2รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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เขียนรีวิว
LV 3 ![Badge]()
I love the story the magical elements but not really the Chemistry among them but it is better than some ranking stories
LV 2 ![Badge]()
I like it It is something new. Ig that we will connect more with MC as story progress and with the system too . But I feel like that event's were too sudden in first 5 chap like he met Luna and in next chap she is far away. And fights should've be little explained like how fight went . That's it and there is no need to say that story is going to be awesome when mc will get element
LV 3 ![Badge]()
I love the story the magical elements but not really the Chemistry among them but it is better than some ranking stories
I like it It is something new. Ig that we will connect more with MC as story progress and with the system too . But I feel like that event's were too sudden in first 5 chap like he met Luna and in next chap she is far away. And fights should've be little explained like how fight went . That's it and there is no need to say that story is going to be awesome when mc will get element