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doing a good job, yes but your translator app could use work maybe have someone proofread it before posting also didn't realize he was a transmigrator till much later in the story. A bit of background into that would be nice and please stop putting dead content at the end of each chapter, please other than that, I'm actually enjoying it keep it up
There is a lot of repetition of information that seems to just take up space and word count. The character names and genders also change often making it a bit difficult to follow. Once you get to ch 347 a ton of information is missing on how the ML got to where he is and previous information has now changed out of now where. Then the story starts to jump around a lot and things get very confusing. I sadly stopped reading at this point. It was manageable to get through the inconsistency to start but it became too messy to continue reading.
concept is interesting, but execution is lacking in some respects. things are ambiguously explained so there is no real solid understanding on abilities, skills, levels, etc.
Enjoy the ups and downs but the updates out of order are killing the mood and make it not even worth reading.
The author does not know how to update a story in order and somehow managed to put multiple chapter in a row out of order. The stories also feels like it has devolved weirdly since in the beginning there was a sinicql MC's with the story being about his rise to power from nothing, to a story of a kind guy stuck in a normal cultivation story seeking to cause problems in as many cities as humanity possible.
This one started out well, with an honestly awesome concept, and failed to maintain any consistent momentum. The pacing is wack with rewards that make no sense and power scalling that by the authors own rules doesn't add up. In one chapter, we are told that the 'throne' level is a shift in quality of existence and that below that level, they can kill you with a literal thought. less than 10 chapters later the mc is explained to have defeated a 'throne' offscreen whilst 5+ levels below that stage, and is rewarded out of nowhere with a weapon on par with the 'dominator' rank... the one above 'thrones'. or, in other words, at Level 5, he offscreen beat a level 1000 and was given a sword that one shots every boss, and this is glossed over like it makes 100% sense. in the same ark we are told that logan, the mc, has to choose one thousand of his troops to send to battle in a foreign plain and he is struggling with sending his best but being short of those warriors if he needs them, or sending a mix of warriors and weaklings in order to train the weak into competent people, but risk loosing some of them in the process. less than 10 chapters later, this is thrown out, and logan descends onto the field with 'hundreds of thousands of troops' without ever stating how he managed to take more troops, as 1 entry slot allows 1000 troops maximum. other times, supposedly clueless enemies who don't even know the mc existed, suddenly know everything about him after seeing him for the first time also, 99% of all characters are addressed as 'it' so you get times of, 'it said to it, that its followers would help it, if only it would help it to complete its plans' These and many more irregularities combined with the author seemingly having unending personal issues and constantly begging viewers in the notes for funds make for an all-around unpleasant reading experience in what could have been an epic tale about recovering what's taken from you and growing despite the odds stacked against you.
all good except for the side characters commentation. i mean half of the chapter goes to side character comments.
Author taking things slowly that annoy me. And lack of explanation many places
Overall an amazing novel with some refreshingly great world building. I typically read novels over 1000 chapters but decided to try this one out and was happy I did. It’s fun and deep in lore building. It’s evident that the author is still newer to writing but not bad enough to avoid the highs they create. I’d encourage people to give it a try and support a solid up and coming author.
Really great keep it up There is just this problem that somepart which is important to understand the world and the story is not given or not good enough ...it is not understandable.please work on that otherwise it's going great
Not even worth the time as a free novel tried forcing it to see if it improved but 60 some chapters in and still trash
too heavy for my pocket book.had a lot of potential. but when you are paying for a chapter that is just a forum conversation with no relevance you feel cheated. honestly the writer clearly doesn't value the reader. excessive unnecessary information or magically appearing information.
it good but he keeps scamming us he made a whole chapter about some stuff that's has nothing to do with the story but it's a good story
The problem is World building there are to many different types of power measurements and the author is referring to things he never mentioned and he writes a few filer with information that are not so important for the story
Except character designing, all other point of view is great. As for character design, all good except why the f, girls are simping for MC. That is poison in a good story.
honestly love the concept but seems unrefined and kinda confusing to understand .
I was read the raw for this novel after catching up. This was a very good novel but unfortunately starting from chapter 162 the author messed it up. It's as if another person is writing and some things are just introduced without explaining, MC gains rewards and strength without explaining why, I'm not sure how strong mc is and the enemies he's facing, then afterwards he gets more rewards that also aren't explained. Quite a bit is skipped over and it doesn't even explain how he understood the Perfect concept and became a mythical being. It's really a mess. This novel was very good up to that point, but after the chapter 'God Extra 3' this became trash
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7 to 8 coin chapters its not even worth fast passes let alone coins poor author web novel is strangling them after all this author kept giving 2 in 1 chapter but we novel splits it into 2-4 chapters to maximize coins and then considering most web novel AR full of filler who in there right mind would want to use coins or even fast passes truly sad good potential bad web novel
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It just doesn't make sense!. Many things are not explained and is the back story of the character and about how he got the ability. I kind of like the idea the author had but feels like the execution is bad. Hope it gets better and adds the missing details somehow.
The author keeps referencing to things that he never explained. Some knowledge from reincarnation? Never mentioned during the story development... Some reference of system drops? Never mentioned why is it different for him then to other players. I think he thought we will just know those background information that should be in the prolog or first chapter without him ever writing or publishing it. The story have potential but the immense lack of world and situation background drastically decrease it's quality. If those are fixed tho, there is potential...
doing a good job, yes but your translator app could use work maybe have someone proofread it before posting also didn't realize he was a transmigrator till much later in the story. A bit of background into that would be nice and please stop putting dead content at the end of each chapter, please other than that, I'm actually enjoying it keep it up
There is a lot of repetition of information that seems to just take up space and word count. The character names and genders also change often making it a bit difficult to follow. Once you get to ch 347 a ton of information is missing on how the ML got to where he is and previous information has now changed out of now where. Then the story starts to jump around a lot and things get very confusing. I sadly stopped reading at this point. It was manageable to get through the inconsistency to start but it became too messy to continue reading.
concept is interesting, but execution is lacking in some respects. things are ambiguously explained so there is no real solid understanding on abilities, skills, levels, etc.
Enjoy the ups and downs but the updates out of order are killing the mood and make it not even worth reading.
The author does not know how to update a story in order and somehow managed to put multiple chapter in a row out of order. The stories also feels like it has devolved weirdly since in the beginning there was a sinicql MC's with the story being about his rise to power from nothing, to a story of a kind guy stuck in a normal cultivation story seeking to cause problems in as many cities as humanity possible.
This one started out well, with an honestly awesome concept, and failed to maintain any consistent momentum. The pacing is wack with rewards that make no sense and power scalling that by the authors own rules doesn't add up. In one chapter, we are told that the 'throne' level is a shift in quality of existence and that below that level, they can kill you with a literal thought. less than 10 chapters later the mc is explained to have defeated a 'throne' offscreen whilst 5+ levels below that stage, and is rewarded out of nowhere with a weapon on par with the 'dominator' rank... the one above 'thrones'. or, in other words, at Level 5, he offscreen beat a level 1000 and was given a sword that one shots every boss, and this is glossed over like it makes 100% sense. in the same ark we are told that logan, the mc, has to choose one thousand of his troops to send to battle in a foreign plain and he is struggling with sending his best but being short of those warriors if he needs them, or sending a mix of warriors and weaklings in order to train the weak into competent people, but risk loosing some of them in the process. less than 10 chapters later, this is thrown out, and logan descends onto the field with 'hundreds of thousands of troops' without ever stating how he managed to take more troops, as 1 entry slot allows 1000 troops maximum. other times, supposedly clueless enemies who don't even know the mc existed, suddenly know everything about him after seeing him for the first time also, 99% of all characters are addressed as 'it' so you get times of, 'it said to it, that its followers would help it, if only it would help it to complete its plans' These and many more irregularities combined with the author seemingly having unending personal issues and constantly begging viewers in the notes for funds make for an all-around unpleasant reading experience in what could have been an epic tale about recovering what's taken from you and growing despite the odds stacked against you.
all good except for the side characters commentation. i mean half of the chapter goes to side character comments.
Author taking things slowly that annoy me. And lack of explanation many places
Overall an amazing novel with some refreshingly great world building. I typically read novels over 1000 chapters but decided to try this one out and was happy I did. It’s fun and deep in lore building. It’s evident that the author is still newer to writing but not bad enough to avoid the highs they create. I’d encourage people to give it a try and support a solid up and coming author.
Really great keep it up There is just this problem that somepart which is important to understand the world and the story is not given or not good enough ...it is not understandable.please work on that otherwise it's going great
Not even worth the time as a free novel tried forcing it to see if it improved but 60 some chapters in and still trash
too heavy for my pocket book.had a lot of potential. but when you are paying for a chapter that is just a forum conversation with no relevance you feel cheated. honestly the writer clearly doesn't value the reader. excessive unnecessary information or magically appearing information.
it good but he keeps scamming us he made a whole chapter about some stuff that's has nothing to do with the story but it's a good story
The problem is World building there are to many different types of power measurements and the author is referring to things he never mentioned and he writes a few filer with information that are not so important for the story
Except character designing, all other point of view is great. As for character design, all good except why the f, girls are simping for MC. That is poison in a good story.
honestly love the concept but seems unrefined and kinda confusing to understand .
I was read the raw for this novel after catching up. This was a very good novel but unfortunately starting from chapter 162 the author messed it up. It's as if another person is writing and some things are just introduced without explaining, MC gains rewards and strength without explaining why, I'm not sure how strong mc is and the enemies he's facing, then afterwards he gets more rewards that also aren't explained. Quite a bit is skipped over and it doesn't even explain how he understood the Perfect concept and became a mythical being. It's really a mess. This novel was very good up to that point, but after the chapter 'God Extra 3' this became trash
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ 7 to 8 coin chapters its not even worth fast passes let alone coins poor author web novel is strangling them after all this author kept giving 2 in 1 chapter but we novel splits it into 2-4 chapters to maximize coins and then considering most web novel AR full of filler who in there right mind would want to use coins or even fast passes truly sad good potential bad web novel
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ It just doesn't make sense!. Many things are not explained and is the back story of the character and about how he got the ability. I kind of like the idea the author had but feels like the execution is bad. Hope it gets better and adds the missing details somehow.
The author keeps referencing to things that he never explained. Some knowledge from reincarnation? Never mentioned during the story development... Some reference of system drops? Never mentioned why is it different for him then to other players. I think he thought we will just know those background information that should be in the prolog or first chapter without him ever writing or publishing it. The story have potential but the immense lack of world and situation background drastically decrease it's quality. If those are fixed tho, there is potential...
Too confusing. Poor story telling. Nothing more. Nothing less.