Reviews of One Piece:The Lust System by Yass_Odyssey - Webnovel

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4.84

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Dark_PersonJJ

At this moment i realy like this story, MC Ren isnot a hothead and reckless person, he plans his future actions in detail, He do not wants to be slave of Original Plot and join Straw Hats,but create his own crew and be his own person, He knows in One Piece World only strong and Smart ones can hope to survive in this World, if they want to matter in grand shame of things.

1yr
ดู 5 การตอบกลับ
Demon_Of_Lust

Well, first I want to point out MC's background. He was a soldier in his previous life and he is used to fighting and killing.This is a good thing and will save the author many unnecessary events in this regard. Secondly,and the unique thing about this fanfic is MC's target,he wants to return home! I have read many One Piece FF and I have never seen MC have this goal, all authors choose to make their MC not have any family or a good relationship whit them in his previous world.It has always baffled me this matter, of all those incarnated in another world...there is not a single person who wants to return to Mazna?! I always found this unreasonable, and I'm happy because I finally found what I wanted. A message to the author-san:keep your work and never drop it please! I will support you, whether with comments or powers stones. Thank you for reading!

1yr
ดู 35 การตอบกลับ
chocolate_lover44

Comprehensive Review: - MC's personality suits my taste—calm, smart, cunning, deceitful, and caring towards those he's concerned about. Story Development: Very well done with a comprehensive change in the original plot, which is a positive thing since no one wants to see Luffy's journey replicated as if the anime has turned into a novel. Updates: The updates are very good. The Author isn't A human, 3 or 2 chapters a day, and the average word count is 2500 words, with some chapters reaching 4000-3000 words. Character Development: I've seen new versions of Nami, Nogiko, and Tashigi, while still maintaining their endearing personalities towards each other. .. .. FINALLY, I hope the Author continues with this story, as it's one of the best fanfiction stories I've read, There's no problem with spelling mistakes in the early chapters; the writer has improved significantly. I don't blame him because English isn't his first language.

11mth
ดู 4 การตอบกลับ
Mindlessreader25

Author please 🥺 don't abandon us... please continue the journey ..

14d
ดู 4 การตอบกลับ
Mindlessreader25

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17d
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Aman_Safi

I really like this fanfic...,..,,,........,...,...,................... ...................................................................................................................................

1mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Mindlessreader25

Author I miss this novel... have you forgotten us 🥺🥺🥺

1mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Mindlessreader25

Author chapters please 🥺🥺.. I miss this novel dearly..

1mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Mindlessreader25

Author we need chapters please...I love this novel don't leave us hanging like this....

2mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Mukhamad_Taufik

cerita yang bagus... tolong lebih banyak lagi update nya

2mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Web_Novel_7138

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2mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Jaden_Debrie_3312

I love the story so far and have had quite a few laughs as well. I hope and pray that this novel and the wonderful author behind it continue to prosper for many years to come.[img=recommend][img=recommend]

3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Dark_PersonJJ

Hello thare I think IT would be great idea and beneficial for your story, if you create Discord chanel, so then everyone who read your work can talk with you and with each other.

3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
DaoistbWJh5P

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3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
onitchan

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3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Shadow_monarche

I would have rated this story 5 stars if the author hadn't taken two long breaks from updating. However, I can overlook that since each chapter has a substantial word count (averaging around 2,500 words). The main character is clever and well-developed, even though he's a bit lustful. But who am I to complain about that? After all, who wouldn’t be drawn to beautiful girls and want to build a harem, except perhaps for the disinterested or insincere? Back to the main point: the author’s writing has improved significantly over the past year, despite months of hiatus. Additionally, the first ten chapters, which initially had many spelling errors, have been revised, and now there’s nothing left for me to criticize. Lastly, author, thank you for this novel! Now, tell me—or rather, reassure me—Sadie-chan will be in the harem, right? Below is a picture of Sadie-chan.

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3mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Mindlessreader25

Author please 🥺 I need mooree chapters ...

3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
rubby_cuty

SHAME there's no YURI in this story [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
DaoistWzKrKG

I never understood this mania of putting the sword on the back.............................................................................................

3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Italiangodnikom

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3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Sandip_Kar_9157

One of the best antihero fanfic I ever read. thank you for this fanfic.

3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Mindlessreader25

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 . Best one piece fan fic ever....I like luffy but his character does not align with mine...I like a little ruthless a bit villain and an absolute protective/ possessive attitude ...I Ren has it all.... Author I just lovee the way you write ..

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3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
leporable_de_deiux

Très bon roman, mais l'auteur doit simplement maintenir un rythme de mise à jour constant. Je donnerai cinq étoiles à ma critique.

3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
raynjitchi

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3mth
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Tingfei

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3mth
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3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Yassir_5

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3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
donnat_791

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3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Raja_Sihir

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3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Mindlessreader25

Author I have to say I love the way you ..ohh I have to say this I am following up with the latest chapters soo it's a request can you please add Hina , Momusagi goin ,reiju , Hancock ...these are some off the beautiful one ...ohh I apologise if I didn't add someone .there are just soo many😅

3mth
ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
Shadow_D_X

Mindblowing....speechless......keep going,,,author-kun..........awesome story..writing...everything...no complaints..............................................................

3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
aynhart82

GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS

3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
alaynon

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE

3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Dark_PersonJJ

At this moment i realy like this story, MC Ren isnot a hothead and reckless person, he plans his future actions in detail, He do not wants to be slave of Original Plot and join Straw Hats,but create his own crew and be his own person, He knows in One Piece World only strong and Smart ones can hope to survive in this World, if they want to matter in grand shame of things.

1yr
ดู 5 การตอบกลับ
Demon_Of_Lust

Well, first I want to point out MC's background. He was a soldier in his previous life and he is used to fighting and killing.This is a good thing and will save the author many unnecessary events in this regard. Secondly,and the unique thing about this fanfic is MC's target,he wants to return home! I have read many One Piece FF and I have never seen MC have this goal, all authors choose to make their MC not have any family or a good relationship whit them in his previous world.It has always baffled me this matter, of all those incarnated in another world...there is not a single person who wants to return to Mazna?! I always found this unreasonable, and I'm happy because I finally found what I wanted. A message to the author-san:keep your work and never drop it please! I will support you, whether with comments or powers stones. Thank you for reading!

1yr
ดู 35 การตอบกลับ
chocolate_lover44

Comprehensive Review: - MC's personality suits my taste—calm, smart, cunning, deceitful, and caring towards those he's concerned about. Story Development: Very well done with a comprehensive change in the original plot, which is a positive thing since no one wants to see Luffy's journey replicated as if the anime has turned into a novel. Updates: The updates are very good. The Author isn't A human, 3 or 2 chapters a day, and the average word count is 2500 words, with some chapters reaching 4000-3000 words. Character Development: I've seen new versions of Nami, Nogiko, and Tashigi, while still maintaining their endearing personalities towards each other. .. .. FINALLY, I hope the Author continues with this story, as it's one of the best fanfiction stories I've read, There's no problem with spelling mistakes in the early chapters; the writer has improved significantly. I don't blame him because English isn't his first language.

11mth
ดู 4 การตอบกลับ
Mindlessreader25

Author please 🥺 don't abandon us... please continue the journey ..

14d
ดู 4 การตอบกลับ
Mindlessreader25

"......................................"

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17d
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Aman_Safi

I really like this fanfic...,..,,,........,...,...,................... ...................................................................................................................................

1mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Mindlessreader25

Author I miss this novel... have you forgotten us 🥺🥺🥺

1mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Mindlessreader25

Author chapters please 🥺🥺.. I miss this novel dearly..

1mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Mindlessreader25

Author we need chapters please...I love this novel don't leave us hanging like this....

2mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Mukhamad_Taufik

cerita yang bagus... tolong lebih banyak lagi update nya

2mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Web_Novel_7138

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2mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Jaden_Debrie_3312

I love the story so far and have had quite a few laughs as well. I hope and pray that this novel and the wonderful author behind it continue to prosper for many years to come.[img=recommend][img=recommend]

3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Dark_PersonJJ

Hello thare I think IT would be great idea and beneficial for your story, if you create Discord chanel, so then everyone who read your work can talk with you and with each other.

3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
DaoistbWJh5P

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3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
onitchan

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3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Shadow_monarche

I would have rated this story 5 stars if the author hadn't taken two long breaks from updating. However, I can overlook that since each chapter has a substantial word count (averaging around 2,500 words). The main character is clever and well-developed, even though he's a bit lustful. But who am I to complain about that? After all, who wouldn’t be drawn to beautiful girls and want to build a harem, except perhaps for the disinterested or insincere? Back to the main point: the author’s writing has improved significantly over the past year, despite months of hiatus. Additionally, the first ten chapters, which initially had many spelling errors, have been revised, and now there’s nothing left for me to criticize. Lastly, author, thank you for this novel! Now, tell me—or rather, reassure me—Sadie-chan will be in the harem, right? Below is a picture of Sadie-chan.

img
3mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Mindlessreader25

Author please 🥺 I need mooree chapters ...

3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
rubby_cuty

SHAME there's no YURI in this story [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
DaoistWzKrKG

I never understood this mania of putting the sword on the back.............................................................................................

3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Italiangodnikom

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3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Sandip_Kar_9157

One of the best antihero fanfic I ever read. thank you for this fanfic.

3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Mindlessreader25

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 . Best one piece fan fic ever....I like luffy but his character does not align with mine...I like a little ruthless a bit villain and an absolute protective/ possessive attitude ...I Ren has it all.... Author I just lovee the way you write ..

img
3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
leporable_de_deiux

Très bon roman, mais l'auteur doit simplement maintenir un rythme de mise à jour constant. Je donnerai cinq étoiles à ma critique.

3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
raynjitchi

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3mth
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Tingfei

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Fang_ywan

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Yassir_5

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3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
donnat_791

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3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Raja_Sihir

[img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]

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3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Mindlessreader25

Author I have to say I love the way you ..ohh I have to say this I am following up with the latest chapters soo it's a request can you please add Hina , Momusagi goin ,reiju , Hancock ...these are some off the beautiful one ...ohh I apologise if I didn't add someone .there are just soo many😅

3mth
ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
Shadow_D_X

Mindblowing....speechless......keep going,,,author-kun..........awesome story..writing...everything...no complaints..............................................................

3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
aynhart82

GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS

3mth
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alaynon

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3mth
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