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you see what have became of this novel?? sigh, next time don't ignore your readers.
Если вы любитель унижений и страданий героя, где все поливают его грязью и мучают, то вам сюда. Это история про слабака и неудачника который остается слабаком и неудачником до самого конца. Ещё от истории веет куколжом, особенно от первых глав. За 80 прочитанных глав был лишь один смешной и интересный момент в башне алхимиков. В остальном уныло и скучно, все заключается в том, чтобы показать какой гг слабый и никчёмный. Зря потраченое время.
Lathel’s lack of resolve frustrates me to no end. Anytime a woman so much as frowns, whatever he was saying or doing is completely forgotten and he does whatever they want. He will be chastising a woman for turning into an idiot as soon as she sees the mc, but as soon as she pouts at him for “yelling at her” he not only stops and comforts her, but also does whatever she wants from him to make up for yelling at her.
good, already read other works of this author, have to say like all of them. you can say his novel was the first novel that introduced multiple protagonist concepts to me. now, I don't like books with one protagonist.
okay am currently in the current chapters and I must say it's a nice read if you want to try something new give this a try
me gusta esta novela y ya leí hasta el cap 444 hasta Ai la novela avanza bastante bien pero el diseño de los personajes es lo que no cuadra ,bueno el autor explico porque las protagonista femenino son como son también para lo mismo con el prota lo que no cuadra son los protagonista masculino (villanos) son demasiado estúpidos
well this book has developed better than I expected and plus the updating stability is very good so I hope more people would read it
so I just found this book, have to say I liked the way it started but I started seeing the mc doing some very stupid things but decided to just go with it seeing as you specifically said the mc is stupid but seriously why does he waste so much opportunities just to have a harem of ten wives and a peaceful life but also ends up running head first into the main character, showing off a better lifestyle, better luck with women then he now waste his chance to become stronger for the same 10 wives and peaceful life, like how does he plan to live happily if he is weak jeezzz
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I want to ask when the MC will stop being so negative to an unnatural degree. MC is nice and kind and everything is fine, but whenever any of the women communicate with him, he thinks that she is Belong to the hero and rejects her feelings, and every time he says that he wants to have a harem, and I am in chapter 250, and so far MC is single and has not even sought to get any girl. I am currently reading the story just to find out. THE finality only and is not for the enjoyment of reading. I like MC to be nice, good, and a little clumsy because it is human nature, as is his distance from women because of his shock at being betrayed in the first and second life, so I admire him, but every once in a While he says he wants to have a harem and does not do so, and his negativity is constant in a way that is frank (it raises the pressure). . I am afraid that the story will become chaotic as it is now, and the author will fail to solve this mess and drop the novel, as is always the case with many authors. I hope that the author will solve this mess due to Mc’s extreme negativity and constant fear of everything. Do not drop the NOVEL
Honestly surprised how far I read before giving up. It had a pretty solid start and things were interesting up until Lilith showed up. Let me give you an example, Lilith takes hostage the MCs girls threatens him to comply, MC does it and gets angry, Lilith cries and says she’s doing it for him and asks why he thinks she’s evil. This basically happens at least 3 times within 10 chapters. I get it’s basically alluding that she’s probably one of his previous girls who reincarnated. But it’s just incredibly frustrating when the story just keeps repeating again and again. In my opinion the author is probably just prolonging the story and fishing for more money. The quality of the writing is definitely decent, but it’s a waste of time.
i like the concept of this novel and I want this type novel where he as to strong and hesitant to lose but I Wanted him to some what more confident from the start but he getting confident now
okay it's a good book, a little different than most but it does justice things might seem a little long winded but if you give it a chance it will not disappoint
So about the MC, imagine a happy go lucky supporting character that always makes fun off in the story or by the main characters. that's the vibe he gave me and honestly man? I'm starting to like this guy😂🤣 he's hilarious asf
Is lathel still excessively kind ? I am at chapter 186 but…this type of kindness is too much for me 😩 theses girls take advantage of him everytime but he does nothing…Will he still be the same ? Please respond
The Mc s annoying he doesn't act ike background character at all. and he doesn't have a spine you think his previous life or his experiences now would allow iI'm to stand up for himself. Except for charlotte (best girl) all theother girls have mental prooblems from the maids to his supposed teacher. They also don'tnow how to take no for an answer. At this point if you killed his kindness you will probably get an actual background character.
buena novel....pocos autores saben la verdadera mentalidad de una Yandere y el autor es uno de ellos....recomendado ....Waifus Inteligentes con un tornillo suelto , sadicas, crueles y sobre todo amorosas : MC ingenuo , pacifista pero tolerante .....en si suena a defectos pero no esperen nada de el...solo que es un MC perfecto para una trama de yanderes
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Can someone please spoil me about what’s going on with lafien I had beef with her when she started to take Alec’s side but overall I like the novel it’s not giving overpowered mc or having op skills from the start I like the plot and it sucks that the system is on his tail every time I’m rooting for Lilith though😭
The novel is good and promising im the first few chapter (give or take less than 100 chap) but, it went downhill after that. (i already read around 200+ chap so my review will contain some spoiler) The overall of this novel is not bad, if only you can tolerate MC who the only reedeming characteristics about him is a good guy (like average japanese isekai novel). He want to help people as much as he can, heck he event help a protagonist who clearly hate him and want to kill him. Speaking of the MC he was also a bit hypocrite. He said he wants to help people if he can and be a little light for this world but, he always helping a protagonist who only cause harm to the world. From how spineless he was i'm ok if didn't do anything about the bad protagonist but no, He want to glorify him at ever single moment and help him if he can even though he clearly causing harm to other people. Bruh where is his good type character thinking at that moment?? it's magically gone. Even though the Author reapetedly saying the good type protagonist not too liked in this time and reader only like dark type protagonist but, if you only make an MC who's only being good when it didn't involved problem from a protagonist how will we like him if he is this hypocrite?? Author also make Heroine intrested in MC too fast. i was okay when the Heroine is reincarnation from the world before, but how the other interested in him also at the same speed? The moment they hear MC name like a hypnotize person they intrested and some way or another they want to have intimate time with him? Like bruh what the f**k. It really facing the same problem with generic Japanese isekai novel where the Heroine like MC just because he was a little nice. Still at the same problem he has a system where he can't even touch said Heroine unless he get rap*d. So yeah don't expect a smut chapter in this one. The other bad thing author did was make MC want a Harem and at every posible time shove every woment who was not a Heroine but clearly interested in him away. I don't know why he want to make him warry of every women and not with a dark type protagonist who's clearly he knows will hold grude until his enemy died and only hold a good thinking about him. Bruh the reader is tired of the stupid and spineless MC who keep imaging a bad protagonist like some ultimate chad (i was wondering did he recieved cuckold fetish because of his cheating wive from his previous life)
This novel is fire idk what some of the other comments are on about. I'm 240 chapters in and loving it. THE IMPORTANT THING: Don't read this if you expect a huge amount of plot and character development over difficult battles, this is a slice of life for a reason. THE SECOND IMPORTANT THING: THE WHOLE POINT OF THE PLOT IS FOR THE MC TO BE NICE. The reason he gives into the FMC's waterworks isn't because he is dumb, it's because he's just a nice guy. This entire story is a diss of your typical super sayan anime protagonists and it puts a normalish guy into this scenario and it's great. Only downside is that he still doesn't have a single woman after 240 chapters (by his own choice) OVERALL: I'd personally recommend unless U want dark anti-hero MC (also he is still OPMC so don't worry)
MC is a literal damsel in distress with nothing in his control and all he does is shout lines along the lines "no dont this its bad." but no one listens to his whining. Also the characters and story is written in such a 1 dimensional way, the type you would expect from a children's story book. Example, there's this minion race who is dying because their is no food to eat but they won't hunt animals for food since they worship Nature goddess. Then our MC comes in and says "Bruh, hunting is also a cycle of nature so it's not blasphemy to kill animals for food", that's all it took for the minions to change their believe, Goddess makes MC god of nature. What is this nursery story writing.
Started of strong but the chapters have become so repetitive. The MC constantly Fantasies about having a harem but when women throw themself at him he complained about it. I honest to god believe we have had Lilith tell the MC that she likes him at least a dozen times and who constantly display her affextion for him and each time the MC replies “No you don’t like me, we don’t know each other, you’ll find someone better! It’s bizzare, relative and dragged out and at this point I don’t think I can continue any further because they’re is 0 development from the MC since chapter 1 and this dragged out nonsense is going to continue for 100’s More chapters without any development. When the other women display an interest in him, even those who aren’t female leads. perhaps you believe they are interrupting him when he is busy crafting/training etc. But he he has no profession and has no intent to better himself, and gets annoyed at them for interrupting his busy schedule of doing absolutely nothing.
Good... But a bit disappointing actually. The main character is quite hypocritical and inconsistent with what he had previously planned... Overall... Quite unfortunate
Hm... Fantasy battle, smart MC, smart heroins, supper plot twist...etc... are all things that... this novel doesn't have. This place only has... Stupid MC, Normal heroins, normal plot, slice of life and... some sh*t thing. I just want to write what I want no matter how bad it is. ( ' 3') .... Why I rate this sh*t book 5 stars? Because its my book (b ᵔ ▽ ᵔ) b
you see what have became of this novel?? sigh, next time don't ignore your readers.
Если вы любитель унижений и страданий героя, где все поливают его грязью и мучают, то вам сюда. Это история про слабака и неудачника который остается слабаком и неудачником до самого конца. Ещё от истории веет куколжом, особенно от первых глав. За 80 прочитанных глав был лишь один смешной и интересный момент в башне алхимиков. В остальном уныло и скучно, все заключается в том, чтобы показать какой гг слабый и никчёмный. Зря потраченое время.
Lathel’s lack of resolve frustrates me to no end. Anytime a woman so much as frowns, whatever he was saying or doing is completely forgotten and he does whatever they want. He will be chastising a woman for turning into an idiot as soon as she sees the mc, but as soon as she pouts at him for “yelling at her” he not only stops and comforts her, but also does whatever she wants from him to make up for yelling at her.
good, already read other works of this author, have to say like all of them. you can say his novel was the first novel that introduced multiple protagonist concepts to me. now, I don't like books with one protagonist.
okay am currently in the current chapters and I must say it's a nice read if you want to try something new give this a try
me gusta esta novela y ya leí hasta el cap 444 hasta Ai la novela avanza bastante bien pero el diseño de los personajes es lo que no cuadra ,bueno el autor explico porque las protagonista femenino son como son también para lo mismo con el prota lo que no cuadra son los protagonista masculino (villanos) son demasiado estúpidos
well this book has developed better than I expected and plus the updating stability is very good so I hope more people would read it
so I just found this book, have to say I liked the way it started but I started seeing the mc doing some very stupid things but decided to just go with it seeing as you specifically said the mc is stupid but seriously why does he waste so much opportunities just to have a harem of ten wives and a peaceful life but also ends up running head first into the main character, showing off a better lifestyle, better luck with women then he now waste his chance to become stronger for the same 10 wives and peaceful life, like how does he plan to live happily if he is weak jeezzz
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I want to ask when the MC will stop being so negative to an unnatural degree. MC is nice and kind and everything is fine, but whenever any of the women communicate with him, he thinks that she is Belong to the hero and rejects her feelings, and every time he says that he wants to have a harem, and I am in chapter 250, and so far MC is single and has not even sought to get any girl. I am currently reading the story just to find out. THE finality only and is not for the enjoyment of reading. I like MC to be nice, good, and a little clumsy because it is human nature, as is his distance from women because of his shock at being betrayed in the first and second life, so I admire him, but every once in a While he says he wants to have a harem and does not do so, and his negativity is constant in a way that is frank (it raises the pressure). . I am afraid that the story will become chaotic as it is now, and the author will fail to solve this mess and drop the novel, as is always the case with many authors. I hope that the author will solve this mess due to Mc’s extreme negativity and constant fear of everything. Do not drop the NOVEL
Honestly surprised how far I read before giving up. It had a pretty solid start and things were interesting up until Lilith showed up. Let me give you an example, Lilith takes hostage the MCs girls threatens him to comply, MC does it and gets angry, Lilith cries and says she’s doing it for him and asks why he thinks she’s evil. This basically happens at least 3 times within 10 chapters. I get it’s basically alluding that she’s probably one of his previous girls who reincarnated. But it’s just incredibly frustrating when the story just keeps repeating again and again. In my opinion the author is probably just prolonging the story and fishing for more money. The quality of the writing is definitely decent, but it’s a waste of time.
i like the concept of this novel and I want this type novel where he as to strong and hesitant to lose but I Wanted him to some what more confident from the start but he getting confident now
okay it's a good book, a little different than most but it does justice things might seem a little long winded but if you give it a chance it will not disappoint
So about the MC, imagine a happy go lucky supporting character that always makes fun off in the story or by the main characters. that's the vibe he gave me and honestly man? I'm starting to like this guy😂🤣 he's hilarious asf
Is lathel still excessively kind ? I am at chapter 186 but…this type of kindness is too much for me 😩 theses girls take advantage of him everytime but he does nothing…Will he still be the same ? Please respond
The Mc s annoying he doesn't act ike background character at all. and he doesn't have a spine you think his previous life or his experiences now would allow iI'm to stand up for himself. Except for charlotte (best girl) all theother girls have mental prooblems from the maids to his supposed teacher. They also don'tnow how to take no for an answer. At this point if you killed his kindness you will probably get an actual background character.
buena novel....pocos autores saben la verdadera mentalidad de una Yandere y el autor es uno de ellos....recomendado ....Waifus Inteligentes con un tornillo suelto , sadicas, crueles y sobre todo amorosas : MC ingenuo , pacifista pero tolerante .....en si suena a defectos pero no esperen nada de el...solo que es un MC perfecto para una trama de yanderes
RECAIMNG FUNDS BACK WITH BRUNOE QUICK H.A.C.KI, Miss Pandosa Jessica, originally from Australia and currently residing in the United States, am thankful to Brunoe Qiuck Hack who helped me to recover my lost funds and solace in the recovery of my Bitcoin. Through the intervention of ///////// brunoequickhack AT DOT Gmail Com ////// in the cyber realm, we were able to retrieve the funds for me and my children. While we found solace in this victory, the loss of my husband to scammers serves as a somber reminder. I advocate strongly against scammers and implore readers to echo this message. Let us unite in the fight for justice against scammers. Connect with Brunoe Quick Hack on WhatsApp at +1 (705) -7842-635. '''Website''' brunoequickhack (.) com
Can someone please spoil me about what’s going on with lafien I had beef with her when she started to take Alec’s side but overall I like the novel it’s not giving overpowered mc or having op skills from the start I like the plot and it sucks that the system is on his tail every time I’m rooting for Lilith though😭
The novel is good and promising im the first few chapter (give or take less than 100 chap) but, it went downhill after that. (i already read around 200+ chap so my review will contain some spoiler) The overall of this novel is not bad, if only you can tolerate MC who the only reedeming characteristics about him is a good guy (like average japanese isekai novel). He want to help people as much as he can, heck he event help a protagonist who clearly hate him and want to kill him. Speaking of the MC he was also a bit hypocrite. He said he wants to help people if he can and be a little light for this world but, he always helping a protagonist who only cause harm to the world. From how spineless he was i'm ok if didn't do anything about the bad protagonist but no, He want to glorify him at ever single moment and help him if he can even though he clearly causing harm to other people. Bruh where is his good type character thinking at that moment?? it's magically gone. Even though the Author reapetedly saying the good type protagonist not too liked in this time and reader only like dark type protagonist but, if you only make an MC who's only being good when it didn't involved problem from a protagonist how will we like him if he is this hypocrite?? Author also make Heroine intrested in MC too fast. i was okay when the Heroine is reincarnation from the world before, but how the other interested in him also at the same speed? The moment they hear MC name like a hypnotize person they intrested and some way or another they want to have intimate time with him? Like bruh what the f**k. It really facing the same problem with generic Japanese isekai novel where the Heroine like MC just because he was a little nice. Still at the same problem he has a system where he can't even touch said Heroine unless he get rap*d. So yeah don't expect a smut chapter in this one. The other bad thing author did was make MC want a Harem and at every posible time shove every woment who was not a Heroine but clearly interested in him away. I don't know why he want to make him warry of every women and not with a dark type protagonist who's clearly he knows will hold grude until his enemy died and only hold a good thinking about him. Bruh the reader is tired of the stupid and spineless MC who keep imaging a bad protagonist like some ultimate chad (i was wondering did he recieved cuckold fetish because of his cheating wive from his previous life)
This novel is fire idk what some of the other comments are on about. I'm 240 chapters in and loving it. THE IMPORTANT THING: Don't read this if you expect a huge amount of plot and character development over difficult battles, this is a slice of life for a reason. THE SECOND IMPORTANT THING: THE WHOLE POINT OF THE PLOT IS FOR THE MC TO BE NICE. The reason he gives into the FMC's waterworks isn't because he is dumb, it's because he's just a nice guy. This entire story is a diss of your typical super sayan anime protagonists and it puts a normalish guy into this scenario and it's great. Only downside is that he still doesn't have a single woman after 240 chapters (by his own choice) OVERALL: I'd personally recommend unless U want dark anti-hero MC (also he is still OPMC so don't worry)
MC is a literal damsel in distress with nothing in his control and all he does is shout lines along the lines "no dont this its bad." but no one listens to his whining. Also the characters and story is written in such a 1 dimensional way, the type you would expect from a children's story book. Example, there's this minion race who is dying because their is no food to eat but they won't hunt animals for food since they worship Nature goddess. Then our MC comes in and says "Bruh, hunting is also a cycle of nature so it's not blasphemy to kill animals for food", that's all it took for the minions to change their believe, Goddess makes MC god of nature. What is this nursery story writing.
Started of strong but the chapters have become so repetitive. The MC constantly Fantasies about having a harem but when women throw themself at him he complained about it. I honest to god believe we have had Lilith tell the MC that she likes him at least a dozen times and who constantly display her affextion for him and each time the MC replies “No you don’t like me, we don’t know each other, you’ll find someone better! It’s bizzare, relative and dragged out and at this point I don’t think I can continue any further because they’re is 0 development from the MC since chapter 1 and this dragged out nonsense is going to continue for 100’s More chapters without any development. When the other women display an interest in him, even those who aren’t female leads. perhaps you believe they are interrupting him when he is busy crafting/training etc. But he he has no profession and has no intent to better himself, and gets annoyed at them for interrupting his busy schedule of doing absolutely nothing.
Good... But a bit disappointing actually. The main character is quite hypocritical and inconsistent with what he had previously planned... Overall... Quite unfortunate
Hm... Fantasy battle, smart MC, smart heroins, supper plot twist...etc... are all things that... this novel doesn't have. This place only has... Stupid MC, Normal heroins, normal plot, slice of life and... some sh*t thing. I just want to write what I want no matter how bad it is. ( ' 3') .... Why I rate this sh*t book 5 stars? Because its my book (b ᵔ ▽ ᵔ) b