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- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
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The harem tag and the romance tag are fake af, there will be no harem and romance since every character will go back to their own world, not to mention the unintentional NTR, Yor for example when she will go back to her world she will get railed by the original Loid, i don't the sense of such a novel
I can delete this review later, I just wanted to ask what the point of this is, I mean I read in the comments that the MC seems to be someone known to the various girls that appear, Yor even slept with him, that wouldn't matter to me except for the fact that he did it thinking the MC is Loid and it seems like the girls will go off into their own worlds never to return (unintentional NTR I guess). So not being negative but other than the occasional +18, is there anything else?
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
surprised about the quality of this writing, really enjoyable and pretty detailed about the scenes looking forward for more updates, especially the One Punch Man ones later
really good really good, waiting for more updates [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Looks promising, i will wait for more chapters. the concept is great and i like that the main focus is the mc, not like the mc is a spectator in the novel🤩
Shameless author review. Hope you guys enjoyed it because I did. Dude, imagine writing this on NNN. Isn't that crazy? Also, feel free to comment or ask anything and I'll try my best to answer it.
The harem tag and the romance tag are fake af, there will be no harem and romance since every character will go back to their own world, not to mention the unintentional NTR, Yor for example when she will go back to her world she will get railed by the original Loid, i don't the sense of such a novel
I can delete this review later, I just wanted to ask what the point of this is, I mean I read in the comments that the MC seems to be someone known to the various girls that appear, Yor even slept with him, that wouldn't matter to me except for the fact that he did it thinking the MC is Loid and it seems like the girls will go off into their own worlds never to return (unintentional NTR I guess). So not being negative but other than the occasional +18, is there anything else?
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ surprised about the quality of this writing, really enjoyable and pretty detailed about the scenes looking forward for more updates, especially the One Punch Man ones later
really good really good, waiting for more updates [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Looks promising, i will wait for more chapters. the concept is great and i like that the main focus is the mc, not like the mc is a spectator in the novel🤩
Shameless author review. Hope you guys enjoyed it because I did. Dude, imagine writing this on NNN. Isn't that crazy? Also, feel free to comment or ask anything and I'll try my best to answer it.