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castrix
LV 14 Badge

reminds me LOTM, so far quite enjoyable

11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Explore_And_Crafts

This story is really good. There are some errors with the character names or the technique names being changed or switched around in different chapters but so far its going well with descent world building and making sure not every character is the same. The MC knows how to be the strong mysterious senior and isn't an idiot. But overall, there is a lot of potential to keep going and make a long, interesting story. If it keeps following the same route that it's on, then this would be a 9/10

11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Quipster

After 135 chapters. Very fun and relaxing to read, made myself laugh many times while reading. I would say the world is easy to imagine and envision and story is overpowered with fun elements, looking forward to more.

11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Omer
LV 15 Badge

Love this novel. Translation consistency is a bit wonky as names and titles keep changing but it is easy to follow. The story takes the traditional tropes and has ample fun with them. Fresh and thoroughly funny. Have read till 220 chapters, the story has not become repetitive till yet.

11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Jack_Daniel_7262

I love this kind of novels where MC becomes strong by helping others. I hope he gets to teach various things like alchemy, runes, etc and meet various people

11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Snake_Jungle

Its really good………….,…,,………………………………………..

11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
FahramTores

it's a very good story. I really love overpowered mc niches and this one written really well in that genre. (The guy actually very overpowered but just he doesn't know it himself lol) Plot later becames a little repetitive but it's still okay. 5 stars for me. If there's any book like this one please recommend me guys. Thank you.

เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
reginaldveg22

Great story [img=update] Wwwwwwwwwwwwww

12mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
BigSausageDad

I have read the raws to 140+ chps and I must say that this book is hilarious. The comedy starts at 120+ when his disciples start adventuring to the inner domain. The translation is edited mtl but the translator still made efforts in changing certain phrases. overall 10/10. You should stay till chp150+ before making any decision. [img=recommend]

12mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
nomad69
LV 15 Badge

it probably a good book so far I like it.

12mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
nit_bee

an overall good novel. you can add to library for some reading.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Daoist_Bellfrost

The grammar is still OK but the inconsistency of the translation is mind boggling. It looks like the translator didn't read it before posting.(Starting Chapter 120)

1yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
DaoistazVFGr

Turned out to be just another generic novel. Don't waste your time. Only dull, boring, monotonous, repetitive text. There are no plot, no conflict, no development. MC is extremely overpowered, his disciples are extremely overpowered. All storytelling is about MC spouting some vague random nonsense, his disciples will make breakthroughs, MC will get a rise in level, repeat million of times. Nothing else.

1yr
ดู 11 การตอบกลับ
Darth_Evolution898

Excellent read couldn't put it down still can't author luckily updates alot so far

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
DaoistQxd65K

It’s good as a story. The pacing and world building is excellent and the characters are solid. There are only a few details I don’t like. I especially don’t like Li Xuan’s character and the “immortal sage” persona he has instead of a casual hidden expert, or his “mystery aura” that has nothing to do with cultivation, but if you suspend disbelief and gloss over his unlikable moments, then the story itself is good.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
SplendidDaoist

A unique spin on the whole master/disciple relationship. I really like the idea that the MC is actually improving martial arts and cultivation and of the world once the knowledge is spread. Looking forward to future golden age of cultivation and martial arts.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
ayrus_rus

I was tired of all novel having similar plots and routine. so started to try few new novels. but after 3 chapter it had to drop. but this one . i didn't even notice i read till 24 n i am out of fast passes... good find.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Ofensywny_Cioban

A very good read so far(im around c 80). A good idea for the story, don t remember any translation or typing errors, there are not any females so far wich is good, the biggest plus is that main character is not made stupid and forcfully unaware of his impact. Strongly recommend.

1yr
ดู 15 การตอบกลับ
Wavan2012

very good, It's rare to find a book like this, raw please 🥺

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
GerryCdL

........................................

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Rananfer

good book I Like it hope it continues to get better

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Daoist_Bellfrost

Dayum this is good... at least till now. Of all the new novels this one is the cream of the crop. The translation is good for now as there are little grammatical errors. The world background is still in the build. The character design is not too overused and the focal is less on the main character which is, truthfully quite a fresh read. No nonsensical unreasonable system. No overused "Oh I think this cultivation technique is the most suitable for me" type of story. The main character made up technique is a mishmash of various cultivation chants and made up nonsense 😂

เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
1yr
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
Ares1212

cultivation novel with the main character kind of ignorant of his own ability and a gullible student

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
castrix
LV 14 Badge

reminds me LOTM, so far quite enjoyable

11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Explore_And_Crafts

This story is really good. There are some errors with the character names or the technique names being changed or switched around in different chapters but so far its going well with descent world building and making sure not every character is the same. The MC knows how to be the strong mysterious senior and isn't an idiot. But overall, there is a lot of potential to keep going and make a long, interesting story. If it keeps following the same route that it's on, then this would be a 9/10

11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Quipster

After 135 chapters. Very fun and relaxing to read, made myself laugh many times while reading. I would say the world is easy to imagine and envision and story is overpowered with fun elements, looking forward to more.

11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Omer
LV 15 Badge

Love this novel. Translation consistency is a bit wonky as names and titles keep changing but it is easy to follow. The story takes the traditional tropes and has ample fun with them. Fresh and thoroughly funny. Have read till 220 chapters, the story has not become repetitive till yet.

11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Jack_Daniel_7262

I love this kind of novels where MC becomes strong by helping others. I hope he gets to teach various things like alchemy, runes, etc and meet various people

11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Snake_Jungle

Its really good………….,…,,………………………………………..

11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
FahramTores

it's a very good story. I really love overpowered mc niches and this one written really well in that genre. (The guy actually very overpowered but just he doesn't know it himself lol) Plot later becames a little repetitive but it's still okay. 5 stars for me. If there's any book like this one please recommend me guys. Thank you.

เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
reginaldveg22

Great story [img=update] Wwwwwwwwwwwwww

12mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
BigSausageDad

I have read the raws to 140+ chps and I must say that this book is hilarious. The comedy starts at 120+ when his disciples start adventuring to the inner domain. The translation is edited mtl but the translator still made efforts in changing certain phrases. overall 10/10. You should stay till chp150+ before making any decision. [img=recommend]

12mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
nomad69
LV 15 Badge

it probably a good book so far I like it.

12mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
nit_bee

an overall good novel. you can add to library for some reading.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Daoist_Bellfrost

The grammar is still OK but the inconsistency of the translation is mind boggling. It looks like the translator didn't read it before posting.(Starting Chapter 120)

1yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
DaoistazVFGr

Turned out to be just another generic novel. Don't waste your time. Only dull, boring, monotonous, repetitive text. There are no plot, no conflict, no development. MC is extremely overpowered, his disciples are extremely overpowered. All storytelling is about MC spouting some vague random nonsense, his disciples will make breakthroughs, MC will get a rise in level, repeat million of times. Nothing else.

1yr
ดู 11 การตอบกลับ
Darth_Evolution898

Excellent read couldn't put it down still can't author luckily updates alot so far

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
DaoistQxd65K

It’s good as a story. The pacing and world building is excellent and the characters are solid. There are only a few details I don’t like. I especially don’t like Li Xuan’s character and the “immortal sage” persona he has instead of a casual hidden expert, or his “mystery aura” that has nothing to do with cultivation, but if you suspend disbelief and gloss over his unlikable moments, then the story itself is good.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
SplendidDaoist

A unique spin on the whole master/disciple relationship. I really like the idea that the MC is actually improving martial arts and cultivation and of the world once the knowledge is spread. Looking forward to future golden age of cultivation and martial arts.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
ayrus_rus

I was tired of all novel having similar plots and routine. so started to try few new novels. but after 3 chapter it had to drop. but this one . i didn't even notice i read till 24 n i am out of fast passes... good find.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Ofensywny_Cioban

A very good read so far(im around c 80). A good idea for the story, don t remember any translation or typing errors, there are not any females so far wich is good, the biggest plus is that main character is not made stupid and forcfully unaware of his impact. Strongly recommend.

1yr
ดู 15 การตอบกลับ
Wavan2012

very good, It's rare to find a book like this, raw please 🥺

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
GerryCdL

........................................

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Rananfer

good book I Like it hope it continues to get better

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Daoist_Bellfrost

Dayum this is good... at least till now. Of all the new novels this one is the cream of the crop. The translation is good for now as there are little grammatical errors. The world background is still in the build. The character design is not too overused and the focal is less on the main character which is, truthfully quite a fresh read. No nonsensical unreasonable system. No overused "Oh I think this cultivation technique is the most suitable for me" type of story. The main character made up technique is a mishmash of various cultivation chants and made up nonsense 😂

เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
1yr
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
Ares1212

cultivation novel with the main character kind of ignorant of his own ability and a gullible student

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ