35รีวิว
4.82
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
แบ่งปันความคิดของคุณกับผู้อื่น
เขียนรีวิว
Tokyo Ghoul: Rise of the Blood Raven Tokyo Ghoul: El ascenso del Cuervo Sangriento La historia tenía para mucho más pero el autor le tuvo miedo al éxito [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Wonderful story. I just wish there was more of an expanded epilogue. Like what happened with Kaneki?
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
Top tier Aizen like protagonist with a brain that works well with how to understand human nature and the duality of the two races in the face of peace after a war pretty much. 10/10 would read again as soon as I forget about most of it
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
Thanks for the story, despite the rush I still quite enjoyed it:) --- ---------- -------------------- ---------------------------- ---------------------------------- -------------------------------------
Me encanto todo de las historia, literalmente estube envelesada con la lectura, el desarrollo del personaje me gusto mucho y su forma de dirigirse tambien me gusta, aunque en sierto sentido me hubiera gustado ver aunque sea un poco de lo tubo que pasar encerrado, cuando salio, el reencuentro con los chicos y tambien me hubiera gustado ver al presonaje con algun hijo o hija que tuvo osea un momento de calidad despues de terminar su trabajo o un reecuentro de sus antiguos subordinados :( aunque no estubo, realmente felicito al autor, me encanto mucho :D
I really enjoyed it just the ending a bit rushed but I still love it thank you dear author you always bring a good to me with your story thank you
a very good take on the original. only sad Thing is that some Charakters werent fleshed out but Overall a good novol. thank you author
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
just recently, I finished watching tokyo Ghoul. I liked the first season . the 2nd season for its fights, but I was disappointed when I watched the third season. this fanfic I have read only 5 ch, but it has a concept of creating an organisation, supporting fellow ghouls like anteiku. I would like the author not to drop this book. I want this book to reach its full potential .
It’s very good it’s interesting because of difffrent element of the story I like it lot.thank for the work author.
Honestly love the plot of the story. It's new and original, and I like where it is heading. The main character is great too, and his backstory is decently well thought out. That being said, the grammar and overall writing quality is awful. Some sentences I'm barely able to understand what is trying to be said, the author definitely needs some type of proof reading.
Story is great in terms of quality and grammar and you can feel the dedication from the author. but the MC just sounds like a guy too weak to be happy. even if this puts him in a position to explore the morality of life it all ultimately comes down to him being weak and making decisions based on that weakness he felt his whole life. its cool but boring and so over dramatic and dramatized to persuade you into somehow agreeing with his totally skewed perception. hard to really immerse yourself when his stance is something that is part delusion, whether its based in fact or not, its a misguided view that honestly is only agreeable to folk who's lives havent been that happy and are angry about it. story shows the authors talent but honestly trying to mix reality with fiction never ends well. they play by different rules and laws of physics and applying our realities problems to a world of the supernatural makes zero sense to me, no matter how mundane. which is honestly what this story tries to make you do. and plus. an anti hero is a hero. a villian is a villian. can't be both. but a lot of authors love adding both. you can tell they've been brainwashed by this app into believing they are in any way similar.
Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job!
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
Very good novel, it has everything you could look for in a good Tokyo ghoul novel. There are certain things to improve regarding the translation but Gothic is very good.
writing quality:3story development:5character design:5updates:5world background:5The writing is like AI, not smooth, feels forced,
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
Finally, a tokyo ghoul fanfic. Hope it is good, if it is i'll support it all I can.
Very promising hmmmmmm.................................................. .......................................................................
I like how the story goes and it's rare to see a Tokyo Ghoul fanfic. I expect a lot from this fanfic, I hope you don't abandon it.............................
This is a Cuervo fanfic and there are no reasons not to rate this fanfic with 5 stars because at least in my opinion his career deserves 5 stars, I will let this accumulate chapters and I will return in the future, give love to the fanfic Cuervo, I know you can 🫵
Continue please, the idea is great, the implementation is very interesting, keep writing, you are doing well, good luck to you, more inspiration 🙂
Chap9..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
I am someone simple, I see Tokyo Ghoul and your name, and I am happy.------------------------------------------------‐------------‐-----------------------
One of the best ghoul fanfictions👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🥇👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏆👍👍👍👍
I'm just traveling like a crow, the most incredible bird on the planet. I am the master crow and my little crows, welcome to this novel about Tokyo Ghoul. I experiment with many new things in this novel so I hope you like it. Don't forget to support me with power stones, this is important in the first month of publication because I reach more people.
Tokyo Ghoul: Rise of the Blood Raven Tokyo Ghoul: El ascenso del Cuervo Sangriento La historia tenía para mucho más pero el autor le tuvo miedo al éxito [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Wonderful story. I just wish there was more of an expanded epilogue. Like what happened with Kaneki?
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Top tier Aizen like protagonist with a brain that works well with how to understand human nature and the duality of the two races in the face of peace after a war pretty much. 10/10 would read again as soon as I forget about most of it
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Thanks for the story, despite the rush I still quite enjoyed it:) --- ---------- -------------------- ---------------------------- ---------------------------------- -------------------------------------
Me encanto todo de las historia, literalmente estube envelesada con la lectura, el desarrollo del personaje me gusto mucho y su forma de dirigirse tambien me gusta, aunque en sierto sentido me hubiera gustado ver aunque sea un poco de lo tubo que pasar encerrado, cuando salio, el reencuentro con los chicos y tambien me hubiera gustado ver al presonaje con algun hijo o hija que tuvo osea un momento de calidad despues de terminar su trabajo o un reecuentro de sus antiguos subordinados :( aunque no estubo, realmente felicito al autor, me encanto mucho :D
I really enjoyed it just the ending a bit rushed but I still love it thank you dear author you always bring a good to me with your story thank you
a very good take on the original. only sad Thing is that some Charakters werent fleshed out but Overall a good novol. thank you author
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
just recently, I finished watching tokyo Ghoul. I liked the first season . the 2nd season for its fights, but I was disappointed when I watched the third season. this fanfic I have read only 5 ch, but it has a concept of creating an organisation, supporting fellow ghouls like anteiku. I would like the author not to drop this book. I want this book to reach its full potential .
It’s very good it’s interesting because of difffrent element of the story I like it lot.thank for the work author.
Honestly love the plot of the story. It's new and original, and I like where it is heading. The main character is great too, and his backstory is decently well thought out. That being said, the grammar and overall writing quality is awful. Some sentences I'm barely able to understand what is trying to be said, the author definitely needs some type of proof reading.
Story is great in terms of quality and grammar and you can feel the dedication from the author. but the MC just sounds like a guy too weak to be happy. even if this puts him in a position to explore the morality of life it all ultimately comes down to him being weak and making decisions based on that weakness he felt his whole life. its cool but boring and so over dramatic and dramatized to persuade you into somehow agreeing with his totally skewed perception. hard to really immerse yourself when his stance is something that is part delusion, whether its based in fact or not, its a misguided view that honestly is only agreeable to folk who's lives havent been that happy and are angry about it. story shows the authors talent but honestly trying to mix reality with fiction never ends well. they play by different rules and laws of physics and applying our realities problems to a world of the supernatural makes zero sense to me, no matter how mundane. which is honestly what this story tries to make you do. and plus. an anti hero is a hero. a villian is a villian. can't be both. but a lot of authors love adding both. you can tell they've been brainwashed by this app into believing they are in any way similar.
Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job!
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Very good novel, it has everything you could look for in a good Tokyo ghoul novel. There are certain things to improve regarding the translation but Gothic is very good.
writing quality:3story development:5character design:5updates:5world background:5The writing is like AI, not smooth, feels forced,
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Finally, a tokyo ghoul fanfic. Hope it is good, if it is i'll support it all I can.
Very promising hmmmmmm.................................................. .......................................................................
I like how the story goes and it's rare to see a Tokyo Ghoul fanfic. I expect a lot from this fanfic, I hope you don't abandon it.............................
This is a Cuervo fanfic and there are no reasons not to rate this fanfic with 5 stars because at least in my opinion his career deserves 5 stars, I will let this accumulate chapters and I will return in the future, give love to the fanfic Cuervo, I know you can 🫵
Continue please, the idea is great, the implementation is very interesting, keep writing, you are doing well, good luck to you, more inspiration 🙂
Chap9..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I am someone simple, I see Tokyo Ghoul and your name, and I am happy.------------------------------------------------‐------------‐-----------------------
One of the best ghoul fanfictions👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🥇👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏆👍👍👍👍
I'm just traveling like a crow, the most incredible bird on the planet. I am the master crow and my little crows, welcome to this novel about Tokyo Ghoul. I experiment with many new things in this novel so I hope you like it. Don't forget to support me with power stones, this is important in the first month of publication because I reach more people.