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เขียนรีวิวI didn't expect this book to be so good in the beginning but glad I was mistaken, keep it up author🔥🔥
Meh, all I can do is provide a review which is usually used by bots_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_
The story is one of the best I have read the plot is perfect so far the MC is perfect he does not have a typical annoying hero morality from the other stories and the power increases are not exaggerated like other stories. I give the story a 9/10.
The book is a breath of fresh air. It's incredible for it's current length. Nothing to point out on my part.
This is definitely one of the best Dragon ball fanfiction here. Hopefully the author does not mess it up and completes it as well as updates regularly. The fic has no major turnoff exvept perhaps a little overdependence on system rather than saiyan bloodline and no innovation on ki techniques.
One of the better Dragonball fics on webnovel. The system isn't op, and to me is more like a typical dbz scouter than a classic “gold finger”. The Zenkai boost isn't overblown either. The writing is good, and the story is pretty original. It's not your typical "reincarnation/s.i. inside the original DBZ plot” but an AU instead, which imo is a good thing. Definitely worth the read and yes the main protag. didn't skip leg day...
Good ~~~ ....................................................................................................................................
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์Good ~~ ....................................................................................................................................
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์I give 5 🌟 just for the cover ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I like to believe I am a big Fan of the DBZ/S, and I always find it interesting when authors use the these created worlds. And put there own spin on they making them different and unique, so coming a cross a story like this one. Has peaked my interest quite a lot. The story is easy to follow and fast paced but leaves enough space to understand what's going on with out over loading in info drops. There enough action to keep you interested without making the carryover for like 9 chapters charging one attack lol anyways I'm really enjoying you work please continue 😁😁😁
The story doesn't make sense, the MC is an idiot and there is a system, otherwise I give it a three for effort.
Most of the Dragon ball fanfics are pretty bad well I don’t no about bad but I really don’t like them but I do like your one so I hope you don’t drop the story
read it upto ch 12. mc literally has no empathy for other races and he is a massmurderer . killing living beings gives him xp. he still hasnt figured out how to sense others. how people support genocide is beyond me
Not unique or anything but the writing is alright. I enjoy mc's that kill a lot of people...also gj on the cover art. My guy looks like he never skips leg day.
It's not unique, but it's fun. Continue to provide more beautiful chapters in the future. I will be waiting for more chapters.…………………………………………
I love the story but I would like to know when the update is. The story is abandoned or what happened? But the whole story is good but I hope it is updated regularly.
I didn't expect this book to be so good in the beginning but glad I was mistaken, keep it up author🔥🔥
Meh, all I can do is provide a review which is usually used by bots_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_
The story is one of the best I have read the plot is perfect so far the MC is perfect he does not have a typical annoying hero morality from the other stories and the power increases are not exaggerated like other stories. I give the story a 9/10.
The book is a breath of fresh air. It's incredible for it's current length. Nothing to point out on my part.
This is definitely one of the best Dragon ball fanfiction here. Hopefully the author does not mess it up and completes it as well as updates regularly. The fic has no major turnoff exvept perhaps a little overdependence on system rather than saiyan bloodline and no innovation on ki techniques.
One of the better Dragonball fics on webnovel. The system isn't op, and to me is more like a typical dbz scouter than a classic “gold finger”. The Zenkai boost isn't overblown either. The writing is good, and the story is pretty original. It's not your typical "reincarnation/s.i. inside the original DBZ plot” but an AU instead, which imo is a good thing. Definitely worth the read and yes the main protag. didn't skip leg day...
Good ~~~ ....................................................................................................................................
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์Good ~~ ....................................................................................................................................
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์I give 5 🌟 just for the cover ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I like to believe I am a big Fan of the DBZ/S, and I always find it interesting when authors use the these created worlds. And put there own spin on they making them different and unique, so coming a cross a story like this one. Has peaked my interest quite a lot. The story is easy to follow and fast paced but leaves enough space to understand what's going on with out over loading in info drops. There enough action to keep you interested without making the carryover for like 9 chapters charging one attack lol anyways I'm really enjoying you work please continue 😁😁😁
The story doesn't make sense, the MC is an idiot and there is a system, otherwise I give it a three for effort.
Most of the Dragon ball fanfics are pretty bad well I don’t no about bad but I really don’t like them but I do like your one so I hope you don’t drop the story
read it upto ch 12. mc literally has no empathy for other races and he is a massmurderer . killing living beings gives him xp. he still hasnt figured out how to sense others. how people support genocide is beyond me
Not unique or anything but the writing is alright. I enjoy mc's that kill a lot of people...also gj on the cover art. My guy looks like he never skips leg day.
It's not unique, but it's fun. Continue to provide more beautiful chapters in the future. I will be waiting for more chapters.…………………………………………
I love the story but I would like to know when the update is. The story is abandoned or what happened? But the whole story is good but I hope it is updated regularly.