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Read to chapter 88.The writing quality is really good except for one thing, It's like watching an 80's soap opera. You will end up skipping paragraphs every chapter (5 paragraphs in a row to get back to the progression of the story is common). Flashy dramatic wording should be used for impactful moments of the storyline, not on getting coffee or taking a shower imo
Lets faking goooo,. It's a good translation. Keep this quality of work and keep the chapters rolling,🤟
This is the transmigration novel I have been looking for. not the ones where the transmigrator fully takes over the host or that the host is dead. Its different and I love that
Written with care no spelling errors like most of Chinese themed novels. I had decided to stop reading until i came across your novel keep it up
great job author the novel is going great came across it on novels to review but now i have added on my library. now i am invested in it want to read more
OMG I didn't expect such a good novel from new author. I love how the story is progesing keep it going like this and don't drop it. Can't to see what the future has in store for Li Chen.
we off with a good start here, please don't drop it halfway. even though i can tell here and there that you are a new author but i have to say that i'm impressed.
I have a feeling about something that is being hinted in the novel but I don't want to spoil, if are here to read reviews so you can start the novel... well my review is that the novel is perfect for a first time author.
I have to say the story is impressive, please don't drop it like how most new authors are doing recently. I like reading novels from new authors. All the best
Loving the story, keep it up. can't wait to read more as it continues. Even though you do take sometime to update chapters but your writing is impressive
The novel is going great so far, I love how the God of War didn't fully take over Li Chen's life. the conflict between the two is what I am here for. can't to see what happens as the story unfold.
Hey readers, author here! Just wanted ya'll to note that this is my first time writing a novel and if you see some mistakes here and there please help me note them. By the way, English is not my first language but I think I am doing my best so far.
Read to chapter 88.The writing quality is really good except for one thing, It's like watching an 80's soap opera. You will end up skipping paragraphs every chapter (5 paragraphs in a row to get back to the progression of the story is common). Flashy dramatic wording should be used for impactful moments of the storyline, not on getting coffee or taking a shower imo
Lets faking goooo,. It's a good translation. Keep this quality of work and keep the chapters rolling,🤟
This is the transmigration novel I have been looking for. not the ones where the transmigrator fully takes over the host or that the host is dead. Its different and I love that
Written with care no spelling errors like most of Chinese themed novels. I had decided to stop reading until i came across your novel keep it up
great job author the novel is going great came across it on novels to review but now i have added on my library. now i am invested in it want to read more
OMG I didn't expect such a good novel from new author. I love how the story is progesing keep it going like this and don't drop it. Can't to see what the future has in store for Li Chen.
we off with a good start here, please don't drop it halfway. even though i can tell here and there that you are a new author but i have to say that i'm impressed.
I have a feeling about something that is being hinted in the novel but I don't want to spoil, if are here to read reviews so you can start the novel... well my review is that the novel is perfect for a first time author.
I have to say the story is impressive, please don't drop it like how most new authors are doing recently. I like reading novels from new authors. All the best
Loving the story, keep it up. can't wait to read more as it continues. Even though you do take sometime to update chapters but your writing is impressive
The novel is going great so far, I love how the God of War didn't fully take over Li Chen's life. the conflict between the two is what I am here for. can't to see what happens as the story unfold.
Hey readers, author here! Just wanted ya'll to note that this is my first time writing a novel and if you see some mistakes here and there please help me note them. By the way, English is not my first language but I think I am doing my best so far.