Elemental Vampire

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anime_otaku_6087

Hey guys, shameless author review. This is my first novel and I'm trying my best to make it very good. As the story progresses, it'll get more enjoyable. I'm still gaining experience since it's my first novel but I know it's good. It'll be much appreciated if you leave a review and comment and also power stones. Thanks alot. I hope you enjoy it.

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Kitsune_Kurama

Cool story so far, I like that you can create skills and such. Will Seina ever leave his body in the future, and maybe a romance develops? Idk what future skills you had planned, but I felt it would be injustice to not make suggestions with so much potential in this story and the mc powers. I hope you develop the mc CQC or close quarters combat and combined into a unique style with his shortsword and elements. like take inspiration from Fishman karate for the water skills and avatar would be sick, or as his control over elements gets better he can change the properties of them like for water he can control and flow and pressure his water produces. Imagine a pressurized punch with 15k lb psi to someone face when his masters water or adding pressurized water to his shortsword plus earth and wind control to create a pressurized water jet cutter cutting through anything like butter just some of the ideas I had that are slept on

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Prince_charming57

Nice story with a good and gripping title. I don't usually read these types of books but the name caught my interest and now I enjoy reading. Recommend it to all to give it a try.

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FriedrichFriedrice

As of now I'm currently in chapter 3, but I'll probably read some of the chapters in the future. Well, the story was unique in its writing so far and the dialogue was greater(better than mine). I don't have problem do far except the pacing, but W story so far as a first novel🔥🔥🔥🔥 Keep it up broski

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Beginnerghost04

Well I mostly don't like to read these fantasy novels and have no liking to vampire but because of intro I read this novel and this novel have a angry character but with good story balance. Although this character is not imaginable to be yourself but, this mc character is good to be form of entertainment. So, this novel has a good short tampered mc character and shows views of different worlds.

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AuthorEriElegbede

Nice novel. The Elemental Vampire! Nice title and surprising no one has taken the name. However it has a great use with this book. Love the work Author.

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Eronse_Edward

Honestly this story is going greater than I expected, Nathan sounds like an MC I'm going to be fond of overtime (although my favourite character right now is Joey Northstar). Overall the book is awesome, I'll give it a 👍. Can't wait for the next chapters, let's goooo

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MAALIK

Our Nathan got anger issue haha totally worth the time for reading this novel!!!

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Rotimi_Braide

It has a nice start. I just hope the story continues like this.

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FantasyLord

Love 😘 the story and the buildup plus a unique system mix

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Deke_Falcon

This novel is a hit written by a author with a good imagination all should read this book

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FantasyLord

Author keep up the good work I luv 😘 ur book

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Xand3r

*clears throat*New, fresh, original. I declare this novel as very good. Particularly I like the fact that Nathan is relatable

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Galata_Sky

this is good, want to know Nathan's adventures... 😌😌😌😌

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Silverash863

A great and intriguing 🔥 talewaiting to see more unfold

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Silver_LInk

Honestly, this is my first vampire book I ever read and I must say, your stability in character is rare and use of English is what every of your readers will enjoy.. Great job author.

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_Shuang_Wei

I love your writing style , it's catchy . The start of story is to my liking and I actually can't control my anger like him to . The setting is really good , character development is amazing . Highly recommended

I gotta to admit its a great novel.With a little more suspense and twists I am sure it will become a Webnovel hit.A great tale in the making by an awesome author.

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DaoistO27c5p

great novel keep it up . I love your imagination

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DaoistO27c5p

This is a great novel a must read for everyone . I admire the author's idea and imagination