11รีวิว
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Que pasa están jugando al juego del gato y el ratón o que [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
The idea is good but it turns out to be disappointing From my point of view, the MC does not seem like someone who was reincarnated but rather a child because of his behavior and the fact that he trains when he is one year old, killing street demons as if nothing had happened.
"The idea is so new, I never see it" - well, you can use a Quick search to find out how new it is. I see only disappointment. And yes, going around with you step-mommy and step - daddy azazel, bro are serious? How old are you?
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It's kinda of a unique fanfic keep it up author san [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Que pasa están jugando al juego del gato y el ratón o que [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
The idea is good but it turns out to be disappointing From my point of view, the MC does not seem like someone who was reincarnated but rather a child because of his behavior and the fact that he trains when he is one year old, killing street demons as if nothing had happened.
"The idea is so new, I never see it" - well, you can use a Quick search to find out how new it is. I see only disappointment. And yes, going around with you step-mommy and step - daddy azazel, bro are serious? How old are you?
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It's kinda of a unique fanfic keep it up author san [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Great concept atrocious execution of said concept