India: I became Nehru

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Subhadip_Dutta

please continue atleast it's a good story and first time any authour wrote about being leader of India I would love to see our dream INDIA JAI HIND

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SnowyTempest

Keep up the great work. I understand this is more wish fulfilment than anything and the author is venting and allowing us to vent too. I just humbly request the author to not monetize this and keep it free for everyone to see. I am just a student and don't have the funds nor the freedom to financially support this treasure and can only do so in spirit. Lots of love to the author. P.S. I hope you write another fic like thid but on a more serious note. ohh and the guilds were and unexpected twist. loved the idea and the unis too like nalanda oof. tho not really sure of indic as Indian languages are pretty diverse I understand the need and pros of a national language. once again kudos and lots of love.

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YourDad_

Okay, it is good. I half expected it to be filled with büII$híts, but I am wrong. Author knows what he is doing and his knowledge of History and International relations is good as well. Though he could work a little on polity aspect as that's not how it works and by introducing so many new things just after coming out of Jail is not a wise decision. He does not know who is a friend who is a foe. That's a sure shot way to get assassinated. Other than that it's decent

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SuryaputraKarna

Bharat Mata ki Jai! Please continue writing your novel it has a high potential

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Chirashu_Jindal

Hey author shouldn’t you use Sanskrit as the official languages as all Indian languages are derived from Sanskrit and it is most scientific appropriation language?

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Suroj_34

It is better to develop the country together and take it towards super power without spreading hatred between Hindus and Muslims First Indian writer writing for Indian and I like it very much now everyone is loving it please write more we all support I am 💪speaking from Bengal

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Mister_Robot

why did you stop??? please continue. there are reviews accusing this story of being pro-Hindutva etc. but should the author be allowed to express his views through their novel? you are more than welcome to write one as well. The beauty of democracy is such that everyone can voice their opinion. I'm a North Eastern Christian tribal and I don't mind when opinions clash, please continue writing it.

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race_sins77

I like it brother please continue it as soon as possible

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tanush_kumar

please continue... very good start[img=update]

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Heart_Crown

total thrash MC and there is no character development 😔 as mc was literally locked 🔒 up in jail for nearly 25 years . this is so stupid that I have gone bonkers and now regretting as why I even started to read this no brainer thingy .

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SolaceViolet

thanks for the great novel. It's interesting.

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maddymudda

Nice topic for your book but I do want to remind you that being so far from any practicality will soon leave you without a plot to take the story forward. Anyone who has grown up in a democracy knows that no matter how powerful you become, unless a politician has complete domination, not 40-60 or 50-50, he can never act as your M.C. is acting. Be a bit more practical in your approach. Best of luck.

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Swikong

A Story that is not wish-fullfillment, Instead makes you feel blissfullness & fullfillment. Mad Respect 🙏 To The Author.

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SURAJ_MEHTA

you shiolnot have deleted the story just wrote dropped .. given the epilog and be done with it.. you should not have deleted the story ... please re upload it .. please

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Sid_Nite

looks like some liberal got offended sad this story got deleted.

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Swikong

🙏 THE G.O.A.T. MATERIAL BOOK/STORY TILL DATE IN MY READING JOURNEY OF STORIES. HOPE IT EVOLVES TO BECOME GREATEST & REACH IT'S GRAND COMPLETION WITH INFINITE CONTINUATIONS. 🙏

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George_RG

What an awesome idea for a story is cannot wait to see where it it goes

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Jabed_Hossain_Emon

humm! i think you should update more Chapter that we can rate this novel

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Reader98555

If you ask me its one of the best novel Not because I am Indian , because it based on Reality that what would’ve been done at that time👌

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CHIRASHU_JINDAL

Hey author you should also make a strong illegal immigration policy to prevent illegal immigration from surrounding states . To prevent situations like Bengal where large people immigrate from Bangladesh and get civilian status