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Bro the novel is good and has potential. Keep up the good word. Oh and pls try to make the chapters longer as it is too short. If your charters are too short people won't like it and there will be many problems I say from experience as I also faced those issues
Bro the novel is good and has potential. Keep up the good word. Oh and pls try to make the chapters longer as it is too short. If your charters are too short people won't like it and there will be many problems I say from experience as I also faced those issues