Eternal Temptation: Awakening Sinful Desires

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Slow_down

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FallenAngeI

There are too few chapters for a proper review, so I will review it again when there are at least 150+ chapters. Writing Quality: I have not seen any mistakes so far. Maybe there are few, but they haven't been obvious enough for me to spot. Stability of Updates: 2-3 chapters a day is amaizing. Story Development: So far we haven't seen much, since there are only 30 chapters, but so far so good. There is a good twist with him reincarnating in his original world, which I haven't seen before and find interesting. There is a lot of potential there in my opinion, so I am looking forward to it. Character Design: Again we haven't seen much so far, but there aren't any red flags so far. The characters have to be fleshed out more. The first villain (if you can call him that, since he got dealt with pretty fast) was well written, since I really wanted him d*ad when reading about him, so job well done there xD. Main character and FLs have to be explored more for me to give opinion. World Background: Nothing much known because we were busy with MC's revenge. This is probably the one thing that we least know about so far, and I hope it gets expanded soon. Overall it has good start and I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes. Don't expect an extremely serious novel, since there are a lot of lemons, so read it if that's what you're looking for.

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Black_Reaper13

I would like to comment on my point of view. 1. The truth is I didn't understand very well about the astral nexus core, is it a dimension? or something similar. 2. and I would say that until now he has focused more on looking for women instead of training his techniques or increasing his cultivation level and I say this because most people complain that he does not advance the plot. 3. but well so far I have liked how this is developing and I hope there is a balance.

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Lord_Azathoth

What are you waiting for? Go read the book.

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Derek_Lagace

story was good up to were I stopped I liked how the orphanage was saved by the mai n Character

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Stephen_Smith_0911

so I've been reading this novel for about a month started reading it on a free trial and have slowly been using my free passes to keep reading it. This novel is a great read perfect balance of character development plot and the Gentlemanly stuff. MOST READ!!!!!!!

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Scarzz

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LAZY_ANGEL

so far it's good enough for me, I can't review it since it has only 19 chapters needs more chapters but so far it's good.

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_in_darkness

I liked this Story so far. It's Good. Keep it up. 👍[img=recommend]

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_Shadows_

Good start and Lemons are interesting.[img=update]

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_insidious

Here for a good read. And that's just what I got.

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Wolf_Savage_9952

this Novel is awesome but the discord link is outdated so can we get a new one?

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VEGETA9000

This is great so far for my first read and cant wait for more updates. Does anyone have any recommendations that is like this one? Thanks in advance.

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Daoist_cool

This book has a great story that keeps you interested.

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NotOG

No updates? ............................

words aren't needed in the face of culture

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Desire96

It's awesome, Smut is done wonderfully, the plot seems interesting along with the characters, I am looking forward to reading more of this novel,