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Has too many cliche of Chinese Novels and pretty much follows it to a tee. The betrayal fely kinda dumb and seems to be jus their to push the plot without even being believable. Everything just happens without making any sense or being believable.
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its really baddass and aout of the box story of Onepiece . .. keep going stable update and get all my power stone 😊
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A great novel, Even LOTM cannot compare to this, I'm shocked someone can write like this and the best of best is the translator, what king of godly translator the author buyed ? He is realy good [img=coins]
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Didn’t come in expecting much but I was pleasantly surprised by the quality of the work. Grammar is good so you wont have to worry about that. Characters are also well written and so far the update stability has been great. Keep up the good work
This novel is a lot of fun especially when its getting its own proper translation mhm perfect.I suggest reading this as the novel is a fun read from beginning through the end. Peace :)
A nice read and wonderfull story .a villian as mc which is my type. But hope you release chapters faster.
Meh, I'm giving myself a 1 star revie because my dumb self had to repost this novel, I will explain some stuff about this marvelous piece of fiction. Thee details are especially for those who might not give the novel a chance because the main character is an old man... If you don't mind soilers go ahead: 1st. The MC is one greedy sonuva-. That's also why he could be considered somewhat a "villain" type of guy. 2nd. He has a "relationship" with Boa Hancock, and possibly other women too, who knows, I certainly don't since I'm stocking chappies as I read and get them translated (Spoiler: It's harem I just dont feel like changing what I wrote before, it's implied that he sleeps with both Baby 5 and Violet, in the finale Tashigi joins the harem and others too mayber thorough the story). I say this because albeit in a "relationship" he doesn't seem to care much about her as long as she remains his. 3rd. Even though the MC is a Marine, he does what's more profitable for him. He went against Sengoku's orders when he didn't receive what he wanted. Did I mention his love for money? For instance he saves Ace only after making Whitebeard pay a ransom. He even sold a few prisoners from Impel Down ahah. 4th. (This is mostly a Disclaimer but yeah) Keep in mind that currently One Piece is still ongoing, and this fanfiction was written before the current plots were unfolded, you can consider it AU-ish probably in some cases. I say this because Vegapunk may or may not... Get killed not much was known about him before this was written I think. Anyway, sorry for the spoilers just wanted to clarify for those that might not even pick it up. Gonna pin this.
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Has too many cliche of Chinese Novels and pretty much follows it to a tee. The betrayal fely kinda dumb and seems to be jus their to push the plot without even being believable. Everything just happens without making any sense or being believable.
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its really baddass and aout of the box story of Onepiece . .. keep going stable update and get all my power stone 😊
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A great novel, Even LOTM cannot compare to this, I'm shocked someone can write like this and the best of best is the translator, what king of godly translator the author buyed ? He is realy good [img=coins]
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Didn’t come in expecting much but I was pleasantly surprised by the quality of the work. Grammar is good so you wont have to worry about that. Characters are also well written and so far the update stability has been great. Keep up the good work
This novel is a lot of fun especially when its getting its own proper translation mhm perfect.I suggest reading this as the novel is a fun read from beginning through the end. Peace :)
A nice read and wonderfull story .a villian as mc which is my type. But hope you release chapters faster.
Meh, I'm giving myself a 1 star revie because my dumb self had to repost this novel, I will explain some stuff about this marvelous piece of fiction. Thee details are especially for those who might not give the novel a chance because the main character is an old man... If you don't mind soilers go ahead: 1st. The MC is one greedy sonuva-. That's also why he could be considered somewhat a "villain" type of guy. 2nd. He has a "relationship" with Boa Hancock, and possibly other women too, who knows, I certainly don't since I'm stocking chappies as I read and get them translated (Spoiler: It's harem I just dont feel like changing what I wrote before, it's implied that he sleeps with both Baby 5 and Violet, in the finale Tashigi joins the harem and others too mayber thorough the story). I say this because albeit in a "relationship" he doesn't seem to care much about her as long as she remains his. 3rd. Even though the MC is a Marine, he does what's more profitable for him. He went against Sengoku's orders when he didn't receive what he wanted. Did I mention his love for money? For instance he saves Ace only after making Whitebeard pay a ransom. He even sold a few prisoners from Impel Down ahah. 4th. (This is mostly a Disclaimer but yeah) Keep in mind that currently One Piece is still ongoing, and this fanfiction was written before the current plots were unfolded, you can consider it AU-ish probably in some cases. I say this because Vegapunk may or may not... Get killed not much was known about him before this was written I think. Anyway, sorry for the spoilers just wanted to clarify for those that might not even pick it up. Gonna pin this.