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A lot of potential, and good start. But author make women around MC getting hurts again and again. I think something wrong with author's head
very good but when he goes back to jujutsu he will do 10 times better so until then I will be waiting if possible I would like to know when he will come back, and I do not comment regularly so I am sorry.One more thing I wish he would come back when Gojo was going to be sealed right in front of him or at least 1 day before
THIS IS TRASH HAS NTR FOR ALL HEROINES[MC IS THE ONE GETTING NTRED] the world hopping is done poorly mc is mix between trash rate ,dummy versions of gojo and toji racism peaked in most chapters waste of time and mc is spectator to the plot and nothing new will happens.
trash novel without basic knowledge about jjk. theres too many inconsistency against canon lore. not to mention about author cuck fetish DISGUSTING
(im not making a review i just feel like talking and also want to leave a high rating) good:the dudes views, tastes, and thoughts align with me, and the story has close to everything i want in a fanfic. bad: the author is kind of a c*ck most likely having some sort of ntr fetish, a lot of chapters serve little to no purpose to advance or better the story, and finally (im too lazy to continue), why does he keep that family around after what happened in "that" chapter(one of many signs as to why i think the author is and has you know what, also you can find this in his other novels too so its not the first time).
absolutely fking amazing!!! i would've given or something like that but i am underage so i can't give it but yoU have my gratitude for making this master piece !!!
is the author alright?? the starting point is good but its become too much world hoping slice of life without great power system that help the mc n now. (im fast reading it, slice of life not to my liking) from ch 175 ntr. and next... Henrietta (zero no tsukaima world) “That makes sense… Albert III was the Emperor of the Germania Empire. He died while leading the army on the Saxe-Gotha plains in an attempt to conquer you. From the start, we were engaged. But he said he would only send reinforcements if I agreed to sleep with him.” n she pregnant ??. ... im... speechless just make it world hopping to one piece, bleach, naruto, hxh world. thats should do just fine even tho a predictable outcome rather than the fanfict become like this... mannn great start tho.. ha...
Bastante bueno. Aunque me hubiera gustado que Eiji desarrollara una relación más profunda con Maki... Y bueno, me da mucha curiosidad saber con qué pelirosa sueña.
It started off great but after mc started visiting other words or you can also say author wanted to satisfy himself to change other anime stories which he didn't liked the story after 60 chapters is just very bad
HORRIBLE, THE AUTHOR HAS A NTR FETISH, IT STARTED WELL BUT YOU RUINED IT ALL DOG AUTHOR...................................................................
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todo fue cuesta abajo cuando lei la parte en la cual casi abusan sexualmente de las posibles waifus y que además llegaron a los juegos preliminares antes de que el prota las salvará... no no no no ☝☝☝☝ te pasaste la verdad hasta aquí lo dejo ...Chao 👋👋👋👋
I’m giving 5 stars because I want the author to write more. I’ve enjoyed reading it sporadically. It has highs and it has lows. Hopefully the author will learn from the criticisms and do much better the next time. This fanfic has been ok. Kudos to the author for not budging and not stop writing.
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I just wanna say I regretted reading this, like everything was great at the start but as of lately the story is becoming trash, i read to be entertained not tortured so imma stop reading this ughhh
Worst history, Is so bas. A Lot spam of patreon Is tired. I dont recommend this Fic. Lost Time. Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad
Este capítulo fue increíble. Me encanta cómo has capturado la esencia de los personajes de Jujutsu Kaisen. La manera en que desarrollas la trama y las peleas es impresionante, y realmente me hace sentir como si estuviera viendo un nuevo episodio del anime. ¡Sigue así! Estoy deseando ver qué más tienes preparado. ¡Gracias por compartir esta fantástica historia
Все начиналось нормально, просто безэмоциональный гг, который хочет понять эмоции, но действия в других мирах вызывают вопросик, особенно в мире Луизы, на счёт ведьм ещё ладно, но человек который логичен так бы не поступил, человек который хочет понять эмоции так бы не поступил, под конец он просто псих, которого стоило бы прирезать, мне уже жаль стало что у кендзяку это не получилось. Он решил очистить мир от дворян, из-за своей ошибки. Он убивает охранников, войска, которые никак не дворяне а обычные люди, мне даже кажется что он мог бы уже убить родных Синсты, нечаянно, столько бессмысленных убийств
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Mc is practically useless . He just spectates everything from outside. And mc being emotionless trope is probably the boring trope I've seen
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Voy a decirlo es una historia que me entretiene mucho y me gusta muchísimo la idea que tuviste y como la desarrollaste
When I started reading story, I didn't assume it would be a big waste of my time. Dont read. I dont recommend. [img=angry] [img=angry] [img=angry]
Just skip to 148 mc got basically ntred, honestly this went past my limit, even with all the flaws this fanfic had, I still continued reading. But this type of thing nah fam, since the author did this, he could definitely do this type of thing again,
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Even though the Mc was not very interesting, it was still a book can be read for time killing but the Ntr part make me drop this book. ---------------------------------- ---- ---- --- ----- --
I just caught up to chapter 159 and the story isn't as bad as the rating is tbh. The plot is good and I like how he travels other dimensions and helps sometimes which changes the story. The problem I have is the MC personality is boring and by boring I don't mean no love life, I mean he's too scared to change the story! I'm not saying he should be super op but saving certain people can benefit him. Also he needs to fix the part where he's lacking emotions quickly not where he's super happy and positive like he could even be a tsundere but his lack of emotions make me not connect with him. The writing is great and I love his interactions with random strangers to named characters. Especially Gojo since he isn't alone as the strongest anymore! I'm excited for him to meet Sukuna/Itadori.
@ chapter 152 are you sure this is JJK fan fiction and NOT slice of life ? seriously , i think I read more fillers than plot .Good idea but boring , mind numbing execution
Seriously , there are more filler chapters than PLOT , the IDEA is good , the execution is so bad that it hurts , PHYSICALLY !! I vote rewrite
A lot of potential, and good start. But author make women around MC getting hurts again and again. I think something wrong with author's head
very good but when he goes back to jujutsu he will do 10 times better so until then I will be waiting if possible I would like to know when he will come back, and I do not comment regularly so I am sorry.One more thing I wish he would come back when Gojo was going to be sealed right in front of him or at least 1 day before
THIS IS TRASH HAS NTR FOR ALL HEROINES[MC IS THE ONE GETTING NTRED] the world hopping is done poorly mc is mix between trash rate ,dummy versions of gojo and toji racism peaked in most chapters waste of time and mc is spectator to the plot and nothing new will happens.
trash novel without basic knowledge about jjk. theres too many inconsistency against canon lore. not to mention about author cuck fetish DISGUSTING
(im not making a review i just feel like talking and also want to leave a high rating) good:the dudes views, tastes, and thoughts align with me, and the story has close to everything i want in a fanfic. bad: the author is kind of a c*ck most likely having some sort of ntr fetish, a lot of chapters serve little to no purpose to advance or better the story, and finally (im too lazy to continue), why does he keep that family around after what happened in "that" chapter(one of many signs as to why i think the author is and has you know what, also you can find this in his other novels too so its not the first time).
absolutely fking amazing!!! i would've given or something like that but i am underage so i can't give it but yoU have my gratitude for making this master piece !!!
is the author alright?? the starting point is good but its become too much world hoping slice of life without great power system that help the mc n now. (im fast reading it, slice of life not to my liking) from ch 175 ntr. and next... Henrietta (zero no tsukaima world) “That makes sense… Albert III was the Emperor of the Germania Empire. He died while leading the army on the Saxe-Gotha plains in an attempt to conquer you. From the start, we were engaged. But he said he would only send reinforcements if I agreed to sleep with him.” n she pregnant ??. ... im... speechless just make it world hopping to one piece, bleach, naruto, hxh world. thats should do just fine even tho a predictable outcome rather than the fanfict become like this... mannn great start tho.. ha...
Bastante bueno. Aunque me hubiera gustado que Eiji desarrollara una relación más profunda con Maki... Y bueno, me da mucha curiosidad saber con qué pelirosa sueña.
It started off great but after mc started visiting other words or you can also say author wanted to satisfy himself to change other anime stories which he didn't liked the story after 60 chapters is just very bad
HORRIBLE, THE AUTHOR HAS A NTR FETISH, IT STARTED WELL BUT YOU RUINED IT ALL DOG AUTHOR...................................................................
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ todo fue cuesta abajo cuando lei la parte en la cual casi abusan sexualmente de las posibles waifus y que además llegaron a los juegos preliminares antes de que el prota las salvará... no no no no ☝☝☝☝ te pasaste la verdad hasta aquí lo dejo ...Chao 👋👋👋👋
I’m giving 5 stars because I want the author to write more. I’ve enjoyed reading it sporadically. It has highs and it has lows. Hopefully the author will learn from the criticisms and do much better the next time. This fanfic has been ok. Kudos to the author for not budging and not stop writing.
You know why ========================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================
I just wanna say I regretted reading this, like everything was great at the start but as of lately the story is becoming trash, i read to be entertained not tortured so imma stop reading this ughhh
Worst history, Is so bas. A Lot spam of patreon Is tired. I dont recommend this Fic. Lost Time. Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad
Este capítulo fue increíble. Me encanta cómo has capturado la esencia de los personajes de Jujutsu Kaisen. La manera en que desarrollas la trama y las peleas es impresionante, y realmente me hace sentir como si estuviera viendo un nuevo episodio del anime. ¡Sigue así! Estoy deseando ver qué más tienes preparado. ¡Gracias por compartir esta fantástica historia
Все начиналось нормально, просто безэмоциональный гг, который хочет понять эмоции, но действия в других мирах вызывают вопросик, особенно в мире Луизы, на счёт ведьм ещё ладно, но человек который логичен так бы не поступил, человек который хочет понять эмоции так бы не поступил, под конец он просто псих, которого стоило бы прирезать, мне уже жаль стало что у кендзяку это не получилось. Он решил очистить мир от дворян, из-за своей ошибки. Он убивает охранников, войска, которые никак не дворяне а обычные люди, мне даже кажется что он мог бы уже убить родных Синсты, нечаянно, столько бессмысленных убийств
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Mc is practically useless . He just spectates everything from outside. And mc being emotionless trope is probably the boring trope I've seen
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Voy a decirlo es una historia que me entretiene mucho y me gusta muchísimo la idea que tuviste y como la desarrollaste
When I started reading story, I didn't assume it would be a big waste of my time. Dont read. I dont recommend. [img=angry] [img=angry] [img=angry]
Just skip to 148 mc got basically ntred, honestly this went past my limit, even with all the flaws this fanfic had, I still continued reading. But this type of thing nah fam, since the author did this, he could definitely do this type of thing again,
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Even though the Mc was not very interesting, it was still a book can be read for time killing but the Ntr part make me drop this book. ---------------------------------- ---- ---- --- ----- --
I just caught up to chapter 159 and the story isn't as bad as the rating is tbh. The plot is good and I like how he travels other dimensions and helps sometimes which changes the story. The problem I have is the MC personality is boring and by boring I don't mean no love life, I mean he's too scared to change the story! I'm not saying he should be super op but saving certain people can benefit him. Also he needs to fix the part where he's lacking emotions quickly not where he's super happy and positive like he could even be a tsundere but his lack of emotions make me not connect with him. The writing is great and I love his interactions with random strangers to named characters. Especially Gojo since he isn't alone as the strongest anymore! I'm excited for him to meet Sukuna/Itadori.
@ chapter 152 are you sure this is JJK fan fiction and NOT slice of life ? seriously , i think I read more fillers than plot .Good idea but boring , mind numbing execution
Seriously , there are more filler chapters than PLOT , the IDEA is good , the execution is so bad that it hurts , PHYSICALLY !! I vote rewrite