6รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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เขียนรีวิว
Good story. I hope that in the future he becomes the Kanto champion and together with Lance participates in the tournament of champions. (Google translator.)
Es buena historia honestamente me gusta el concepto y la idea de que un reencarnado sea un domador de dragones y tenga un gimnasio especializado en ellos (en kanto) ya que mayormente muchos historia los descarta porque se necesita muchos cuidados y trabajo así como dinero para este tipo en particular de Pokémon así que eso también hace que está historia también sea interesante debido a sus orígenes (aquí) así que poner un nuevo gimnasio tipo dragón en el mapa pokémon ya es toda una promesa del futuro
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
quite a good story so far . I like the premise of the story and the world . Also , as I've already said in a commented on a chapter, compared to a generalist like Red , raising dragon type is harder . I would assume our mc would win though it would be unbelievably harder. Now , you have quite few ways for your story to progress . you can make your mc join elite four, become champion or make him travel to other regions . Either way , the story would be quite enjoyable .
Good story so far, this as far as there is so far is a slice of life which is very different from usual fanfic.the Mc is a gym leader who already completed his journey through many regions and as settled as a gym leader. Pokémon battles are good with thoughts put into it. Tho it would be nice if author could put some tags on the fanfic
Good story. I hope that in the future he becomes the Kanto champion and together with Lance participates in the tournament of champions. (Google translator.)
Es buena historia honestamente me gusta el concepto y la idea de que un reencarnado sea un domador de dragones y tenga un gimnasio especializado en ellos (en kanto) ya que mayormente muchos historia los descarta porque se necesita muchos cuidados y trabajo así como dinero para este tipo en particular de Pokémon así que eso también hace que está historia también sea interesante debido a sus orígenes (aquí) así que poner un nuevo gimnasio tipo dragón en el mapa pokémon ya es toda una promesa del futuro
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ quite a good story so far . I like the premise of the story and the world . Also , as I've already said in a commented on a chapter, compared to a generalist like Red , raising dragon type is harder . I would assume our mc would win though it would be unbelievably harder. Now , you have quite few ways for your story to progress . you can make your mc join elite four, become champion or make him travel to other regions . Either way , the story would be quite enjoyable .
Good story so far, this as far as there is so far is a slice of life which is very different from usual fanfic.the Mc is a gym leader who already completed his journey through many regions and as settled as a gym leader. Pokémon battles are good with thoughts put into it. Tho it would be nice if author could put some tags on the fanfic
Hope this story isn’t abandoned. Please update soon!!