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- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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It was well, written, and how putting the right person in charge changes so much.[img=gift]
Loved 😍 every moment of reading this novel thank you author and well done 👏 I rarely leave revues but this novel deserves it
I love the concept of this story and it was a nice brake from all the other fanfics on here.
I loved this book I'm really sad it had to end but as always everything good must come to an end
A very good story short and to the point. I especially liked that the three went to the past to learn from the founders and did not dilly dally with sacking Dumbledore and Snape
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
The writing quality within this piece is undeniably impressive, showcasing a mastery of language and an ability to captivate the reader. The author's portrayal of the plot and storyline is nothing short of addictive, drawing readers into a compelling narrative that beckons them to stay engaged till the very end. However, amidst the excellence in grammar, there arises a slight concern regarding the overall flow and direction of the storyline, particularly in relation to the young heirs. At this stage, it might be too premature to expect a clearly defined goal for these characters, but it would certainly enhance the reading experience to witness a gradual unveiling of their purpose or a more discernible trajectory as the story unfolds. This addition would further enrich the narrative, providing a more robust and coherent journey for the protagonists, ultimately elevating the overall storytelling experience for the audience.
I have to follow the tradition and give myself 5-stars.But seriously i don't think there will be any major problem in this one, can't say anything about those people who find everything bad though.
It was well, written, and how putting the right person in charge changes so much.[img=gift]
Loved 😍 every moment of reading this novel thank you author and well done 👏 I rarely leave revues but this novel deserves it
I love the concept of this story and it was a nice brake from all the other fanfics on here.
I loved this book I'm really sad it had to end but as always everything good must come to an end
A very good story short and to the point. I especially liked that the three went to the past to learn from the founders and did not dilly dally with sacking Dumbledore and Snape
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ The writing quality within this piece is undeniably impressive, showcasing a mastery of language and an ability to captivate the reader. The author's portrayal of the plot and storyline is nothing short of addictive, drawing readers into a compelling narrative that beckons them to stay engaged till the very end. However, amidst the excellence in grammar, there arises a slight concern regarding the overall flow and direction of the storyline, particularly in relation to the young heirs. At this stage, it might be too premature to expect a clearly defined goal for these characters, but it would certainly enhance the reading experience to witness a gradual unveiling of their purpose or a more discernible trajectory as the story unfolds. This addition would further enrich the narrative, providing a more robust and coherent journey for the protagonists, ultimately elevating the overall storytelling experience for the audience.
I have to follow the tradition and give myself 5-stars.But seriously i don't think there will be any major problem in this one, can't say anything about those people who find everything bad though.