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I think this is probably the fourth NCIS story that I've ever read. I'm loving the world that you're building around Alex and his backstory. I feel kind of iffy about the cliche childhood, but everything else is amazing.
First time making a comment; hoping to motivate the author. This is a HIDDEN GEM!!!!!! Please more updates!!! 27ch is not enough h*ll not even 200 ch would be enough that's how good it is!!!!
Awesome story. I'm a big fan of NCIS but couldn't find any fanfics/novel on it. Keep it up!
Nice, I love NCIS especially the original one. waiting for Eleanor to join now
I love this I ask for more of this book I shall pray for your safety and guidance from the father. love from Jesus. wisdom from the holy ghost. may the Lord be with you
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Great story well integrated OC to the NCIS world but also not so heavily relied on plot for progression the OC back story was well done too only issue I would have is the Authors update stability cause from the time I’m writing this review it’s been over a week since last chapter.
Great writing, great story, only the updates aren't that good, as I'm writing this it's been 8 days. It's a shame. It's one of my new favourites on this app.
As a massive fan of NCIS this FanFic is awesome it goes with the story of the show whilst having it's on flare which made me hooked on it with how seamlessly it flowed between the show story and the fanfic story
Agregada a la lista de de lectura Empeze a leerlo y me engancho la historia... esperando que no muera en el camino ya que es muy engancharte...
Está muy bueno la historia, me gusta ncsi y me parece que está muy bien metido el personaje, ahora solo me queda esperar a ver cómo sigue, deseo ver cuándo se enfrente al súper soldado
There are not many Fanfics that feature NCIS. The few that are almost never have an OC as a main character, which I think is the best option when writing an NCIS Fanfic. This is very well done. I hope the updates stay consistent because this is a lot of potential. Thank you for your work.
En este momento tiene 7 capítulos seguiré leyendo y actualizare esta reseña si es necesario. El fic tiene un buen desarrollo, el MC tiene personalidad y no es parece ser un MC genérico tiene sus propios rasgos y no es un personaje vacío.
This is very cool ideas for the novel. There aren't many novels about NCIS. I can't wait for the next chapter
Continue, adoro ncis e até o momento protagonista bem construído, passado de negligência pela família, até entrar no exército. Continue publicando por favor
Big fan of NCIS!!! This Fanfic is the only and best that I have ever found of NCIS. MC background is bada$$, characters have depth and correspond to the show. I like how Gibbs has a fellow comrade and their relationship is bonded through the core and is subtly shown. Let's not forget the missions my guy goes on like come on it's so cool. Yeah so I'm making this review because of the very cool fanfic and my appreciation to the Author, and also just to check in on the Author if everything is alright cuz my guy you have a solid fanfic with good plot but I'm crying out here only 29 chapters and its been 4 months!!!!Please drop more and Ill give you all my stones!!!!!!
I think this is probably the fourth NCIS story that I've ever read. I'm loving the world that you're building around Alex and his backstory. I feel kind of iffy about the cliche childhood, but everything else is amazing.
First time making a comment; hoping to motivate the author. This is a HIDDEN GEM!!!!!! Please more updates!!! 27ch is not enough h*ll not even 200 ch would be enough that's how good it is!!!!
Awesome story. I'm a big fan of NCIS but couldn't find any fanfics/novel on it. Keep it up!
Nice, I love NCIS especially the original one. waiting for Eleanor to join now
I love this I ask for more of this book I shall pray for your safety and guidance from the father. love from Jesus. wisdom from the holy ghost. may the Lord be with you
The BEST The BEST [img=recommend] The BEST The BEST The BEST The BEST [img=recommend] The BEST The BEST The BEST The BEST [img=recommend] The BEST The BEST
Great story well integrated OC to the NCIS world but also not so heavily relied on plot for progression the OC back story was well done too only issue I would have is the Authors update stability cause from the time I’m writing this review it’s been over a week since last chapter.
Great writing, great story, only the updates aren't that good, as I'm writing this it's been 8 days. It's a shame. It's one of my new favourites on this app.
As a massive fan of NCIS this FanFic is awesome it goes with the story of the show whilst having it's on flare which made me hooked on it with how seamlessly it flowed between the show story and the fanfic story
Agregada a la lista de de lectura Empeze a leerlo y me engancho la historia... esperando que no muera en el camino ya que es muy engancharte...
Está muy bueno la historia, me gusta ncsi y me parece que está muy bien metido el personaje, ahora solo me queda esperar a ver cómo sigue, deseo ver cuándo se enfrente al súper soldado
There are not many Fanfics that feature NCIS. The few that are almost never have an OC as a main character, which I think is the best option when writing an NCIS Fanfic. This is very well done. I hope the updates stay consistent because this is a lot of potential. Thank you for your work.
En este momento tiene 7 capítulos seguiré leyendo y actualizare esta reseña si es necesario. El fic tiene un buen desarrollo, el MC tiene personalidad y no es parece ser un MC genérico tiene sus propios rasgos y no es un personaje vacío.
This is very cool ideas for the novel. There aren't many novels about NCIS. I can't wait for the next chapter
Continue, adoro ncis e até o momento protagonista bem construído, passado de negligência pela família, até entrar no exército. Continue publicando por favor
Big fan of NCIS!!! This Fanfic is the only and best that I have ever found of NCIS. MC background is bada$$, characters have depth and correspond to the show. I like how Gibbs has a fellow comrade and their relationship is bonded through the core and is subtly shown. Let's not forget the missions my guy goes on like come on it's so cool. Yeah so I'm making this review because of the very cool fanfic and my appreciation to the Author, and also just to check in on the Author if everything is alright cuz my guy you have a solid fanfic with good plot but I'm crying out here only 29 chapters and its been 4 months!!!!Please drop more and Ill give you all my stones!!!!!!