18รีวิว
4.5
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- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
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An absolutely fantastic story! Yes, the pronouns and grammar aren’t great but they aren’t bad enough to make the reading too difficult. I highly recommend this because of the great characters & story line. A really enjoyable read!
A decent Cultivation story with interesting characters and world building. Unfortunately, the writing quality prevents it from reaching its full potential. Can still be a fun read if you don't set your expectations too high
There may be a slight writing problem.. But the Story & Characters are interesting enough to keep you hooked.. 🆒
I really like this book. The characters are interesting. I’m really curious about the two personalities of Kenny Lin. The only downside is the grammar issues
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synopsis is good, progress of the story is very slow. . don't know if it's worth per chapter, is the update regularly uploaded or took to long for a new one? if it is, this story might be forgotten. . it's a pity though, seems promising,
Read up to Chapter 100 so far and enjoy the story as a whole. The only issue is the amount of pronouns that are used incorrectly. This issue has become more obvious as I approached Chapter 100, and it disturbs the flow of the story. Hopefully, the author fixes this as having to correct the pronouns in my head every time Amalia is referred to as "he" or another character's gender seemingly changes, makes reading difficult. Also, if possible, it would be nice to have a constant update of Amalia's cultivation process rather than just knowing that she's become stronger. Like telling us when she's become the next level (not anything major though)
I am totally enjoyimg the story. Can the book go for a good edit? Yes. But overall the author is doing a great job. I totally can’t wait to read the next chapter.
From the summary, it looks like the book needed to be proofread for grammatical errors. Too distracting.
Two chapter a day it's not enough author! Please, update new chapter more!
I will give 5 stars first, i will wait for future development to review it again.
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It's really slow burn, its already chapter 90 but the romance still havent started yet. give me more romance scene!≥3≤
It's really generic plot novel, but since its cultivation novel i will still read it. not bad for pass my time.
I Like the plot, the Fl character is also favorite, the ML is already shown but it seemed it still need long way to go before the romance started. i can wait for the next chapter.
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Rebirth novels are always too intriguing to read and this is one of the intriguing one . To see how a mercenary is going to survive in a cultivation world sure will be the challenging phase for the mc .
An absolutely fantastic story! Yes, the pronouns and grammar aren’t great but they aren’t bad enough to make the reading too difficult. I highly recommend this because of the great characters & story line. A really enjoyable read!
A decent Cultivation story with interesting characters and world building. Unfortunately, the writing quality prevents it from reaching its full potential. Can still be a fun read if you don't set your expectations too high
There may be a slight writing problem.. But the Story & Characters are interesting enough to keep you hooked.. 🆒
I really like this book. The characters are interesting. I’m really curious about the two personalities of Kenny Lin. The only downside is the grammar issues
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ synopsis is good, progress of the story is very slow. . don't know if it's worth per chapter, is the update regularly uploaded or took to long for a new one? if it is, this story might be forgotten. . it's a pity though, seems promising,
Read up to Chapter 100 so far and enjoy the story as a whole. The only issue is the amount of pronouns that are used incorrectly. This issue has become more obvious as I approached Chapter 100, and it disturbs the flow of the story. Hopefully, the author fixes this as having to correct the pronouns in my head every time Amalia is referred to as "he" or another character's gender seemingly changes, makes reading difficult. Also, if possible, it would be nice to have a constant update of Amalia's cultivation process rather than just knowing that she's become stronger. Like telling us when she's become the next level (not anything major though)
I am totally enjoyimg the story. Can the book go for a good edit? Yes. But overall the author is doing a great job. I totally can’t wait to read the next chapter.
From the summary, it looks like the book needed to be proofread for grammatical errors. Too distracting.
Two chapter a day it's not enough author! Please, update new chapter more!
I will give 5 stars first, i will wait for future development to review it again.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ It's really slow burn, its already chapter 90 but the romance still havent started yet. give me more romance scene!≥3≤
It's really generic plot novel, but since its cultivation novel i will still read it. not bad for pass my time.
I Like the plot, the Fl character is also favorite, the ML is already shown but it seemed it still need long way to go before the romance started. i can wait for the next chapter.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Rebirth novels are always too intriguing to read and this is one of the intriguing one . To see how a mercenary is going to survive in a cultivation world sure will be the challenging phase for the mc .
Great story! Only issue is the grammar.