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4.18
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
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- กาสร้างตัวละคร
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Ça va j’ai pas mal aimé mais la meuf la Hilde je sais pas pourquoi je pouvais pas me l’avoir MDR et son obsession avec le lait bref mais en soi c’est pas mal.
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Worst house of the dragon fan fiction and the author should get some mental checkup Bro don't know something called common sense Even the real meagor wasn't that cruel
Great novel, great premise, great writing even though there were a few errors here and there, I think this one is a step above your other GoT fic as there was more of a sense of progression. A small and only critique I have is in this novel you didn't really do anything with his vampire bloodline or powers while in your other GoT fic you did a little too much with it, though that is just my opinion. I'm going to start reading your Vikings fic now, peace
Out of your other fanfics so far, this is my least favorite, but it's still top tier.
I absolutely loved this story, I don't understand how people are criticizing it, since from the first chapter it was already in development and it was very clear that the story itself was going to be dark. I loved the development of the characters, because remember, this is a story!
I hope you can get some mental help.... wish they had system to give negative rating. But seriously you should get some help... ....................
is there going to be any new chapters, or are you dropping it. same with the previous one as well?
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Buen libro y excelente desarrollo de personajes, hay cosas que se pueden mejorar pero la tasa de actualización debería ser mayor 1 o 2 caps x día
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read two chapters, the 'psyc hotic' monologues just ain't it. honestly the only thing that made me read this thing is the weird synopsis. born as aegon the unworthy's twin but also the son of viserys and alicent? i think the author's confused aegon ii with aegon iv, like... you're writing a fanfic about hotd and didn't even know that? maybe it's just AU where somehow the two combined and became a mega a hole but honestly i don't care, it's just the d emented self insert of a dude anyway
N of he best cruel gore and mindfak house of dragon fic! I personally love it. It feed my darker side more than ever man hahaha. Tho aegon being the first and older siblings seemed unnecessary but meh u cover it with the greater plot. Thanks man and i hope u’ll finish the fic! All da best!
Nao gostei............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Another amazing novel Mr author can never go wrong when writing 🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻
Ain't giving 1 star for All ur descriptions tags but for the story ☠️I would seriously recommend u to a psychiatric for all the backdoor stuff u wrote even for men ...
Although I've never watched Game of Thrones or House of dragons I can still follow along easily. This is now my favorite story so far. The only downside is that after you read a chapter you just crave more. That is something I've never felt about another story before.
overpowered politics for fun are the best combination its like i wanna be the king and no one will refuse but where's the fun...slowly creating a dark and twisted yet enjoyable character its just the best and this book is way more intense then the other ones its fun to see different styles from one author its shows your talent keep it up....
It's a lot of nonsense but it's very good This author knows how to give fanservice and finish it off while creating a better backstory than a lot of MC "Jack Snow, Jon Snow's brother" fanfic out there
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Ça va j’ai pas mal aimé mais la meuf la Hilde je sais pas pourquoi je pouvais pas me l’avoir MDR et son obsession avec le lait bref mais en soi c’est pas mal.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Worst house of the dragon fan fiction and the author should get some mental checkup Bro don't know something called common sense Even the real meagor wasn't that cruel
Great novel, great premise, great writing even though there were a few errors here and there, I think this one is a step above your other GoT fic as there was more of a sense of progression. A small and only critique I have is in this novel you didn't really do anything with his vampire bloodline or powers while in your other GoT fic you did a little too much with it, though that is just my opinion. I'm going to start reading your Vikings fic now, peace
Out of your other fanfics so far, this is my least favorite, but it's still top tier.
I absolutely loved this story, I don't understand how people are criticizing it, since from the first chapter it was already in development and it was very clear that the story itself was going to be dark. I loved the development of the characters, because remember, this is a story!
I hope you can get some mental help.... wish they had system to give negative rating. But seriously you should get some help... ....................
is there going to be any new chapters, or are you dropping it. same with the previous one as well?
GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!GOOD NOVEL!!!!!!!!!
Buen libro y excelente desarrollo de personajes, hay cosas que se pueden mejorar pero la tasa de actualización debería ser mayor 1 o 2 caps x día
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ read two chapters, the 'psyc hotic' monologues just ain't it. honestly the only thing that made me read this thing is the weird synopsis. born as aegon the unworthy's twin but also the son of viserys and alicent? i think the author's confused aegon ii with aegon iv, like... you're writing a fanfic about hotd and didn't even know that? maybe it's just AU where somehow the two combined and became a mega a hole but honestly i don't care, it's just the d emented self insert of a dude anyway
N of he best cruel gore and mindfak house of dragon fic! I personally love it. It feed my darker side more than ever man hahaha. Tho aegon being the first and older siblings seemed unnecessary but meh u cover it with the greater plot. Thanks man and i hope u’ll finish the fic! All da best!
Nao gostei............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Another amazing novel Mr author can never go wrong when writing 🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻
Ain't giving 1 star for All ur descriptions tags but for the story ☠️I would seriously recommend u to a psychiatric for all the backdoor stuff u wrote even for men ...
Although I've never watched Game of Thrones or House of dragons I can still follow along easily. This is now my favorite story so far. The only downside is that after you read a chapter you just crave more. That is something I've never felt about another story before.
overpowered politics for fun are the best combination its like i wanna be the king and no one will refuse but where's the fun...slowly creating a dark and twisted yet enjoyable character its just the best and this book is way more intense then the other ones its fun to see different styles from one author its shows your talent keep it up....
It's a lot of nonsense but it's very good This author knows how to give fanservice and finish it off while creating a better backstory than a lot of MC "Jack Snow, Jon Snow's brother" fanfic out there
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