only stopped because I had almost caught up at the time and didn’t want to be waiting on a possible cliffhanger in the meantime as I waited for more chapters. Also, I had intended to read it sooner but having seen it was deemed completed, I kept pushing it off because if I don’t read it, it won’t end (at least for me). Though I finally caved today and was happy I did because the story is great! The only downside was the story ending. Throughout reading I had occasionally asked “how can it end so soon!?” before reaching the notes about burnout and realizing that was probably why. Although the ending/last chapter felt a bit rushed, it wrapped things up nicely. And I’m glad it didn’t feel a bit rushed before that chapter. Although the story is marked as completed, and not on hiatus like some of your other works, I hope at some point in the future, when you’re no longer burnt out and feel inspired enough, you’d continue this story, like writing a second book/volume in a series. Oooh, and if you did, you could start it by where you left off for a bit and then delve into what had happened within the last month before continuing! Though, I know this is just a selfish request of mine of wanting to read more, especially since I can read your other works, old and new.
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I am not sure if the author did this intentionally but the MC is written like he is austitic and it feels painful to read the narrow scope of his focus and beliefs, While also being convinced to change his narrow view and scope by his dad and Richard. The dad and mom seemed to scheme the conversation about his future together with the sister, but who knows if that was what is truly the best for the MC or if it was what they want. The story goes premium too quickly to see how he progresses or the character development.
I very much like the start of this novel I dont mind it taking a slow approach even appreciate it. But somewhere along the way this novel has lost its mmorpg identity completely and heroism and ideals if an archer are the complete focus which get very boring when that the entire content even though ur supposed to read an mmorpg novel a reincarnation into this world without mmorog part would have probably fit this a lot better
,,,,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,,,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,,,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, amazing, just simply amazing
I have now read 200 pages. In my opinion, it is very exciting. If you are expecting someone who immediately becomes OP, then this is not for you. He has to train and really practice, and practice even more, and I love that a lot. Forget the others who become strong immediately. This person is a madman who never gives up, and I like that. I am excited to see what comes next, but I hope he develops into a leader. Haha, I would really look forward to that, and I hope that he could use the powers he gets in the game in real life too. That would be mega nice, but so far it doesn't look like it. I will write another review when it has over 200 pages. And have fun to everyone who wants to read it. I wish everyone a journey through the training.
i really enjoy the more technical feel to the combat and training for this novel. The grammar is also really good.
This is the dream of all archers and all people who like archery ; this book shows a character with enviable talent and hard work and shows a world were the MC will Prove that archery is the best over all others and it delivers so please read and see his journeys to show that he is the SUPREME ARCHER!
im a dirty cheater but the character is named Lewandowski so i had to give it 5 stars 🗣️🗣️🗣️
I only read up to the chapter lock, but I can say that it's good so far. it's a slow book, and you don't get too far into it before the lock, but if you got the extra coin, I would suggest reading more
As of this point i have only read the first 30 chapters, but i am happy to say i will spend coins on this novel. It is unique and has a nice main character who seems very human compared to a lot of not so good novels out there. I hope the author keeps this up as i think this novel has high potential and i hope it becomes one of the stories i follow closely.
What a fun book, even better getting to see a MC’s weapon be something other than a sword or spear. I really like MC’s personality, willing to put in 110% for whatever he sets his eyes on, no matter who says it can’t be done or how unrealistic it is. I’m looking forward to seeing more of the game world and IRL.
Outstanding accuracy, unparalleled precision, a true master of the bow. A shining example of skill and finesse in archery! It stands both for archery and the novel's plot! Great book!
What is it like to be a scribe? Is it good? In my opinion it's not about being good or not good. If I were to say what I esteem the most in life, I would say - people. People, who gave me a helping hand when I was a mess, when I was alone. And what's interesting, the chance meetings are the ones that influence our lives. The point is that when you profess certain values, even those seemingly universal, you may not find any understanding which, let me say, which helps us to develop. I had luck, let me say, because I found it. And I'd like to thank life. I'd like to thank it - life is singing, life is dancing, life is love. Many people ask me the same question, but how do you do that? where does all your happiness come from? And i replay that it's easy, it's cherishing live, that's what makes me build machines today, and tomorrow... who knows, why not, i would dedicate myself to do some community working and i would be, wham, not least... planting .... i mean... carrots.
What a good book on Webnovel needs to succeed isn't a unique plot, rather a unique concept. The entire setting of the book looks fantastic, it's video game genre and I love that genre almost as much as Xianxia. Now, the main uniqueness in concept comes when we talk about things like the MC's class, it's not a special class or one that's mostly attributed to an MC like Healer who can regenerate or Swordsman, respectively. MC is a plain old Archer, lamest class after Tank (bunch of dudes just gunning to get hit by the boss—or fancy word, Argo). The writer updates well, writes well and cooks well, not burnt or overcooked, just the right type that melts down your throat and leaves you hungry for more. It may be a tad slow paced but no author is dumb, they know what they're doing by making it so, and as a reader you just have to go with the flow and trust they'll deliver. AND HE DID! Oh, and the author always delivers banger covers, I mean, you can't tell me that cover doesn't look hard. I released the moment I saw it :)
A nice and interesting novel that has a game in forcus with the archer class at it weakest! And an MC who is going against the mainstream and getting up to the world top. A bit too slow in progession in my opinion but It can change after I post this review.
this turned out way better than I expected there aren't many stories that focus on archers and you manage to come up with one one that stays immersive and makes you want to keep reading
I am thoroughly enjoying this book, however I am enjoying it too much therefore I shall stack for awhile. that aside this is a good read. The pacing is good and I love that the char actually has to learn things and the learning is paced. (not blinking and he knows everything) (author, if you wanna go the streaming route eventually, I recommend looking at the way white online did their streaming chaps and TAKE INSPIRATION from it. that book was good till it went downhill, but I genuinely enjoyed the streaming chaps, and it was interesting. Outside of that keep up the good work.)
The setting is great and the build up of the main character is amazing and spending so much time working on the characters development makes this the right one for me. The wording is great for it being a second language for the author to write. Chapters are daily being added to this novel. The work the main character is putting in to become the best possible is great not enough main characters work as hard and he is for his skills. The work he is putting in and being rewarded for the hard work to improve constantly. I can relate to the main character and the struggle he goes through. This is a novel that grabs your attention and pulls you into the world of the novel.
Cover art? spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spa, spa, spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spa, spa, spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spa, spa, spam spam spam
TLDR: Praising the author on their story and rambling a bit about myself to help prove my point. Also the spoilers are vague ones but I didn’t want to risk it. This story is amazing! I loved the characters, watching them overcoming their struggles and seeing their growth! The writing was immaculate as you really kept me interested throughout! As a reader/viewer I tend to binge stuff I enjoy until I’m either up to date or get distracted by other books or shows and leave them for a while, always intending to go back to it at some point, with some being left for years now without me knowing when I’ll return if ever. But your story brought me back, and I’d say rather quickly compared to others! Coming back and seeing the (end) after the last chapter made me a bit sad because I was hoping for many more! I think I started at ch. 225 today so was happy at the nice chunk I got to read, having stopped just before the tournament arc really took off. I believe I had only stopped because I had almost caught up at the time and didn’t want to be waiting on a possible cliffhanger in the meantime as I waited for more chapters. Also, I had intended to read it sooner but having seen it was deemed completed, I kept pushing it off because if I don’t read it, it won’t end (at least for me). Though I finally caved today and was happy I did because the story is great! The only downside was the story ending. Throughout reading I had occasionally asked “how can it end so soon!?” before reaching the notes about burnout and realizing that was probably why. Although the ending/last chapter felt a bit rushed, it wrapped things up nicely. And I’m glad it didn’t feel a bit rushed before that chapter. Although the story is marked as completed, and not on hiatus like some of your other works, I hope at some point in the future, when you’re no longer burnt out and feel inspired enough, you’d continue this story, like writing a second book/volume in a series. Oooh, and if you did, you could start it by where you left off for a bit and then delve into what had happened within the last month before continuing! Though, I know this is just a selfish request of mine of wanting to read more, especially since I can read your other works, old and new.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I am not sure if the author did this intentionally but the MC is written like he is austitic and it feels painful to read the narrow scope of his focus and beliefs, While also being convinced to change his narrow view and scope by his dad and Richard. The dad and mom seemed to scheme the conversation about his future together with the sister, but who knows if that was what is truly the best for the MC or if it was what they want. The story goes premium too quickly to see how he progresses or the character development.
I very much like the start of this novel I dont mind it taking a slow approach even appreciate it. But somewhere along the way this novel has lost its mmorpg identity completely and heroism and ideals if an archer are the complete focus which get very boring when that the entire content even though ur supposed to read an mmorpg novel a reincarnation into this world without mmorog part would have probably fit this a lot better
,,,,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,,,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,,,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, ,, amazing, just simply amazing
I have now read 200 pages. In my opinion, it is very exciting. If you are expecting someone who immediately becomes OP, then this is not for you. He has to train and really practice, and practice even more, and I love that a lot. Forget the others who become strong immediately. This person is a madman who never gives up, and I like that. I am excited to see what comes next, but I hope he develops into a leader. Haha, I would really look forward to that, and I hope that he could use the powers he gets in the game in real life too. That would be mega nice, but so far it doesn't look like it. I will write another review when it has over 200 pages. And have fun to everyone who wants to read it. I wish everyone a journey through the training.
i really enjoy the more technical feel to the combat and training for this novel. The grammar is also really good.
This is the dream of all archers and all people who like archery ; this book shows a character with enviable talent and hard work and shows a world were the MC will Prove that archery is the best over all others and it delivers so please read and see his journeys to show that he is the SUPREME ARCHER!
im a dirty cheater but the character is named Lewandowski so i had to give it 5 stars 🗣️🗣️🗣️
I only read up to the chapter lock, but I can say that it's good so far. it's a slow book, and you don't get too far into it before the lock, but if you got the extra coin, I would suggest reading more
As of this point i have only read the first 30 chapters, but i am happy to say i will spend coins on this novel. It is unique and has a nice main character who seems very human compared to a lot of not so good novels out there. I hope the author keeps this up as i think this novel has high potential and i hope it becomes one of the stories i follow closely.
What a fun book, even better getting to see a MC’s weapon be something other than a sword or spear. I really like MC’s personality, willing to put in 110% for whatever he sets his eyes on, no matter who says it can’t be done or how unrealistic it is. I’m looking forward to seeing more of the game world and IRL.
Outstanding accuracy, unparalleled precision, a true master of the bow. A shining example of skill and finesse in archery! It stands both for archery and the novel's plot! Great book!
What is it like to be a scribe? Is it good? In my opinion it's not about being good or not good. If I were to say what I esteem the most in life, I would say - people. People, who gave me a helping hand when I was a mess, when I was alone. And what's interesting, the chance meetings are the ones that influence our lives. The point is that when you profess certain values, even those seemingly universal, you may not find any understanding which, let me say, which helps us to develop. I had luck, let me say, because I found it. And I'd like to thank life. I'd like to thank it - life is singing, life is dancing, life is love. Many people ask me the same question, but how do you do that? where does all your happiness come from? And i replay that it's easy, it's cherishing live, that's what makes me build machines today, and tomorrow... who knows, why not, i would dedicate myself to do some community working and i would be, wham, not least... planting .... i mean... carrots.
What a good book on Webnovel needs to succeed isn't a unique plot, rather a unique concept. The entire setting of the book looks fantastic, it's video game genre and I love that genre almost as much as Xianxia. Now, the main uniqueness in concept comes when we talk about things like the MC's class, it's not a special class or one that's mostly attributed to an MC like Healer who can regenerate or Swordsman, respectively. MC is a plain old Archer, lamest class after Tank (bunch of dudes just gunning to get hit by the boss—or fancy word, Argo). The writer updates well, writes well and cooks well, not burnt or overcooked, just the right type that melts down your throat and leaves you hungry for more. It may be a tad slow paced but no author is dumb, they know what they're doing by making it so, and as a reader you just have to go with the flow and trust they'll deliver. AND HE DID! Oh, and the author always delivers banger covers, I mean, you can't tell me that cover doesn't look hard. I released the moment I saw it :)
A nice and interesting novel that has a game in forcus with the archer class at it weakest! And an MC who is going against the mainstream and getting up to the world top. A bit too slow in progession in my opinion but It can change after I post this review.
this turned out way better than I expected there aren't many stories that focus on archers and you manage to come up with one one that stays immersive and makes you want to keep reading