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Good world building! This is a typically isekai story that i like. I think the MC will be an anti-hero, and that will be the peak. Keep up the good work, Author!
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
It's a good story, keep up the good work, it also has an amazing story line, as expected from uel just like her other novel, I recommend reading it
The novel is interesting , pretty unique .The writing style is nice and the MC is relatable and funny . I am waiting for more ! It got me hooked pretty well ...lol...Keep up the good work !
I didn't really understand that in the first chapter, someone transmigrated. This story is really cool, it is a challenge for me to read the transmigration genre. I've only read half, Looks like this story will be interesting in the future.
The writing quality and structure of the story is excellent, with no mistakes, no reading errors, and nothing too noticeable. The author has already established a great worldbuilding structure, power system, and a well-made MC. there's a lot of potential and growth for this novel life and I hope everyone who sees this review completes the novel as I can assure you that everything needed in a system novel is here.
A captivating dark fantasy adventure filled with intrigue and mystery. The concept of gathering the fragments of the Hero's Sword to fulfill a mission given by the Goddess adds an interesting twist to the plot. It appears to be a promising read for fans of fantasy and adventure genres.
As always, UelUel is here to make my day... Dang, do I even need to tell you that This Story Is F* Good?! If you don't trust me then choose to read it - [This belongs to everyone who is trying to skip it or read the reviews before diving into this masterpiece!!!] ------------------ Now's time for the actuall review. As always, Uel's sentences makes my lungs cry in pain while I'm dying from laughter... five for that... Stability? Even when I read this in one day, I trust, (just as with all your novels) that your stability is as good as I know it. Development? A cute Fluffy on his adventures... What can be more cute than that? = Five for that... Charcet design? Same as Development = Fluffy's cutness saves everything [5 for that] World background = I like the world where Fluffy secretly operates :) Five for that... Overal, PLEASEEEE CONTINUE UEL!!! I need more!!! <3 <3 <3
A combination of great and intuitive ideas. An interesting power system with vast room for exploration and growth. And witty and observational humor.
An interesting plot, well written, perhaps the immersion in the world and background of the world is somewhat overwhelming in the first chapters but improves a lot when the plot begins to develop. Good job, I'll keep reading it
I love it, it's something unique than those typical summoned to another world trope. I'm waiting for more chapter to release so I can binge it🥰
Good read Good read. Cute story, I like it. The only downside is the writing I guess, and the updates. But it's not that bad. Issa good. Issa good
Beginning of another cute story. I loved name of our hero and Also the title is awesome... i am looking forward to reading newer chapters every week. Keep up the good work. I hope your health is better now and We will soon see massive updates. It will be an amazing journey forward.
A good read! Flufffy-wuffy! The work's in present tense like Uel's other works. Present tense from my opinion is hard to write and so far its well-written!
I feel that this work has a lot of potential and definitely needs a lot of polish to really make it shine. There are multiple mistakes throughout where words are missing in sentences, grammar issues and mixing up of present & past tense (and not in the correct way). The writing was quite chopping with sentences feeling very rambly and a bit on the run-on side. While this can be a stylistic choice and can be used to emphasize a feeling of panic or anxiety, these instances happened much too often and not within the correct context. There's also a lot of repetition of the same phrases over and over again such as "heart and mind", "The Curse Lord", "fake body" and these things are repeated over and over again constantly one after another. This, in addition with the rambling sentences, really disrupted the flow and made it difficult to get into the work. It also made it a bit boring to read the same thing over and over again. I would advise to try and space these things out as much as possible and/or use other descriptors/terms so it doesn't feel so repetitive. I felt like the characters weren't very fleshed out and there wasn't very much description of them. It felt like there should be more depth to the words that are being written. As is, it feels very lackluster and as if this is a beginning rough draft rather than a final product. I think there is also a big issue of telling instead of showing. I'm constantly being told "He saw this" "This is what he saw" "This is what he felt" and that can be wonderful if used in the correct context to kind of build upon a situation or feeling, but that's not what was happening here and it happened too often. I felt like I was being told very plainly and it didn't feel exciting. It felt more like I was getting a recap from someone else who had read it and they were giving a TLDR version. The first chapter's opening sentence and ending hook also fall flat. Your first sentence to your novel should really capture people's attention and lead them into the rest of the story, and it didn't really do that. I think it could've had the potential to, but you trailed off that path and veered more into what he was doing so the voice was kind of put on the backburner and forgotten about in that beginning moment. You also contradicted with the "carefree yet caring" moment. This is not described in a way that makes sense and feels confusing. The hook didn't grab me at all and felt more like a "Okay here's what happened" instead of "What's going to happen next? Aren't you curious?" So I wasn't too eager about going into the second chapter to begin with. Then the second chapter itself felt way too info-dumpy. There was no intrigue and nothing to hold attention. I felt more like I was reading a manual rather than a novel. All of that being said, I do think that the premise is good and that it's a great idea. I can see a lot of potential here and I think that with edits/some revisions it will do very well and shine brightly. I hope this review will be helpful to you. I know you can do it!
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In love with the goddess humor. Hehehe fluffyhead will surely grow on me. Too bad won't be seeing it after chapter 3. Looking forward to the story and what the new world would bring to our MC. Hope the goddess won't go back on her words after using him.
At the time of writing, only 2 chapters have been posted so I cannot give a more concrete opinion your work. But so far, I want to say that the premise is interesting. For some reason, the synopsis reminds me of the Fate series, but with the POV of the heroes and not the magus. Overall, I’m excited to see where you’ll take me! Keep up the good work!
Good luck with your new novel... And don't you dare abandon your first novel, The DwarfCat-earedElf... Keep on writing both.
My friend, GTHarris08, referred me to this book, and I must say that I'm really impressed.😁I just hope that the main character's name is not really fluffy sleepyhead, that's really funny 😂😂.
Amazing start, Uel! 😁😁😁😁looking forward to the rest chapters!Waiting to see more adventures of Fluffy Sleepyhead
That was a nice read! The flow of conversation was great, but the "fluffy sleepyhead" still gets me. 🤣 As expected of Uel, I guess? Anyway, great work, and please, more chapters~! 👍
UelUel, The PoruShark Writer, is shamelessly giving this new novel a 5-star review... 😆... Please support the Goddess's Assassin novel, everyone!!!
I love this story! Each chapter leaves me craving for more! Highly recommend!
Good world building! This is a typically isekai story that i like. I think the MC will be an anti-hero, and that will be the peak. Keep up the good work, Author!
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
It's a good story, keep up the good work, it also has an amazing story line, as expected from uel just like her other novel, I recommend reading it
The novel is interesting , pretty unique .The writing style is nice and the MC is relatable and funny . I am waiting for more ! It got me hooked pretty well ...lol...Keep up the good work !
I didn't really understand that in the first chapter, someone transmigrated. This story is really cool, it is a challenge for me to read the transmigration genre. I've only read half, Looks like this story will be interesting in the future.
The writing quality and structure of the story is excellent, with no mistakes, no reading errors, and nothing too noticeable. The author has already established a great worldbuilding structure, power system, and a well-made MC. there's a lot of potential and growth for this novel life and I hope everyone who sees this review completes the novel as I can assure you that everything needed in a system novel is here.
A captivating dark fantasy adventure filled with intrigue and mystery. The concept of gathering the fragments of the Hero's Sword to fulfill a mission given by the Goddess adds an interesting twist to the plot. It appears to be a promising read for fans of fantasy and adventure genres.
As always, UelUel is here to make my day... Dang, do I even need to tell you that This Story Is F* Good?! If you don't trust me then choose to read it - [This belongs to everyone who is trying to skip it or read the reviews before diving into this masterpiece!!!] ------------------ Now's time for the actuall review. As always, Uel's sentences makes my lungs cry in pain while I'm dying from laughter... five for that... Stability? Even when I read this in one day, I trust, (just as with all your novels) that your stability is as good as I know it. Development? A cute Fluffy on his adventures... What can be more cute than that? = Five for that... Charcet design? Same as Development = Fluffy's cutness saves everything [5 for that] World background = I like the world where Fluffy secretly operates :) Five for that... Overal, PLEASEEEE CONTINUE UEL!!! I need more!!! <3 <3 <3
A combination of great and intuitive ideas. An interesting power system with vast room for exploration and growth. And witty and observational humor.
An interesting plot, well written, perhaps the immersion in the world and background of the world is somewhat overwhelming in the first chapters but improves a lot when the plot begins to develop. Good job, I'll keep reading it
I love it, it's something unique than those typical summoned to another world trope. I'm waiting for more chapter to release so I can binge it🥰
Good read Good read. Cute story, I like it. The only downside is the writing I guess, and the updates. But it's not that bad. Issa good. Issa good
Beginning of another cute story. I loved name of our hero and Also the title is awesome... i am looking forward to reading newer chapters every week. Keep up the good work. I hope your health is better now and We will soon see massive updates. It will be an amazing journey forward.
A good read! Flufffy-wuffy! The work's in present tense like Uel's other works. Present tense from my opinion is hard to write and so far its well-written!
I feel that this work has a lot of potential and definitely needs a lot of polish to really make it shine. There are multiple mistakes throughout where words are missing in sentences, grammar issues and mixing up of present & past tense (and not in the correct way). The writing was quite chopping with sentences feeling very rambly and a bit on the run-on side. While this can be a stylistic choice and can be used to emphasize a feeling of panic or anxiety, these instances happened much too often and not within the correct context. There's also a lot of repetition of the same phrases over and over again such as "heart and mind", "The Curse Lord", "fake body" and these things are repeated over and over again constantly one after another. This, in addition with the rambling sentences, really disrupted the flow and made it difficult to get into the work. It also made it a bit boring to read the same thing over and over again. I would advise to try and space these things out as much as possible and/or use other descriptors/terms so it doesn't feel so repetitive. I felt like the characters weren't very fleshed out and there wasn't very much description of them. It felt like there should be more depth to the words that are being written. As is, it feels very lackluster and as if this is a beginning rough draft rather than a final product. I think there is also a big issue of telling instead of showing. I'm constantly being told "He saw this" "This is what he saw" "This is what he felt" and that can be wonderful if used in the correct context to kind of build upon a situation or feeling, but that's not what was happening here and it happened too often. I felt like I was being told very plainly and it didn't feel exciting. It felt more like I was getting a recap from someone else who had read it and they were giving a TLDR version. The first chapter's opening sentence and ending hook also fall flat. Your first sentence to your novel should really capture people's attention and lead them into the rest of the story, and it didn't really do that. I think it could've had the potential to, but you trailed off that path and veered more into what he was doing so the voice was kind of put on the backburner and forgotten about in that beginning moment. You also contradicted with the "carefree yet caring" moment. This is not described in a way that makes sense and feels confusing. The hook didn't grab me at all and felt more like a "Okay here's what happened" instead of "What's going to happen next? Aren't you curious?" So I wasn't too eager about going into the second chapter to begin with. Then the second chapter itself felt way too info-dumpy. There was no intrigue and nothing to hold attention. I felt more like I was reading a manual rather than a novel. All of that being said, I do think that the premise is good and that it's a great idea. I can see a lot of potential here and I think that with edits/some revisions it will do very well and shine brightly. I hope this review will be helpful to you. I know you can do it!
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ In love with the goddess humor. Hehehe fluffyhead will surely grow on me. Too bad won't be seeing it after chapter 3. Looking forward to the story and what the new world would bring to our MC. Hope the goddess won't go back on her words after using him.
At the time of writing, only 2 chapters have been posted so I cannot give a more concrete opinion your work. But so far, I want to say that the premise is interesting. For some reason, the synopsis reminds me of the Fate series, but with the POV of the heroes and not the magus. Overall, I’m excited to see where you’ll take me! Keep up the good work!
Good luck with your new novel... And don't you dare abandon your first novel, The DwarfCat-earedElf... Keep on writing both.
My friend, GTHarris08, referred me to this book, and I must say that I'm really impressed.😁I just hope that the main character's name is not really fluffy sleepyhead, that's really funny 😂😂.
Amazing start, Uel! 😁😁😁😁looking forward to the rest chapters!Waiting to see more adventures of Fluffy Sleepyhead
That was a nice read! The flow of conversation was great, but the "fluffy sleepyhead" still gets me. 🤣 As expected of Uel, I guess? Anyway, great work, and please, more chapters~! 👍
UelUel, The PoruShark Writer, is shamelessly giving this new novel a 5-star review... 😆... Please support the Goddess's Assassin novel, everyone!!!
I love this story! Each chapter leaves me craving for more! Highly recommend!